will u please elaborate the said proverb in simple language?
I could not understand.

Ignorant person does not know what is the truth behind any matter . Stupid person knows what is the truth but keep the things going without any interference or intervention . It`s up to person to remain foolish /aloof after acknowledgement of his/her friend disloyalty, husbands is deceiving her or government is making false promises .

Now , its up to you agree with this stance or write against it .

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2. Man probes into space but not into himself

Man craves to explore the outer world, but he never looks into himself. He has keen interest in exploring the mysteries of world. He has made extraordinary achievement in the field of science. However, he never considers it important to probe in his inner self. Therefore, he should spare some time deeming his own actions entailing his doings and misdoings.

Practically, man has made enormous progress in the universe. He has explored infinite hidden mysteries of the world. But, he never peeps into himself. He is eager to know what is going on in the outer world; but, he never considers what is going on in his own self. Therefore, he must know himself first. He must explore the mysteries of his inner soul. Only then, he will be able to explore world.

For instance, Ralph Waldo Emerson, the famous American essayist, described in his essay ‘Self-reliance’ that one should endeavor to know himself. He wanted to convey the message that one should rely on himself. His essay starts with the quotation: “Man is his own star”.

It is to be concluded that it is human nature to remain eager in probing the universe. The more he explores the world, the more he goes away from his intimate soul. Besides making achievements in the world, he should also become familiar with his inner self.

Please check the above expansion seniors....

you have repeated the idea in frist paragraph that is about science .Do not beat around the bush.Try to bring unique ideas and jolt them to bring clarity.you have to justify the topic rather go on explanations.

Use the correct words which show relations between them.For example,you have used word**practically**which is an adverb .It does not having any connection with verb /noun.

Deeming is a verb without helping verb making syntax structure ambigious.Entailing is a noun/ gerund here.But it is wrong use of vocabulary having no relevance between words of a sentence.

You have used'but' in a single sentence twice .The sentence starts from **But shows previous idea is continued .You again used 'but as well as semi colon showing punctuation mistakes. Along with it ,but is conjunction .We can use comma before **but** (not after the but).

Lastly ,you have said ,"it is to be concluded"....It shows that you are not presenting your opinion rather trying to prove.

There are form /thematic mistakes .I have described them.Rest in peace.

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Mam could you elaborate the above quoted type of mistakes? Thanks for enlightening us.....

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Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.
But when love is one sided, holding off is no more an option.

I have... but did not highlighted the text.

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No, i meant what type of mistakes are called Thematic mistakes? Their description and then one or two examples would suffice.....

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Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.
But when love is one sided, holding off is no more an option.

Man probes into space but not in himself.


It is an idea/theme which meanings need clarity in ideas . Here, this clarity is not found .Theme is not about science or discovery .Theme is ; man directs world actions but can not direct himself.Now , for this three reason should be needed for its justification.Re-read the text of expansion

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"Wa tu izzu man-ta shaa, wa tu zillu man-ta shaa"

oh that simply means that the expansion is not to the point! The title is something else and expansion is something else....assimilating mistake....however nice and strange name given to that mistake by you.....

Thanks for elaborating.

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Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation.
But when love is one sided, holding off is no more an option.