no jis ko aap azeem samajhti hein woh adnaan hey

and plz spell it Ghayas not Ghiyas.....

Bohat shukaria aap ka miss erum

yeh tou aap ki kadardani hai warna banda is qabil kahan

Thanks Miss Erum,

It was all joke,

my pleasure

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*"Learn alll the Rules so that u know how to Break them ...

*if Your Words are not SUCH Powerful as Your Silence Then "Shut-up" !

is situation pe ek aur shair bhi fit ata he

us ne haathon pe mehndi lagai hue he
Hum ne us ki doli sajai hue he
hamein pata tha wo bewafa nikle gi
is liye hum ne us ki choti behn phansai hue he

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Long, long afterward, in an oak
I found the arrow, still unbroke;
And the song, from beginning to end,
I found again in the heart of a friend

Asslam-o-Alikum,,
Mr Adnan,, baht nice thread hy... aur baht hi umda Shair hy..
comic discussion is pah kafi ho chuki hy,,, aur sab nay baht umda kaha hy especially,,,
" MERA KHAYAL HY K MUHABBAT AKHRI WALI SY HI HOTI HY''

yeh to hona hi hota hy,, akhri wali sy muhabbat karna majboori hoti hy,, aur pahli wali say na karna b majboori hoti hy...


Now some serious discussion,,,
yeh shair baht philosophical hy,,, aur iss shair ki depth ko wo log samj sakty hain ,, jinhon ny Bano Qudsia ki Raja Gidh pari ho....

Bai yeh aj kal ki so called muhabbat ka almiyah hy,, k log roty b rahty hain,, aur nai nai manzalain b talash karty rahty hain

IS INTAZAR MAIN NA JANY KIS KIS SY PAYAR KIA..

yeh tab hi hota k jab koi apny beloved ki image kisi dosaaray main talash karta hy... that's simply the escape from reallity....

But personally i m against this theory,,, yeh dosron k sath sath apny app ko b dhoka dainy wali bat hoti hy....

JO MAJOOD HY WO FACT HY,,, JO NAHI USSAY BHOOL JAO

SAIRA

Bdla jo wqt gehri rfaqat bdil gai
sorij dhala tu saey ki sooret bdil gai
kuch der tk main us ki zrort bna rha
phr yun hua k us ki zroret bdil gai

مجھ کو دُشمن کے ارادوں پہ بھی پیار آتا ہے۔
تیری اُلفت نے محبت مری عادت کر دی۔

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"Remeber that the most beautiful things in the world are the most USELESS; Peacock and Lilies, for example." Amn Aziz Khan

sada lefzoon mein keh saktay hain k " ab main malang ho gaya hoon" :-)

haqeqat k qreeb aik khobsoorat sher waqai mohabbat woh jazba hay jo dushman say bhi qareeb kar deeta hay ...insan badal jata ..aur waqai itna k us ko dushman bhi dost lagney lagta hay ....

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Kami kis shae ki hai tere khazaane me mere Allah
Jhukaa ke sar jo maangun teri rehmat mil hi jaaegi...

uski hasrat hai jisse dil se mita be na sakon
dhundne nikla hun usey jisse paa be na sakon

Miss erum(poetess of the forum) app key poetry mein kuch apneyat sey hay parh kar dill ko lagey
essey leyeah mein request karoon ga kay SHAMA _E_MEHFIL janab Erum Khan kay samnay rakhey jay ta kay woh apna kalam suna sakien

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"Who do many calculations are victorious"