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I didn't write the title on my essay too. Everything else was close to perfect, the outline was brief but clearly conveys the topic (social media). But this blunder is giving me panic attacks lately.
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Your Essay is Pass... Really. Because I studied your outline. It is commendable outline. My CSS-14 and PMS-14 Essays were Pass.
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Ejazew Bhai dontworry. U can pass paper provided your essay has quality and relevent material.
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Hi, Aik Admi

I didn't write the title on my essay too. Everything else was close to perfect, the outline was brief but clearly conveys the topic (social media). But this blunder is giving me panic attacks lately.
Please dont worry, examiner is not this narrow to evaluate your performance of such neglibile omission, you will get through provided you have baked something required by him. Dont panic, concentrate on rest of the papers
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kindly evaluate my essay outline and suggestions are more than welcome
OUTLINE
1) Introduction:
The act of Forgiveness is a virtue par excellence as it is natural to commit a mistake but to condone over such a mistake is an ethereal trait.

2) Why do human beings tend to commit an error?
a) Human being is not a perfect creature
b) At times human actions are driven by whims, desires and passions
c) the vicissitudes of life are not entirely in control of humans
d) Conflict of thoughts can lead to probable error

3) Why it is hard to forgive?
a) Humans do not forget easily the harm done to themselves
b) They believe in eye for an eye principle
c) Driven by selfishness to secure self interest

4) What benefits do the act of forgiveness yield?
a) It leads to the inner peace since it is a larger than life philosophy
b) It begets Tolerance (eye for an eye would make whole world blind)
c) Promotion of diversity based on compassion and emphatic feelings
d) It leads to the idea of reforming

5) To what extent Forgiveness should be permissible ?
: The Life of Prophet Mohammad (P.B.U.H) is the ideal to measure the virtue of forgiveness.

6) Conclusion
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Development is about transforming the lives of people, not just transforming economies (PMS-2015)
1. Introduction:
1.1. Human development is the primary catalyst for attaining secondary objects
1.2. Human development must be the objective of all other developments
1.3. Prosperity and true development go side by side
2. Development is a vast term it includes:
2.1. Economic development
2.2. Social development
2.3. Political development
3. How development can transform the lives of people?
3.1. Availability of basic necessities of life
3.2. Education---a prerequisite
3.3. Employment---need of the time
3.4. Equal distribution of resources
3.5. Social justice and rule of law
4. What is the impact of true development?
4.1. Root out backwardness of people
4.2. Root out looming demographic disasters of people
4.3. Attain self-sufficiency , socio-economic self-reliance in the comity of nations
4.4. Peace of mind
5. What is the pragmatic solution to attain true development
5.1. Good governance
5.2. Devolution of power
5.3. Truly implement sustainable and millennium development goals
5.4. Mass and electronic media can play a vital role in human development
6. Conclusion
Though I am not appeared in PMS,just attempt it for practice please evaluate it.
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kindly evaluate my essay outline and suggestions are more than welcome
OUTLINE
1) Introduction:
The act of Forgiveness is a virtue par excellence as it is natural to commit a mistake but to condone over such a mistake is an ethereal trait.

2) Why do human beings tend to commit an error?
a) Human being is not a perfect creature
b) At times human actions are driven by whims, desires and passions
c) the vicissitudes of life are not entirely in control of humans
d) Conflict of thoughts can lead to probable error

3) Why it is hard to forgive?
a) Humans do not forget easily the harm done to themselves
b) They believe in eye for an eye principle
c) Driven by selfishness to secure self interest

4) What benefits do the act of forgiveness yield?
a) It leads to the inner peace since it is a larger than life philosophy
b) It begets Tolerance (eye for an eye would make whole world blind)
c) Promotion of diversity based on compassion and emphatic feelings
d) It leads to the idea of reforming

5) To what extent Forgiveness should be permissible ?
: The Life of Prophet Mohammad (P.B.U.H) is the ideal to measure the virtue of forgiveness.

6) Conclusion
Your outline is not clear.there is coherence but not proper
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  1. 1 intro
    2* human being commit error because it is their nature
    * through ignorance
    * through hastiness
    * through hamartia
    1 when became angry
    2 or feel pride
    3 or prejudice
    4 or arrogant
    3 why humans don't forgive others
    * because either they are selfish
    * self indulgent
    * myopic
    * callous
    * or neurotic
    4 conclusion
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Development is about transforming the lives of people, not just transforming economies (PMS-2015)
1. Introduction:
1.1. Human development is the primary catalyst for attaining secondary objects
1.2. Human development must be the objective of all other developments
1.3. Prosperity and true development go side by side
2. Development is a vast term it includes:
2.1. Economic development
2.2. Social development
2.3. Political development
3. How development can transform the lives of people?
3.1. Availability of basic necessities of life
3.2. Education---a prerequisite
3.3. Employment---need of the time
3.4. Equal distribution of resources
3.5. Social justice and rule of law
4. What is the impact of true development?
4.1. Root out backwardness of people
4.2. Root out looming demographic disasters of people
4.3. Attain self-sufficiency , socio-economic self-reliance in the comity of nations
4.4. Peace of mind
5. What is the pragmatic solution to attain true development
5.1. Good governance
5.2. Devolution of power
5.3. Truly implement sustainable and millennium development goals
5.4. Mass and electronic media can play a vital role in human development
6. Conclusion
Though I am not appeared in PMS,just attempt it for practice please evaluate it.
Heading 4 Is not needed here as you are discussing how development can transform the human.lives in heading 3 .... there must be a heading regarding transforming economies , why it is not transforming lives of people, difference between.economic development and true human development etc
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1-To err is hum;to forgive, divine.
2-Education is not preparation of life, education is life itself.
3-Social media is the ultimate equalizer. It gives a voice and platform to anyone willing to engage.
4-A feminist is anyone who recognizes equality and full humanity of men and women.
5 Development is about transforming the lives of people, not just transforming the economies.
6- Literature is thought provoking; it allows us to raise questions and gives us a deeper understanding of issues and situations.
7- Urdu is our national language and its use is vital for our progress.
PLEASE SOME ONE SHARE THE OUTLINE OF SIXTH TOPIC

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