[QUOTE=An Avaricious Lover;645871][B]Impossible is often untried[/B]

This maxim describes a reality of life. Things prevailing to be impossible look so because they are often untried. One has to find the ways to let these things happen and be possible. Nothing can downtrod the powerful and indomitable will of a human being who is imbued with natural tendency to do impossible. It is a famous proverb, “where there is a will, there is way” which affirms the need for a powerful will to do unprecedented things. God had created man with mind and ability to explore world through observation and experience and as a result he tried and found it. Only man need to have powerful will to execute the impossible. Man’s will can overcome all the hindrances and obstacles coming on his way to convert the very impossibility into possibility.
Since the birth of man, he had sheer determination to explore the world. Making fire was an impossible act which he did after a series of efforts with stones. Similarly as the world progressed, he invented wheel which made his life comfortable. As the time passed, he made progress with leaps and bounds and invented the things which were impossible without his efforts. Small pox was a disastrous epidemic which exterminated millions of people and it was possible to cure a patient with small pox at that time. But genius of man awakened and he found the remedy in its own victim. It was Edward Jenner who made it possible to cure Small pox with the pus released from the pimples of victim. He successfully inoculated a 8 year old boy with pus and boy stayed healthy and shielded from small pox. Man has always eager to explore spatial areas around our lively planet. Expedition to moon was an impossible idea to think about but man didn’t restricted himself thinking about world only and he took daring step of sending rocket on moon so that he could unveil the hidden mysteries of this vast universe which he had never thought before. He could not have succeeded if he didn’t try. And now he is a step ahead to conquer Mars the 4th planet of solar system. He failed several times in doing so but at the end he got it with resolute will and persistency.
Everything is impossible until it is tried. One cannot earn money if he don’t try. One can’t get knowledge if has no will and no action. Actions always speak louder than words. One must need to put his will into action to let it happen with utmost efforts. There was a spider who tried to climb up the wall and she failed 99 times and miserably fell on ground. It seemed impossible that she would climb that up. But she did it 100th time. One can do any impossible thing if he try with determination and persists it.[/QUOTE]
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Dear, word limit in CSS expansion is 250-300. Your word-count is 482. Kindly, shorten it first, then, we can check it well. Don't take amiss _word count really matters. :)[/SIZE][/B]

Money is the foremost requirement of human s life. there is no place of world where money never worked. One needs to have money to fulfil his wishes, dreams and even his basic requirements of life.
Importance of money can not be denied. one does work to obtain money but sometimes, in case of
emergency man owes it from someone and becomes his debtor.but on due date he found his pocket empty and if he fails to return it back then he needs to borrow money again from somewhere else to clear his previous debt if he do so such borrowed
money will be of no use for him. it will be gone same as it comes. History is evident a many were destroyed in greed of wealth, money and power.but nobody could had them forever. Money where helps us to spend our lives easily its also a source of many social evils of society as well."The lack of money is the root of all evils" Mark Twain. clearing of debt by a new debt is not a wise decision. It is like to sit in two boats at the same time. at the end, person remains in a same condition as he was before. For example, if a person

takes loan from bank to pay his leas payment what benifit would he actually get out of it? nothing but
the tension of another debt. one needs to spend a moderate life by maintaining a balance between income
and expenditures.

Please seniors check my above mentioned expansion. there must be lot of grammatical and other mistakes. i shall keep on practicing unless i got improved.

The proverb is "To rob peter to pay paul"

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Dear, word limit in CSS expansion is 250-300. Your word-count is 482. Kindly, shorten it first, then, we can check it well. Don't take amiss _word count really matters. :)[/SIZE][/B][/QUOTE]

Zohaib! if you check it this time , i will grateful for this and i will try to keep words withing limit. its my first ever effort . thanks:))

Eternal Vigilance is the price of liberty
A determined heart always sticks on the formula of eternal vigilance. it suits to the nations that seek
freedom by throwing away the yoke of slavery. Allah has created mankind with liberty, the universe has been created for them. they have full right to live their life according to their, culture, civilization and religion. It is only possible when people of such nation get
united and determined. No external force can decline this rock. nation has to give a lot of sacrifices in order to obtain freedom. Freedom is rather easy to achieve but difficult to preserve and maintain it.Pakistan is came into being in 1947 after a lot of sacrificies given by her people and efforts done
by Quaid e Azam. India could never tolerate the existence of Pakistan. India became nuclear power in 1974. she intended to use her power negatively against Pakistan. pritvi missiles were thrown near Pakistan border. than it became a matter of compulsion for Pakistan to be strengthen its security to avoid any future danger.any conflagration between both countries could be harmful for Pakistan s sovereignity. atlast by the sincere efforts of Dr Abdul Qadir khan Pakistan became world s 7th nuclear power."Freedom is nothing but a chance to be better"(Albert) pakistan became able to compete with india by any war posed by her. It showed the world that
we know how to protect our boundaries. Defence can not be neglected at the cost of economic development. slackened defense is dangerous and invites enemy countrise to launch war against her.Pakistan needs to be cautious at every movement to preserve its eternal vigilance.

