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Old Saturday, February 11, 2012
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Default I am still alive
I am still alive.
Lot of accidents in my life
Corrupt people have made me wise
No emotion, in my heart lie.
Tell me
How can I survive?
But I am still alive.
Lot of people daily die
Venal persons have opened mouth for bribe
Darkness everywhere, of this night
Tell me
How can I survive?
But I am still alive.
But I am still alive.
(my poem : )
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I am still alive.
Lot of accidents in my life
Corrupt people have made me wise
No emotion, in my heart lie.
Tell me
How can I survive?
But I am still alive.
Lot of people daily die
Venal persons have opened mouth for bribe
Darkness everywhere, of this night
Tell me
How can I survive?
But I am still alive.
But I am still alive.
(my poem : )
Good effort.. But there are still mistakes in ur poem.. Keep trying and u will definitely improve.. Inshallah.. Stay Blessed..
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