@ Miss naqvi
 

Yes, you are 100% right that we are here to learn. I repect you very much for your role in guiding callow aspirants. I will be looking forward for your reply. tc

As per my opinion following distribution will be most relevant to the topic. Now you can draw an outline in the light of this division and I sure it will be a balanced essay.

[B]Without independent truth-finding commission, accountability is unachievable?[/B]


[B]Importance of Accountability for smooth functioning of institutions 30%[/B]

[B]Functioning of accountability commission in Pakistan 20%[/B]
(Historical to recent efforts made in Pakistan for accountability and Fault lines behind poor performance of accountability Commission)

[B]Impact of existing accountability system 10%[/B]
(TI Reports, departmental corruption, etc. Here you will justify why we are in need of independent truth-finding commission? I mean to justify that existing system is flawed because don’t have independence.)

[B]How truth-finding commission is possible? 20%[/B]
(Ways for making independent commission as you have discussed under heading 4)

[B]Recommendation for independent truth-finding commission 20%[/B]
(As rishzzz has discussed under last heading "Recommendations to improve the aggravated crisis")


Now I am waiting for your outline in the light of above recommendations.

Need your remarks on essay outline.
 

Although I am late in asking for it but I request all seniors to please assess my essay outline and give me your valuable comments. I hope you would spare couple of minutes from THE busy hour :-)

Topic:Pakistan is rich in natural resources but very poor in their management.

Outline:

1.Introduction
2.Overview of natural resources and mismanagement
3.Current scenario in Pakistan
4.Natural resources of Pakistan[LIST][*]Water[*]Natural gas[*]Oil[*]Coal[*]Minerals[*]Precious and ornamental stones[*]Chemicals[/LIST]5.Related problems due to mismanagement and its:[LIST][*]Social effects[*]Economic effects[*]Political effects[*]Transportation industry problems[*]Industrial sector loss[*]Effects on foreign relations of pakistan[/LIST]6.Natural resources mismanagement at:
- Departmental level mismanagement[LIST][*]WAPDA[*]OGRA[*]Minerals extraction departments[/LIST]- Higher level mismanagement[LIST][*]Lack of legislation[*]Power politics[*]Problem of regionalism[*]Political influences[/LIST]- Individual level

7.Suggestions for improvement[LIST][*]Legislation for natural resource utilization[*]Separate departments for policy making[*]Media role in creating awareness[*]Fixing problem of regionalism[*]Privatization of departments[*]Special accountability bureaus to be installed for natural resources[/LIST]8.Analysis
9.Conclusion


Further my introduction paragraph starts like this:

"Life without conservation of natural resources would be like a deaf listening to music or a blind enjoying dance exhibition. Life of a modern man is directly or indirectly geared by natural resources in its various manifestations whether at consumer level, industry or means of transportation are concerned, no one can deny the fact that natural resources in its different manifestation are the ultimate driving force. Consumer using it to keep the pot boiling, industry needs it to maintain its production line while transport industry is using it to connect one end with other. As a result of this heavy dependence gave birth to the problem of resource management in itself and today a resource rich country lay exposed to the problems at social, economic, political fronts."

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Awaiting your kind response :-)

i think ur outline is good and it would fetch u good marks brother

please comment on it!!!!
 

can we include human resource in the natural resources of any nation?

yes i think human resource can be considered as natural resource

I have included human resource in natural resources of pakistan in my essay.will this create trouble for me?

[QUOTE=ali emraan;199973]I have included human resource in natural resources of pakistan in my essay.will this create trouble for me?[/QUOTE]

Ali,

Could you please let me know how you have justified human resource as natural resource? In what context you have tackle the point of human resource?

I would be happy to know.

Thanks in advance.

welcome!
i discussed human resource in the context of our brains, youth, cheap labour, and national ability to troubleshoot miscallenous constraints confronting our nation. i quoted iqbal
"zara nam ho to yeh mitti bohot zurkhaiz hai saaqi".

our people working abroad, our talent at the grass-root level. and the wastage of our children in the messy stuff of child labour.
Owing to the ill management , we are wasting the above mentioned human resource. once the mass 'I.Q' is utilized properly, the misery of our nation will vanish. if we ignore this arena of natural resources, all other resources of our nation would be futile.

[SIZE=4]your out line is good enough to impress the checker[/SIZE]