[QUOTE=AliRehman5;646201]Eternal Vigilance is the price of liberty
A determined heart always sticks on (to) the formula of eternal vigilance. it suits to the nations that seek
freedom by throwing away the yoke of slavery. Allah has created mankind with liberty (the sense of this part of the sentence is wrong. Your sentence means that Allah was at liberty to create mankind the way He wanted to vis-à-vis nobody interfered. The sentence should have been man is born free, or Allah has given freedom to mankind) , the universe has been created for them. they have full right to live their life according to their culture, civilization and religion. It is only possible when people of such nation get
united and determined. No external force can decline this rock (decline this rock?). nation has to give a lot of sacrifices in order to obtain freedom (gain freedom). Freedom is rather easy to achieve but difficult to preserve and maintain it.Pakistan came into being in 1947 after a lot of sacrificies given by her people and efforts done
by Quaid e Azam. India could never tolerate the existence of Pakistan. India became nuclear power in 1974. she intended to use her power negatively against Pakistan. pritvi missiles were thrown near Pakistan border. than it became a matter of compulsion for Pakistan to strengthen its security to avoid any future danger.any conflagration between both countries could be harmful for Pakistan s sovereignity. at last by the sincere efforts of Dr Abdul Qadir khan Pakistan became world s 7th nuclear power."Freedom is nothing but a chance to be better"(Albert) pakistan became able to compete with india by any war posed by her (in the battlefield). It showed the world that
we know how to protect our boundaries. Defence can not be neglected at the cost of economic development. slackened defense is dangerous and invites enemy countrise to launch war against her.Pakistan needs to be cautious at every movement to preserve its eternal vigilance (what is preserve its eternal vigilance? I believe vigilance means the quality to be on the lookout, aware, ready!).[/QUOTE]

Ali please find the corrections that I could come across. secondly, why does every second expansion have references to Islam, Pakistan, Muslim etc. I mean this is creative writing, try to think out of the box! That will get you good marks.

[QUOTE=seher bano;645901][B]Umarabbas sir and other seniors are requested to check this expansion. As I think I could not get the real meaning of this proverb. Let me know whether I caught the idea or otherwise and also check other grammar and structure of sentences mistakes. Thanks in anticipation.
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[COLOR="Blue"][B][B]YOU WILL FIND POETRY NOWHERE UNLESS YOU BRING SOME WITH YOU
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Everyone keeps some specific interests, hobbies, games near to him. Often one thing which is liked by someone is hated by other. The hidden idea in this saying is that if one does not have knowledge or interest in something, he will never find that thing fascinating. Similarly, if a person likes good human nature he can find good human nature every where. Art, say for example, galleries exhibitions are conducted throughout the world. Many people go to the exhibitions and buy many paintings. They spend hundreds of thousands on buying such painting. For them, art is the beauty of life. They keep these paintings everywhere such as at their homes, offices etc. on the contrary, a person who does not have sense of art can never find art anywhere. In the same manner, a tourist likes to travel different places and countries around the world. He is usually fond of beauty of this world. This is why he finds beautiful places everywhere. Quite a contrary, a person who does not like traveling can never feel the beauty of this beautiful world. It is ridiculous that many people criticize others for not having sense of specific thing. These people must realize that God has given every man with specific qualities and interests. If one man has no sense of a particular thing he must have the other. It would be safe to conclude that if one person does not have a kind of taste or interest in a particular activity, he will never go after it. He can never understand it, so if a person wants to know something well he must take interest or have some knowledge about it. [B][COLOR="Blue"](Words 288)[/COLOR][/B][/QUOTE]

Awesome work! :king The sense is totally right. Grammatically correct for the almost all the part :)

[QUOTE=umarabbas;646251]Ali please find the corrections that I could come across. secondly, why does every second expansion have references to Islam, Pakistan, Muslim etc. I mean this is creative writing, try to think out of the box! That will get you good marks.[/QUOTE]
I saw all the mistakes marked by you. I ll takecare of it by next time. I have not practiced of writing before. Secondly, I thoughtit would be better to give reference of country, religion and politics of Pakistan? As every expansion is different from other.and we will have to write only one in paper. What you say Brother?

