Originally Posted by symbol of hardwork

i request to moderator and seniors of this forum,please check my writing,,,its very weak,and give me some tips how i improve it..... here it is

Lake of implementation in our education system
It is admited truth that education is a key of any progressing(not processing but developing) country.It is very important for every one,either it is social,cultural,or religous.People of any country who are well educated can keep pace with developing country(what you want to say here?).It is the (very root means?),which must be well nurished,so that it can make the country strong.
As a matter of fact,our education system needs improvement,therefore, trained (skilled) teachers,advanced syllabus and well organized (effective) strategies should be introduced,but the real problem is that no(lake) implementaion.There are certain projects that waits too long to implement it (it .. not needed here).In pakistan,higher education standards are good but middle and primary is little worse(poor),due to less atention of official(concerned) authorities.The real culprit is the policy for not hiring teachers on basis of merit.
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee check it...awaiting for ur precious suggestions.