[QUOTE=Anum Bashir;456487]call no man happy till he is dead

all i can think about this topic is chacha ghalib ka shair :)
qaid e hayat o band e gham asal main dono aik hain
mout sy pehly admi gham sy nijat pay kiun!!!! :D[/QUOTE]

Zaberdust, A good one. It speaks the very Topic.

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;456594][CENTER][SIZE="4"][B][FONT="Courier New"][COLOR="DarkRed"]Do write on it!

Prosperity Make Friends-Adversity Tries Them. :[/COLOR][/FONT][/B][/SIZE][/CENTER][/QUOTE]

“Prosperity makes friends, adversity tries them”

It is a universal truth that when one has success, power, money and everything so everyone tries to make friendship and maintain relationships but when one has none of the above things everyone leaves him. As Adolf Hitler says that keep on working hard regardless of result when you are successful everyone follow you but when you in dark your own shadow will leave you.

In our daily life, we usually see that when any person gets success we make friendship with him because we have certain interests but when he comes in hot water we usually ignore him. Thomas Hobbes says that man by nature is selfish.

Saddam Hussain former despotic ruler of Iraq, when he was under the patronage of America he enjoyed a lot even his rival country Iran recognized him but when he came in adversity his own generals left him in the lurch.

The recent Arab Spring, which was occurred in Tunisia, Libya, Egypt. When their leaders were prosperous every country tried to make friendship with them but once they came in adversity no one helped them.
:thinking

[QUOTE=kashifali85;456666]“Prosperity makes friends, adversity tries them”

It is a universal truth that when one has success, power, money and everything so everyone tries to make friendship and maintain relationships but when one has none of the above things everyone leaves him. As Adolf Hitler says that keep on working hard regardless of result when you are successful everyone follow you but when you in dark your own shadow will leave you.

In our daily life, we usually see that when any person gets success we make friendship with him because we have certain interests but when he comes in hot water we usually ignore him. Thomas Hobbes says that man by nature is selfish.

Saddam Hussain former despotic ruler of Iraq, when he was under the patronage of America he enjoyed a lot even his rival country Iran recognized him but when he came in adversity his own generals left him in the lurch.

The recent Arab Spring, which was occurred in Tunisia, Libya, Egypt. When their leaders were prosperous every country tried to make friendship with them but once they came in adversity no one helped them.
:thinking[/QUOTE]
It was quite good attempt, but you have committed mistakes in punctuating the sentences correctly. Do check it. Another thing which needs attention is grammar. You have made such mistakes in your grammar as: 'Saddam Hussain former despotic ruler of Iraq, when he was under the patronage of America'. This sentence should be written as: "When the former despotic ruler, saddam hussain, was under patronage of America". Similarly, few other sentences like this one need to be corrected.

Regards

[QUOTE=Asif3531;456383]Nope, The main theme of this proverb is related to the realities of life. No man on this earth is happy, each have his own problems. Man on this earth cannot be happy all the time. Death only brings an end to his miseries and give him rest from all sorrows of this world forever.[/QUOTE]


you yourself has lighted the theme very well. Every one has its own style and it does'nt mean he or she has to write acutely according to your own assessnent. If you really go through to this particular expansion then Xuhaib rightly explained it ,focusing man is in jail'' vice versa.secondly, one proverb has multi-themes and these implied to life .so each theme is correct if it is proved logically and rationally.And point out where xuhaib has not use logic because your judgement is flawed but i tend to agree with your stance ''expansion should be based on present '' ,so if there are mistakes ,highlight them. Thirdly ,please write expansion on the following theme so one can get what you are trying to convey!!!



"ab to ghabra ke be khty hn mer jaen
mr ke be chain na pya to kider jae hum

1-contentment

2-concept of hell and heaven

3.envy ..psycho analysis

many more theme this provetb contain but one has to provr one with solid arguments!!

[QUOTE=SADIA SHAFIQ;456713]you yourself has lighted the theme very well. Every one has its own style and it does'nt mean he or she has to write acutely according to your own assessnent. If you really go through to this particular expansion then Xuhaib rightly explained it ,focusing man is in jail'' vice versa.secondly, one proverb has multi-themes and these implied to life .so each theme is correct if it is proved logically and rationally.And point out where xuhaib has not use logic because your judgement is flawed but i tend to agree with your stance ''expansion should be based on present '' ,so if there are mistakes ,highlight them. Thirdly ,please write expansion on the following theme so one can get what you are trying to convey!!!



"ab to ghabra ke be khty hn mer jaen
mr ke be chain na pya to kider jae hum

1-contentment

2-concept of hell and heaven

3.envy ..psycho analysis

many more theme this provetb contain but one has to provr one with solid arguments!![/QUOTE]


[B]Thanks a lot. Quite well explanation. Keep on helping. :)[/B]

[QUOTE=kashifali85;456666]“Prosperity makes friends, adversity tries them”

It is a universal truth that when one has success, power, money and everything so [B]everyone tries to make friendship and maintain relationships[/B] [B](KIS K SATH FRIENDSHIP RAKHNA CHAHTAY HAIN)[/B] but when one has none of the above things everyone leaves him. [B]As Adolf Hitler says that keep on working hard regardless of result when you are successful everyone follow you but when you in dark your own shadow will leave you.
[/B] (Is this the correct quotation? I think, it is like; When you are in light, everyone follows you, but when you are in dark, even your shadows leaves you. KUCH IS TARAH K WORDS HAIN. )



In our daily life, we usually see that when any person gets success we make friendship with him because we have certain interests but when he comes in hot water we usually ignore him. Thomas Hobbes says that man by nature is selfish.

