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I chose "Meaning and purpose of Education" and my outline went like this. Senior are requested to kindly asses,

Outline
1. Introduction.
*definition of education
* misinterpretation of education by the modern man.
2. Meaning of education.
i. source of religious and ethical knowledge
ii. source of worldly and professional knowledge.
3. Purpose of education.
i. Character Development.
ii. Personality grooming.
iii. Capacity Building.
iv. Preparation for future challenges.
v. Specialized Education.
4. Conclusion
i. Education; modus vivendy and modus operandy

I can roughly assume that it covered hardly 1700 to 2000 words, 17 pages
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I attempted the 10 topic. First I wrote outline for Gender Equality is a Myth topic. Then i prepared outline for Social Media. Turned out the outline for Social Media was better, so I wrote on that. Spent half an hour on this process and next 2 hours 15 minutes on the essay.

Here is the outline the way i recall:

- Defining relationships
- What does it mean to have real and sincere relationship
- What is Social Media (definition and evolution)
- Examples of modern platforms (Facebook, Twitter, Blogs, Instagram, Youtube)
- Relationships (explaining how real and sincere they can be)
Parents, siblings, neighbors, relatives, friends, life partner, children, colleagues
- Impact of social media (explaining how each weakens the bond of relationships)
Social outcast, lack of real life interactions, problems in developing EQ, adverse effects on health, irrational behavior, unable to predict consequences of activities on social media
- But social media is only 10 years old and still evolving
Online marriages, PR from major personalities and institutions, change takes time to adjust (took Industrial revolution 50 years and took UK 70 years to mitigate the resultant problems), a couple of more points
- Conclusion
Social Media indeed has ended real and sincere relationships but has ushered in a whole new era of cyber lifestyle that will take time in understanding. New form of relationships are now being developed through cyberspace which cannot be judged using older methods of measuring relationships.
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I think I should share the outline before it vanishes off my mind.

My outline which I can recall:

-introduction
-non tech age w/o internet and telephone
-sincere relationships
-slow pace of life
-arranged marriages
-love marriages
-postal letters
-romeo Juliet, heer ranjha, adam khan durkhanai

- telephone and mobile age
- internet age
- Internet relay chat (IRC) , msn , yahoo messengers
- Orkut
- Facebook 2004
- mark zukerberg idea of socializing online for educational institutions
- Twitter
- Focus on Facebook as it is the concerned social network
- Positive use of Facebook
- Negative use of Facebook
- Discrete private messaging and chat option - how it works
-Flirting with multiple people
-Effects on marital life of married couples
-divorce rate on the rise
- honor killings
- video chat
-dating culture promotion
- showing off amid blood relations on social networks
- mock up relationships
- greedy young hunters searching old but rich ladies
- old and rich ladies luring young men for physical needs
- time pass relationships
- cheating couples
-broken families
-Recommendations / cure
- nothing is good or bad but its use
- Educating people
- employing religious clerics to educate people
- strict control by parents
- controlled and monitored internet access
- early marriages, kill frustration
- Conclusion
(end on positive note)

My essay was small and people taunted me for writing such small essay. 2 pages for outline and 13 pages essay. I am satisfied with the essay and leaving the results on Allah.
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whoa! great! and you call it a small essay! small?
you have covered the topic from each aspect, kuch nahi chora.
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seniors i made 25 points in essay paper on meaning and purpose of education
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whoa! great! and you call it a small essay! small?
you have covered the topic from each aspect, kuch nahi chora.
Thanks azure
Believe me I wrote more than this which is not covered in outline but still I was not able to fill pages like people did and some even attached extra sheets.

total 15 pages which I filled . 2 outline and 13 essay.

Azure Share your outline if possible.
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seniors i made 25 points in essay paper on meaning and purpose of education
do you remember those 25 points?
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My outline was like this,a relatively short essay i think...(one or two forgotten )

Introduction
What is communication?
What is Modern Day communication?
What is Relationship?
What is True Relationship?
What are Social Networks?
Role Of Facebook
Facebook Pages Creating hatred
-Pages related to Sports
-Pages related to Specific Countries
-Pages related to different parties
Role of Twitter
Role Of Google+
Role of Orkut
Role of Stumbleupon
Role of Messangers
Role of skype
How they Destroying Relationships
Fake Profiles/Accounts
Zero in real life hero on social networks
Mostly Pre-mature\Teens\Youth Minds on Social Networks
Video chat Scandals
Creating sense of jealousy among FB users(recent study)
Online scams
People are more intersted in status updates then work
Sunny-side of Social Networks
Conclusion.
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Good job done. I liked your moderate approach in the conclusion.
Thank you. Things just clicked this way and I kept adding them up to make sense out of it. Since I am attempting British History, i got to know more about Industrial Revolution and used it as illustration. I also visited the old news when videos of cyber cafes were released online about couples and some of the girls had committed suicide as a result (future consequences) and a recent story where a mother in US mistakenly killed her son who disturbed her while she was playing Farmville.
But i guess being a blogger and social media enthusiast i am better able to understand since i have faced and mitigated some of the problems that have been listed on my outline.
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Thanks azure
Believe me I wrote more than this which is not covered in outline but still I was not able to fill pages like people did and some even attached extra sheets.

total 15 pages which I filled . 2 outline and 13 essay.

Azure Share your outline if possible.
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Your essay outline is attractive enough to distract the paper checker from your essay length!
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Unlike you, my whole essay circled around the topic only ...i dont remember the exact outline, but it started with the intro, explaining relationships and why do we need relationships etc. Then how relationships used to be like in olden times, how they underwent change with passage of time and especially after invasion of modern technology. Relationships need need time to grow but today our relationships start from accept friend click and end with unfriend click . umm then social site working, their merits(exposure to wide world, killing of boredon, info plus edu) , demerits ( people hide their identity, lies, vulnerability to cyber crimes). Conclusion. jis meyn i concluded k seeking sincere relationships on social sites is not a smart choice aur though technology has brought change in our lives but yet standard for making relationships should be that same old i.e careful selection, give it time to grow, see that it passes tests of time etc.
i filled 20 pages and my writing is small...lekin likha bs yehi sb kuch hai
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