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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Thursday, December 06, 2012
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Posted By zuhaib ahmed
Read this: ...

Read this:

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compulsory-subjects/english-precis-composition/grammar-section/71066-how-improve-your-english.html
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Thursday, December 06, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By zuhaib ahmed
Good work, Indeed. :) I expected little more. :sad

Good work, Indeed. :) I expected little more. :sad
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Thursday, December 06, 2012
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Views: 279,906
Posted By zuhaib ahmed
Dear Faisal, You word count is 723. :ohmy: ...

Dear Faisal,

You word count is 723. :ohmy:

If only you have written it as an expansion. Please, lessen the word count. :)
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Thursday, December 06, 2012
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Views: 279,906
Posted By Ahmed Faisal
Need hard work.. .

Need hard work.. .
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Wednesday, December 05, 2012
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Posted By Ahmed Faisal
your this paragraph seems relevant and not the...

your this paragraph seems relevant and not the rest of the draft. Before writing you need to understand the meaning of proverb etc without which everything is just futile.
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Wednesday, December 05, 2012
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Views: 279,906
Posted By Ahmed Faisal
Miss aisha, before i check your draft, you should...

Miss aisha, before i check your draft, you should re-check it yourself and see if there is any problem. Because after cursory look I found many errors.
Forum: Essays Wednesday, December 05, 2012
Replies: 22
Views: 6,129
Posted By saherk
********@yahoo.com dear you can search my...

********@yahoo.com
dear you can search my essay outline on my profile... i have only posted one outline on democracy..... as well as you can send directly your essay on my i d.... i will tell you...
Forum: Essays Wednesday, December 05, 2012
Replies: 22
Views: 6,129
Posted By Nisar Ali
Dear Aishamemona, 2013 is last attempt. In 2010...

Dear Aishamemona, 2013 is last attempt. In 2010 and 2012, I have failed in essay. So the experience of failure has made me realize that instead of going for on the spot writing of essay, one should...
Forum: Essays Wednesday, December 05, 2012
Replies: 22
Views: 6,129
Posted By saherk
you must keep practice of paragraph writng first...

you must keep practice of paragraph writng first then you should move towards essy....you should try to write a paragraph on corruption i will check it out.... for a sample of an outline check my...
Forum: Essays Tuesday, December 04, 2012
Replies: 22
Views: 6,129
Posted By hammad2000
I think good attempt

I think good attempt
Forum: Essays Tuesday, December 04, 2012
Replies: 22
Views: 6,129
Posted By saherk
you should pay a great attention to coherence...

you should pay a great attention to coherence ..... by using transitions....
secondly spelling mistakes will detract the checker pen, while giving marks to you
the most important thing is that...
Forum: Essays Tuesday, December 04, 2012
Replies: 22
Views: 6,129
Posted By Nisar Ali
So, Miss Aishamemona, your topic must have been...

So, Miss Aishamemona, your topic must have been socio-economic problems of Pakistan, which was, for some uncertain reason, not mentioned, I think. The first para then should, by way of introduction...
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Monday, December 03, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Ahmed Faisal
I have checked your expansion and found that: ...

I have checked your expansion and found that:
1. Your skills of structuring the sentences need to improve.
2. You have rarely used transitional words.
3. whether there is a problem of grammar or...
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Monday, December 03, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Ahmed Faisal
As you can not solve the mathematical question...

As you can not solve the mathematical question without knowing the formulas. similarly, You can not even read or write simple English without knowing grammar, so there is a reciprocal relationship...
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Monday, December 03, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By seher bano
@ aishamemona you have written this text in a...

@ aishamemona
you have written this text in a good way. But let me tell you one thing, do not overtly criticize the government or bureaucrats. Always sugar coat your criticize. you have frequently...
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Sunday, December 02, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Da Skeptic
You are just using different expressions and...

You are just using different expressions and changing the words time and again but it won't do because your grammar skills seem weak.. First try to improve your grammar and then try writing any...
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Friday, November 30, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Ahmed Faisal
You have once again committed the same mistakes...

You have once again committed the same mistakes that have been pinpointed by me in the above post. your this draft has still many errors. let us take one example:

not only...but also( it is a...
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Friday, November 30, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By shahreenaa
Political will power and pragmetic implementation...

Political will power and pragmetic implementation of policies
Making policies has never been the plight of our government. It is the lack of implementation which keeps the wheel of problems moving....
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Friday, November 30, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Da Skeptic
Exclamation Usman Khalid bhai, Faisal bhai, Xuhaib bhai and...

Usman Khalid bhai, Faisal bhai, Xuhaib bhai and other dear members, it needs pruning.. :)
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Friday, November 30, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Da Skeptic
Both the first one and the last one are correct.....

Both the first one and the last one are correct.. Prefer the first one..
You can't use 'is' for tools, as the noun 'tools' is a plural noun.. ;)
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Friday, November 30, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Ahmed Faisal
Making policies has never been the plight of our...

Making policies has never been the plight of our government. It is the lack of implementation which keeps the wheel of problems moving. Today our government not only needs to take initiatives and...
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Thursday, November 29, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Ahmed Faisal
Well, i would like it to be like that...i have...

Well, i would like it to be like that...i have corrected some of your mistakes. you need to work on your punctuations,articles, structure of your sentences and a little bit focus on grammar....
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Thursday, November 29, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By Da Skeptic
Good.. :) There were some mistakes. I have...

Good.. :) There were some mistakes. I have pointed them out and have made corrections as well.. :)
Forum: Expansion/Paragraph Monday, November 19, 2012
Replies: 1,123
Views: 279,906
Posted By zuhaib ahmed
These are only 181 words. Please, expand it more....

These are only 181 words. Please, expand it more. Word count for expansion is 250-300. It is better if you expand it first. Then, a member can guide and suggest you well.

If only you understand...
Forum: Comprehension Wednesday, September 26, 2012
Replies: 75
Views: 52,573
Posted By SADIA SHAFIQ
Post Take part in this section of grammar!

Q.3. Read the following passage and answer the questions that follow. Use your own language. (20)

Human beings are afraid of death just as children feel afraid of darkness. The fear of darkness...
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