My v.first effort..

The heart has its reasons which reason knows not (Blaise Pascal)
It is true everything exists around us possess a reason, but being able to explain every reason is not possible. In fact it is said “we are living with reasons and for reasons”. The reason for why I want to do css can’t be expressed in few words. It is my passion, aim, most of all my father’s wish. I won’t call it a dream because dreams have no concern with realities.
Rightly said by:Chuck Palahniuk “All the efforts in the world won’t matter if you are not inspired”. Bureaucracy, people related to this field, their attitude inspires me I like being called a CSP. And to live a life of your choice is not possible without your will. There is always an Inspiration behind every success.
I will not quote same line which every second person repeats “I want to do something for my country” I believe in proving by performing. I want to do css for myself because I am passionate about it, want to see myself on strong position, I want to lead, want to invest myself into something where my capabilities and qualities can be utilized.
People may disagree with my point of view I appreciate their criticism because I believe in what Whinston Churchill said “Criticism may not be agreeable but it is necessary”

The internet- a blessing or a curse
Internet has taken the world by storm.Everybody talks about internet.It has transformed the face of life and the preoccupation of dwellers of the modern society,especially. as Bill Gates rightly said "
"Internet is becoming the town square for the global village of tomorow"

Internet has brought radical changes, both positive and negative. As J.K Rowling said," The internet has been a boon and a curse for the teenagers".Unfortunately, the negative changes though less discussed and projected, have attracted the contemporary youth. Internet, for the contemporary youth is a curse as it weakens their personality. Hacking and Plagiarism are the most common e crimes. Obscenity is just a "click" away. Internet has weakened the moral fibre of the teenagers. The youth of the day are less respectful of the elders, and least respectful of themselves. Words like truthfulness,loyalty,conscietiousness seem and sound hollow to them. As Rick warren said, " i just think internet has made us rudder". It should be remembered, that if morality starts decaying, it is the decay of every thing. It is never healthy to know and have certain things before time because they are not properly absorbed and digested. The youth with "surplus mental diet" remain weak, both physically and spiritually. The situation entails a bleak future.The only solution is to keep a check on the teenager's use of internet.

i guess the quote in the beginning is not complete or some issue is there. check it out again.(Bureaucracy, people related to this field, their attitude inspires me I like being called a CSP. And to live a life of your choice is not possible without your will) statement is not coherent to my senses but i am no authority. (I will not quote same line which every second person repeat) i guess here "which" has to replaced by "that". i think these are the only corrections i can recommend in my capacity.

could some senior or somebody with ample knowledge of grammer etc spare some time for daily or weekly checking of paragraphs. the comments would be a great service in the holy month of ramzan.thx

I have highlighted some mistakes and the words/sentences which I couldn't comprehend comprehensively. I couldn't find flow and flux in your ideas and sentences _it is quite necessary when you write something. Undoubtedly, your efforts are appreciable but practice brings perfection. So, keep on jotting down.

I would suggest you, learn the art of writting expansions; don't go for studying dozens of it. If you learn the art and practise then you can easily write what you want.

Let me say you one thing. Come up with your own version, a novel topic related to proverbs and maxims, then one can easily judge and mark your expansion. Now, I don't know which words are yours and which are author's. When we read any topic and start writting on the very topic; para-consciously we try to imitate Author's words and Ideas.

No doubt, it is good thing. You should read expansions but when you post any expansion, it should be fully yours and a final draft. Then, we can check it vividly and you can know how you write.

Don't take amiss. Only those people learn who make mistakes; you are among them.

Regards.

The reason and logic say, you should come up with an expansion if applicable. Thanks.

I've just looked at your grammar.