Saddam Hussain[B],[/B] former despotic ruler of Iraq, when he was under the patronage of America[B],[/B] he enjoyed a lot even his rival country Iran recognized him but when he came in adversity his own generals left him in the lurch.

The recent Arab Spring, which was occurred in Tunisia, Libya, Egypt. When their leaders were prosperous every country tried to make friendship with them but once they came in adversity no one helped them.
:thinking[/QUOTE]

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[B][/B][/FONT][/SIZE]Quite well. Try to write exact words of Quotation.

You have given quite good examples and reasons but you didn't conclude it well.

You could give a message regarding topic in the last of Expansion.

Overall, Good One. [/B]

[B][/B][CENTER][B][U]Prosperity Make Friends,Adversity Tries Them[/U][/B][/CENTER]

[LEFT][FONT="Arial Narrow"]It is an undeniable fact that when a man steps up the ladder of success & acquires a lavish life-style,people start befriending him to channel his fortunes for their own good.However,such people with selfish aims are only to stay with him in his heydays not the otherwise. When providence turns the page & that same man faces adversity,he gets the chance to recognize the real face of his so called friends. Though purple-patch of one's life keeps coming & going but this very movement is enough to test who stands beside the loser and who abandons him.
It is a common observation that everyone wants to develop contact with the one who has some clout to influence & manipulate or simply have an enviable socio-economic status.People show great enthusiasm in befriending those who could be future assistance in any form or any way. This is the pull factor that often draws selfish people.Albeit it is strange that when a person goes through hardships,he weeps alone.Nowhere he finds those cronies around who,during his smooth-sailing,never missed a chance to ensure him of their loyalty.
Adversities like a magnifying glass reveal the true substance of one's best friend(s).Adversities teach her victim who to befriend & trust though in a hard way. [/FONT][/LEFT]



please evaluate,mark & guide!!

[QUOTE=pearlyS;456773][B][/B][CENTER][B][U]Prosperity Make Friends,Adversity Tries Them[/U][/B][/CENTER]

[LEFT][FONT="Arial Narrow"]It is an undeniable fact that when a man steps up the ladder of success & acquires a lavish life-style,people start befriending him to channel his fortunes for their own good.However,such people with selfish aims are only to stay with him in his heydays not the otherwise. When providence turns the page & that same man faces adversity,he gets the chance to recognize the real face of his so called friends. Though purple-patch of one's life keeps coming & going but this very movement is enough to test who stands beside the loser and who abandons him.
It is a common observation that everyone wants to develop contact with the one who has some clout to influence & manipulate or simply have an enviable socio-economic status.People show great enthusiasm in befriending those who could be future assistance in any form or any way. This is the pull factor that often draws selfish people.Albeit it is strange that when a person goes through hardships,he weeps alone.Nowhere he finds those cronies around who,during his smooth-sailing,never missed a chance to ensure him of their loyalty.
Adversities like a magnifying glass reveal the true substance of one's best friend(s).Adversities teach her victim who to befriend & trust though in a hard way. [/FONT][/LEFT]



please evaluate,mark & guide!![/QUOTE]
[B]
Quite well! Good use of vocabulary.

You could give good examples.

Overall, more than 10 for this one. :)

And, Did you read expansion of mine on yesterday's topic, CALL NO MAN..........?[/B]

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;456402][COLOR="Purple"][SIZE="4"][FONT="Comic Sans MS"][B]Call no Man Happy till he is Dead.

Until and Unless, man lives in this materialistic and greedy world, he cannot be Happy. Man is shackled and chained in this [B]magical world[/B]. Adam and eve were thrown on earth for punishment. Earth was considered a jail for them. So, how can a man live happily in a jail? Man can be happy when he is freed of the shackles.

Change is constant. If spring comes; flowers bloom up. When autumn enters, flowers wither. A man cannot be happy, even if he has health, wealth and all luxuries of life. In the book, Prince of Abyssinia, by Samuel Johnson. Rasselas, the prince, had everything of world. But, he could not live happily in his palace. He left his palace and tried to find and explore happiness in world. And, He could find nowhere.

Man lives, expects, desires, feels panic and tragedies, never lives happily. Life is nevertheless a tragedy. Hazrat ALi A.S said, "Oh! World, I have divorced you for three times." Until and unless, man desires, he cannot be happy. It can only be expected by a Dead Man. He cannot desire, feel pain and response who is dead.

Rousseau said, "Man is born free and everywhere he is in chains." Man can not live in gala days because he is chained with chains of responsibilities, expectations, dreams, fears, taxes and desires. Everyman in this world is unhappy unless he dies. That is the only way to break the shackles of mortal and materialistic world.

By: Xuhaib Ahmed Pirzada. 21 July. 7:45 Am. 250 words!

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understanding & examples are relevant & too the point.:bow:clap

instead of magical world you could use something more negative..:wacko: just a thought..

overall piece depicts your grasp & application of knowledge :shy
something that i often ignores:sad
good one :thinking

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A thing of beauty is joy for ever. John Keats. [/COLOR][/B][/CENTER][/SIZE]