"The impossible is often the untried"

Nothing in the world seems impossible for the people who passionately believes in the success. It is lacking in the personality of a person to give up by tagging it impossible or not achievable. It is the belief and untiring efforts which demarcate the line between impossible and possible. It requires an optimistic approach and a clear vision. Definitely, it must be difficult to achieve, but nothing is impossible as the word itself says i-m-possible. One of the greatest personality seen in the history of the world is Nelson Mandela. He sacrificed his life for a noble cause of equality for the black community in one of the most rigid caste community of the whole world. As a consequence, he was jailed for 28 years and tortured. But his everlasting effort paved the way towards the success and the rights were recognized by the then government. If Mandela though it as impossible, the blacks would have still been neglected and denied of their rights. As he himself said, "It always sees impossible until it is done". The world has progressed manifold. All the inventions were a result of an impossible aim, directed towards its unrealistic achievement. Nobody could imagine in the 18th century that a machine name as Airplane will be able to fly, but 19th century saw flying planes. Similarly, the people wouldn't have thought that man will be able to walk on the moon. But the Appolo Mission resulted in a new history making. It required an untiring effort by NASA to accomplish this objective. They weren't able to hit the target on the first attempt, Appolo 1 blew on the launch, but they again tried and Niel Armstrong became the first man to walk on the Moon. In a nutshell, nothing is impossible in this world to achieve. It only requires the effort and the will of the person.

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Short essay should be written in a continuous paragraph or should be written in 2 to 3 paragraphs?

Expension
 

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Spare the rod, spoil the child
The saying holds the reality in life. If one does not punish a child from doing wrong, then one ultimately cause to spoil a child. However, parents and teachers both contribute a lot in the personal development of a child. It is alarming, if parents/teachers are not vigilant on the activities of a child. If a child is involved in doing something wrong, then it is an onus of the guider to with strain him/her from being faulty. The point to gist is that, a child is uncertain about the things; if he/she gets indulge in bad activities, then he/she should be safe from being spoiled.
As mentioned above, it is the responsibility of both parents and teachers to keep a child in their control. However, to be lenient and affable with child must be kept in their top priority, but it does not mean to abet them in negative activities. Where ever it is required, a child must physically punish. Indeed, a mischievous child turns out to be a vicious man that further induces a miserable society. Our society is rampant with black sheep that of course neither nourished nor guided properly. The young generation is undoubtedly indulged in doing numerous fierce attempts, which present lack in their moral growth. Moreover, the corporeal punishment causes a child to be frightened in doing unethical deeds. So, along moderate and amiable attitude the physical punishment must be given when needed. In addition, Islam also emphasizes on giving physical punishment to one who incurs the misdeed. How verily it is pinpointed: [As for] the thief, the male and the female, amputate their hands in recompense for what they committed as a deterrent [punishment] from Allah. And Allah is exalted in Might and Wise (Surat AlMa'idah, Ayat 38 - 39). In nutshell, a child can be prohibited and halted from immoral activities by physical punishment.
In addition, a child is a father of a nation. If a child is led on the course of immorality, then, how a child will lead or represent his/her nation? Indeed, an unethical child can never be caused in the prosperity, but ill fare. The apex point is to focus on the better nourishment of a child. Parents/teachers should not only teach a child the human values but also punish him/her on illegitimate doers. Summing up, a child must be punished in order to not suffer their personal development when he/she does wrong.

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[QUOTE=Professor SRX;800287]Short essay should be written in a continuous paragraph or should be written in 2 to 3 paragraphs?[/QUOTE]

It should be in three or four paragraphs of 250-300 words

Rome was not built in a day.
 

Rome was the tremendous enchanted land from where history of success starts.Great challenges,hurdles and gigantic enemies faced by the Romans but,strong faith,unity,harmony and persistency made able to the people of Rome strong that they conquered Greece and,also enabled them social walfare according to thier will.Today,Roman law and some Roman classical trends and customs followed by myriad developed states.The secret behind this godspeed ending was not the game of one day but entirely devotion of hardwork and consistency with the love of land and,people proved them as a winner not for oneself but whole. society'welfare.The said proved clearly implies the ceaseless efforts for determined goals is indispensable.Marginalised goals must be set in the proper priorities.To quit at the middle stage always ensues failures and continuous effort confers the achievement.