[QUOTE=seher bano;645901][B]Umarabbas sir and other seniors are requested to check this expansion. As I think I could not get the real meaning of this proverb. Let me know whether I caught the idea or otherwise and also check other grammar and structure of sentences mistakes. Thanks in anticipation.
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[COLOR="Blue"][B][B]YOU WILL FIND POETRY NOWHERE UNLESS YOU BRING SOME WITH YOU
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Everyone keeps some specific interests, hobbies, games near to him. Often one thing which is liked by someone is hated by other. The hidden idea in this saying is that if one does not have knowledge or interest in something, [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]he[/B][/COLOR] will never find that thing fascinating. Similarly, if a person likes good human nature he can find good human nature every where. Art, say for example, galleries exhibitions are conducted throughout the world. Many people go to the exhibitions and buy many paintings. They spend hundreds of thousands on buying such painting. For them, art is the beauty of life. They keep these paintings everywhere such as at their homes, offices etc. on the contrary, a person who does not have sense of art can never find art anywhere. In the same manner, a tourist likes to travel different places and countries around the world. He is usually fond of beauty of this world. This is why he finds beautiful places everywhere. Quite a contrary, a person who does not like traveling can never feel the beauty of this beautiful world. It is ridiculous that many people criticize others for not having sense of specific thing. These people must realize that God has given every man with specific qualities and interests. If one man has no sense of a particular thing he must have the other. It would be safe to conclude that if one person does not have a kind of taste or interest in a particular activity, he will never go after it. He can never understand it, so if a person wants to know something well he must take interest or have some knowledge about it. [B][COLOR="Blue"](Words 288)[/COLOR][/B][/QUOTE]

Quite well. Go on _ road to perfection never ends.

[QUOTE=An Avaricious Lover;645871][B]Impossible is often untried[/B]

This maxim describes a reality of life. Things prevailing to be impossible look so because they are often untried. One has to find the ways to let these things happen and be possible. Nothing can downtrod the powerful and indomitable will of a human being who is imbued with natural tendency to do impossible. It is a famous proverb, “where there is a will, there is way” which affirms the need for a powerful will to do unprecedented things. God [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]had[/B][/COLOR] created man with mind and ability to explore world through observation and experience and as a result [B][COLOR="DarkRed"]he tried and found it[/COLOR][/B][COLOR="RoyalBlue"] (WHO MAN OR GOD?)[/COLOR]. [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]Only man need [/B][/COLOR]to have powerful will to execute the impossible. Man’s will can overcome all the hindrances and obstacles coming on his way [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]to[[/B]/COLOR] convert the very impossibility into possibility.
Since the birth of man, he had sheer determination to explore the world. Making fire was an impossible act which he did after a series of efforts with stones. Similarly as the world progressed, he invented wheel which made his life comfortable. As the time passed, he made progress with leaps and bounds and invented the things which were impossible without his efforts. Small pox was a disastrous epidemic which exterminated millions of people and it was [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]possible[/B][/COLOR] to cure a patient with small pox at that time. But genius of man awakened and he found the remedy in its own victim. It was Edward Jenner who made it possible to cure Small pox with the pus released from the pimples of victim. He successfully inoculated [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]a 8 year[/B][/COLOR] old boy with pus and boy stayed healthy and shielded from small pox. Man [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]has always eager[/B][/COLOR] to explore spatial areas around [COLOR="DarkRed"]our[/COLOR] lively planet. Expedition to moon was an impossible idea to think about but man [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]didn’t restricted[/B][/COLOR] himself thinking about world only and he took daring step of sending rocket on moon so that he could unveil the hidden mysteries of this vast universe which he had never thought before. [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]He could not have succeeded if he didn’t try[/B][/COLOR]. And now he is a step ahead to conquer Mars the 4th planet of solar system. He failed several times in doing so but at the end he got it with resolute will and persistency.
[COLOR="DarkRed"]Everything is impossible until it is tried.[/COLOR] One cannot earn money[COLOR="DarkRed"][B] if he don’t try.[/B] [/COLOR]One can’t get knowledge if has no will and no action. Actions always speak louder than words. One must need to put [COLOR="DarkRed"][B]his[/B][/COLOR] will into action to let it happen with utmost efforts. There was a spider who tried to climb up the wall and she failed 99 times and miserably fell on ground. It seemed impossible that she would climb that up. But she did it 100th time. One can do any impossible thing [COLOR="DarkRed"][B][B]if he try[/B][/B][/COLOR] with determination and persists it.[/QUOTE]
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I have only highlighted the mistakes, correct them, shorten it, make final draft and post it. Then, I shall re-check it. Thanks.[/SIZE][/COLOR][/B]

[QUOTE=AliRehman5;646259]I saw all the mistakes marked by you. I ll takecare of it by next time. I have not practiced of writing before. Secondly, I thoughtit would be better to give reference of country, religion and politics of Pakistan? As every expansion is different from other.and we will have to write only one in paper. What you say Brother?[/QUOTE]

well Ali brother, I am no authority on Expansion or English language for that matter, but I can safely say that English Precise paper is to test your ability to express yourself in English. So it should not be treated as a history or Islamiat paper.

One thing that I have noticed on this forum is that more than 90% of the times, people have the same rhetoric when it comes to expansion. I am sure this will be true for essays (in fact as I have come across many essays where Islam, Pakistan etc were un-necessarily introduced) as well. So that automatically means that one should not be following this practice because you never wanted to be part of the crowd and a bit of uniqueness won't hurt :vic