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Ahmed Faisal (Saturday, December 01, 2012), Da Skeptic (Saturday, December 01, 2012), seher bano (Saturday, December 01, 2012) |
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So nice of you Faisal and Da Skeptic .... Thanks for such a nice checking out my writes up. Now I have written down an other para please check it out like earlier and point out my mistakes and please correct them so that I may be able to not repeat the same mistake again.
Present Scenario of Poverty in Pakistan Currently, poverty is increasing day by day in Pakistan. Infect, since a decade the poverty increasing of our country has been increasing very fastly than that of earlier years. According to the current reports of the Asian Bank that the one-third people of Pakistan are living below the poverty line. Among these people, seventy five percent of people are living in rural areas. The poor people are nearly unable to get basic facilities of life such as education, health, sanitation and many thinks which are considered very important for a life. As a result, the urbanization is increasing, crisis and social evils are increasing day by day. Because of poverty people are engulfed in the cruel clutches of terrorism, extremism, violation, theafing and many more such crimes are being increased day bay day. On the one hand people of rural and urab areas are being suffered from poverty and on the other hand our so-called politicians are getting busy in order to make their vote banks increased instead of overcoming the problems. In this juncture, it is the need of hour to handle the problems. However, first of all it is highly required to understand that what are the reasons of poverty increasing in Pakistan. The first reason of poverty in Pakistan is Illiteracy. …………… |
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1. English grammar in use by Raymond Murphy( 3rh Edition, Blue cover) 2. Advance Grammar in use bye Martin Hewing( 2nd Edition, Green Cover) Besides, read daily dawn, especially dawn Editorial. make it habit to look into the dictionary whenever you get any difficult word. Write these words in you register and use them frequently in your day to day writing practice. Moreover, use some good dictionary I would recommend long man dictionary of contemporary English. Stay blessed.
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Dear members and Faisal now I have tried my best to not make even a single mistake again. Please check it out critically and point out my mistake and correct it.
Thanks in advance Currently, Pakistan is facing severe poverty problem. It has become one of the biggest challenges for our country that faces today. According to the report of ADB (Asian Development Bank), one third population of Paksitan is living bellow the poverty line. whereas, among these people, 75 percent poor people live in rural areas and they depend on agriculture. Since the recent floods of Pakistan, the infrastructure of the country has nearly been destroyed. The floods left the People in a big miserable time. People are jobless, because the do not have much opportunities in rural areas to earn due to floods and energy crisis problems. In this way, urbanization is increasing day by day. In the urban areas, target killing, terrorism, extremism, social evils and many immoral activities are increased it is because of poverty. Although, the current democratic government has been doing its best to overcome this problem but it has not been tackled effectively due to corruption, malpractice and mismanagement. On the one hand, people are engulfed in the cruel clutches of poverty, on the the other hand, our current politicians are enjoying their privileges. |
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Best of luck..
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"So my birth was the first of all my misfortunes". (Jean Jacques Rosseou) |
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@ aishamemona
you have written this text in a good way. But let me tell you one thing, do not overtly criticize the government or bureaucrats. Always sugar coat your criticize. you have frequently criticized all the bureaucrats and government. So its my suggestion. else you know better. |
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@aishamemon: this is an expansion thread so please post your essays in a relevant thread.
@ahmed faisal: i think reading and writing is the best way to improve english, memorizing grammar is a class 5 way of learning how to write without errors. |
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"I demand that my books be judged with utmost severity, by knowledgeable people who know the rules of grammar and of logic, and who will seek beneath the footsteps of my commas the lice of my thought in the head of my style." --Louis Aragon
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1. Your skills of structuring the sentences need to improve. 2. You have rarely used transitional words. 3. whether there is a problem of grammar or proofreading you know better. Note: if i have pointed out anything by mistake, correct me I would be honored. Da skeptic you should also re-check it as there is always room for more corrections.
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"Our Lord, give us the good in this world and the good in the hereafter." (Al-Qur'an, 2:201). |
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i beg to differ. seriously you're comparing writing to maths....MATHS is all about formulas which have to be learnt unless you make your own formulas...english is very different from maths. you cant expect an adult to memorize grammar and then apply it in each sentence whilst writing. english cannot be learnt, it's all about practice, reading and writing. i dont remember consulting a grammar book after class 7 and my english is okay
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