Please senior member and CSPs check my introductory page of mentioned proverb is right or is there flaws to comprehend the topic.And kindly pin point my grammatical mistakes as well.
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[QUOTE=Magus007;857430]Rome was the tremendous enchanted land from where history of success starts.Great challenges,hurdles and gigantic enemies faced by the Romans but,strong faith,unity,harmony and persistency made able to the people of Rome strong that they conquered Greece and,also enabled them social walfare according to thier will.Today,Roman law and some Roman classical trends and customs followed by myriad developed states.The secret behind this godspeed ending was not the game of one day but entirely devotion of hardwork and consistency with the love of land and,people proved them as a winner not for oneself but whole. society'welfare.The said proved clearly implies the ceaseless efforts for determined goals is indispensable.Marginalised goals must be set in the proper priorities.To quit at the middle stage always ensues failures and continuous effort confers the achievement.


Please senior member and CSPs check my introductory page of mentioned proverb is right or is there flaws to comprehend the topic.And kindly pin point my grammatical mistakes as well.
Thank you:))[/QUOTE]
Expansions are no more part of syllabus.

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On Tolerance
Enduring anything that is against the desire of human nature is tolerance. However, there are not many people who possess the quality of showing resistance to what is normally against the wish of human nature. For instance, a small chit chat between a couple in a public library startles readers around to glare at them for disturbing silence; but who knows, they might be making inquiry about a particular book from each other. This is the reason why people know a very short list of people having the quality of tolerance. Those who have such ability not only become successful in life but create history sometimes. Nelson Mandela tolerated the hardships hurled at him during his 27 years in prison. As a result, his endeavours liberated the Black Africans from slavery when he forgave the Whites for their injustice towards the Black Africans. This was only possible due to his ability of tolerance. Similarly, many prophets bore difficulties at the hands of their opponents, but ultimately they succeeded in their aims of preaching their religions due to the ability of tolerance. The most significant example is that of prophet Muhammad [p.b.u.h] who faced many hardships at the hands of pagans, but eventually he accomplished the task of preaching Islam by tolerating every difficulty in his life. The list of people is not limited to those who are known in the history books, rather there are people around us who tolerate many bad patches in their daily lives, and it is due to them that life is more beautiful than it could have been otherwise. In contrast, the wars, crimes, corruption, feuds, etc., going around are due to the decrease in the ability to tolerate. However, the solution is to bear the very thing that annoys you, i.e. tolerate it, and fortunately, this solution is taught by almost every culture and religion of the world. One just have to tolerate, success and beautiful life will surely follow as a consequence.

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[QUOTE=imam bux mangi;748834]Hope is the buoy of life

Hope is a shining star that keeps the life illuminated with its unabated brightness. Many times in the life, topsy-turvy events and tragedies take away the cheerfulness and glamour of life and leave behind gloominess. In order to reinvigorate life and bring back the lost laughter, it is important to let the element of "hope" come into play. The notion of hope is compared to the driving force which let the ship of life sailing smoothly even during hard times. It is this very element of hope which can [B]reenergize[/B] the inner soul and bring back the lost strength to face the challenges of life head on and keep the cycle of life running even when the road of life is bumpy

As it is quite often quoted that life is not a bed of roses, it must be realized that only a strong soul can separate out thorns from these roses and make the bed of life [B]comfortable.[/B] It is the ingredient of hope which needs to be added in the obfuscated mix of life that tests the capability of human souls to fight life's extreme situations and then make quick fixes to get back to normal. It cannot be denied that human beings cannot overcome life-difficulties by relying only on the inner soul, let it absorb the "H" word and fight against the monsters challenging the strengths of souls. Though, hope is the buoy of life besides internal it needs a continuous push from some external forces too that can create a[B] conductive[/B] environment for it to come into play

Hence, it can be concluded that hope is a key driving-force of life and needs uninterrupted support from inner soul and a [B]favourable[/B] environment to strike the chord of life and let it play the music of happiness and felicity
Minor Mistakes Are Highlighted:
1. Energize at the place of Re-energize
2. Comfortably
3. too, that can create a conductive environment
4. Favorable
Overall, you have good grammar and ample amount of worthy expressions.
It is my personal opinion and opinion can be disagreed.

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