i attempted this essay War on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights

i forgot the outline but want to ask a question i talked about international countries like in srilanka, bangladesh the human rights violation the overall essay was good but i forget to mention zerb-e-azb in my recommendation i quoted about national action plan but forgot to quote zerb-e-azb is there any serious threat ? for my essay ?

i wrote the whole essay on 6 pages excluding outline

I attempted this essay. Here goes my outline

I may disapprove of what you say, but I will defend to death your right to say
1. Thesis Statement:
• In order to create a peaceful world, we must pay respect to the difference of opinion
2. Executive Summary of the essay
3. Significance of the issue
• Importance of one’s right to say in today’s world of intolerance.
4. What is right to say?
• Right to say as a freedom of speech
• Right to say as a basic human right
• Islamic injunctions
• UN Charter of human rights and right to say
5. Significance of protecting others’ right to say
• Secure others’ rights and get your rights secured
• Mandatory to achieve co existence
• Examples from past
i. Orthodox Church
ii. Arab before Islam
6. Problems due to insecurity of the right to say
• Clash of civilizations
• Frustration
• Terrorism
7. Policy Recommendation
• Difference of opinion must be respected in order to achieve peace
• Psychological Aspect
8. Limitation of Right to say
• Freedom of speech and Hate Speech
9. Conclusion

[QUOTE=saadiii;875917]I attempted this essay. Here goes my outline

I may disapprove of what you say, but I will defend to death your right to say
1.Thesis Statement:
•In order to create a peaceful world, we must pay respect to the difference of opinion
2.Executive Summary of the essay
3.Significance of the issue
•Importance of one’s right to say in today’s world of intolerance.
4.What is right to say?
•Right to say as a freedom of speech
•Right to say as a basic human right
•Islamic injunctions
•UN Charter of human rights and right to say
5.Significance of protecting others’ right to say
•Secure others’ rights and get your rights secured
•Mandatory to achieve co existence
•Examples from past
i.Orthodox Church
ii.Arab before Islam
6.Problems due to insecurity of the right to say
•Clash of civilizations
•Frustration
•Terrorism
7.Policy Recommendation
•Difference of opinion must be respected in order to achieve peace
•Psychological Aspect
8.Limitation of Right to say
•Freedom of speech and Hate Speech
9.Conclusion[/QUOTE]
Beautifully crafted outline

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[QUOTE=supergenius;875911]@mujtaba17
I wrote the hierarchy one, but for the topic you wrote i had an outline totally different from your's. I don't think we should pour all the technology into an essay rather we should analyse as much implications of such a topic and bring forward some recommendations.

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i guess there is a difference in writing an essay from the comfort of your home and ON spot at a css exam :dd, anyways i did suggest ways to improve the technology, but all i'm saying is that i went against the topic, with logical arguments, Lets see what happens now :)

saadii, you wrote a pretty decent outline.. Did you pass the essay exam?

@motivated

Did you pass the essay exam?

what should be the min length?

what was the topic

can you share your essay?

I selected the first one, but unfortunately failed to pass it.