Hope is the buoy of life
William shakespeare said "
hope is the only medicine for the miserable"
Shakespeare was not wrong when he said the quote.Hope is the only thing which gives purgatory to the miserable man. Hope of freedom gives strenght to warrior to fight and even die.Every struggle of right, be it in palestine,kashmir,lebanon or iran against wrong is incessant as it is nourished by hope.
History stands witness that people have achieved amazing results by remaining hopeful.King Bruce of Scotland could not free his land despite mulltitude attempt. He had to run away and hide in a cave there he saw a spider who was trying to reach the roof but everytime it fell just before making it. But, finally it reached the roof.The king had learnt his lesson: to keep hope alive.He made a concerted attempt and succeded. Abraham lincoln fought many elections in a row.As luck would have it, he never won even a single election.But hope sprang eternal in him.He fought presidental elections and became the president of America. Martin luther's quote," everything that is done in world is done by hope". amply manifests the significance of hope. Hope tones up every muscle in the body,activates every nerve to produce a perfect combination of body and mind. The vision of glory,achievement and appreciation propels a person to work hard and leave no stone unturned to achieve the goal.
Nonetheless, it is pertinent to mention that mere hope without the required amount of hardwork will not lead to success.Hope is secondary to efforts.Efforts are the base on which hope is built.Thus, putting in the required amount of effort and remaining hopeful is the key to success.

THX a million for your commemts.even i felt that my statements were lacking coherence but couldn't find a way to solve it. now that you have highlighted the issue i'll be very careful next time.Basically i have started off with solving past 5 years expansions.i would love to write something on my own but i am a biochemist and i have no idea of literature etc and am not aware of examples to quote so i try copying them.jazakAllah

thx a lott for your valuable comments.but unfortunately i couldn't understand some of your advices such as the objection on use of demolishion? or the objection on using a ? could you tell me some useful website on grammar and thx once again for your useful comments and your time.

It is said understanding of things is important to accomplish goals. Among many goals one is “Equality”.
When Muslims and Hindus were living together in subcontinent the major bone of contention between them was distribution of equal rights. They were fighting from day one but never get succeeded resultantly they jumped into a war and grabbed their rights in form of Pakistan.
The reason behind recalling history is to remind you of efforts put by our forefathers to get this land. The problem which our country is facing today is again the same but situation is slightly different. Now everyone is demanding for equality but according to their demands and requirements for instance gender based equality, equality in rights of education, jobs, minorities and many more.
Once again we are involved in silent war in which there is no visible destruction but internally giving harming to our self respect and ego. It is becoming a trend in our country when elections are on its peak our leaders they give false hopes by satisfying our minds with their lies among many, one lie is of giving equality. It is said there will be “No difference in Cast and creed” but don’t forget it is just a dialogue.
Now when we are living and witnessing 21st century where other countries are busy in inventing and discovering new things, we are still standing where we were in our old days “Fighting for our rights and equality” what we achieved in last two centuries? That is another debate.
George Orwell’s story “Animal farm” from which this line is taken was about Animals and Humans. Animals considered humans as their biggest and only enemy. We can’t neglect this fact that was a fictitious story, but in present scenario Sorry to say and with all due respect to our feelings we are being treated as animals by our leaders who consider themselves as humans and treating us like animals. Though we are equal to them physically but they have exclusive rights to degrade us and our feelings for the reason they are leaders and are” More equal than us”. To finish this discrimination and humiliating treatment we again have to put efforts like our forefathers to get liberty from this ill treatment.
Rightly said by: Francis Wright “Equality is the soul of liberty; there is, in fact, no liberty without it”

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Sufficient for us is Allah , and [He is] the best Disposer of affairs.

This is basic grammar and I'm afraid I can't suggest you any grammar websites because I've never studied grammar myself. Demolition is used for things and not for human beings, at least I haven't seen it being used in that context. We cannot use 'a' here because you're not talking about a specific man. I hope I have been of some help to you.

I've just looked at the grammar and best of luck with your css exam, you really look determined and hard working

You can read expansions, no doubt, it is a good pattern but it is time consuming. Therefore, learn the art smartly. This is the only way you can go through.

And, puntuation matters a lot, do work over it.

An English professor wrote the words :

"A woman without her man is nothing"

on the chalkboard and asked his students to
punctuate it correctly.

All of the males in the class wrote:

"A woman, without her man, is nothing."

All the females in the class wrote:

"A woman: without her, man is nothing."

So, many a time, reader gets confused b/c of incorrect punctuation. And, it also puts hurdles in flow of Ideas.