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ya Rub!zamana mujh ko mittata hai kis liay
loh-e jahan pe hurf-e muqarer nahi hoon main
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miss pressy girl app ka shair to gazab ka tha ke samgh hi nahi aya(kia persion main tha).zara matlab samgha dein mughay meri to samagh se abhit tha

and mr kinggggg app kaise hain waise app baitbazi main hain kuopn bhool jate hian shair alif pe end hota hai app hay se start ker deite ho . kuch to khayal kerien loaggon ke zauq ka beechare kaise berdasht kerte hoan ge k shaie alif ke bajie hay se start ho gaya

hop u both dont mind that

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noon...

na shikayaten na gilaa kare
koi aisaa shakhs hua kare
jo mere liye hii saja kare
mujh hii se baaten kiyaa kare


kabhii roye jaaye vo bepanaah
kabhii betahaashaa udaas ho
kabhii chupake chupake dabe qadam
mere piichhe aa kar hansa kare


merii qurbaten meri chaahaten
koi yad kare qadam qadam
main taviil safar mein huun agar
meri vaapasi ki duaa kare

ye...
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youn meray qatal ka tha tergi main ahtamam
barq khanjar ki jo chamki,dost pehchanay gaye

>> yeh

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ye mojazaa bhi muhabbat kabhi dikhaaye mujhe
ke sang tujh pe gire aur zakhm aye mujhe

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Ah! kal dard uttha dil main keh rakha hum ko
junbish e cheen e jabeen e but e cheen e be chain


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Default continuing from... yeh

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ye mojazaa bhi muhabbat kabhi dikhaaye mujhe
ke sang tujh pe gire aur zakhm aye mujhe

ye...

yeh zaalim zamana dekhaey ga kia kia..!
teri ankh bhi aaj num daiktay hain...!!

>> yeh
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mr. Khalid! ur "sher" is ending with "noon" not "yeh"


NA ho ya Rub! kabhi takmeel mairay iss iraday ki
keh ab turk e mohabbat ka irada ker raha hoon main

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prissgirl..! thx for correction

nikalna khuld say aadum ka suntey aey they laikin...
bahot be-abroo ho ker terey kuchey say hum niklay

>> aab tou confirm " yeh"
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ye daulat bhi le lo, ye shuhrat bhi le lo
bhale cheen lo mujhse meri javani
magar mujhko lauta do bachpan ka saavan
wo kaghaz ki kashti, wo barish ka paani


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