To err is human, to forgive is divine

The maxim clearly elaborates that man possesses bundles of weaknesses and usually commits crimes, either intentionally or unintenionally. While God, on the other side, divine in Its nature, forgives His believers on their mistakes.

God has differentiated human beings with angels as hamans can make errs while angels are free from them. The work of angels is only to preach while human have to run the affiars of the world. They mostly have families which they have to take care of. In these circumstances, they mostly commit mistakes while their ulterior motive may not be harming people. The errs of humans may be compromised if they are commited unwillingly, but, if they are commited willingly, then the person should be punished.

Humans are known for doing mistakes since time immemorial. The first man on earth,Adam A.S. did make a mistake as he was trapped by Satan. God sent him out of heaven but later pardoned him. Humans, since that time are getting on the wrong end of the stick. Einstein, the 20th century genius, said that if I knew that my discovery will make such catastrophe, I may never have invented my theory regarding relativity.

Humans mostly make lapses when they want to get even with their foes. In the fire of revenge, one usually.........

REMAINING PART

....loose his mind and fail to recall his limits.Men should strive to steer themselves out of this malaise. For the prosperity and development of nation, forgiveness is much better than reprisal.

Darkness cannot drive out darkness; only light can do that. Hate cannot
drive out hate; only love can do that- Martin Luther King, Jr.

The maxim clearly elaborates that man possesses bundles of weaknesses and usually commits crimes, either intentionally or unintenionally. While God, on the other side, divine in Its nature, forgives His believers on their mistakes.

God has differentiated human beings with angels as hamans can make errs while angels are free from them. The work of angels is only to preach while human have to run the affiars of the world. They mostly have families which they have to take care of. In these circumstances, they mostly commit mistakes while their ulterior motive may not be harming people. The errs of humans may be compromised if they are commited unwillingly, but, if they are commited willingly, then the person should be punished.

Humans are known for doing mistakes since time immemorial. The first man on earth,Adam A.S. did make a mistake as he was trapped by Satan. God sent him out of heaven but later pardoned him. Humans, since that time are getting on the wrong end of the stick. Einstein, the 20th century genius, said that if I knew that my discovery will make such catastrophe, I may never have invented my theory regarding relativity.

Humans mostly make lapses when they want to get even with their foes. In the fire of revenge, one usually.........






it should be loses not loose doing mistakes should be replaced with making mistakes. vocabulary is good and impressive. grammer a little weak.overall, i don't find this paragraph very impressive but there are few mistakes. try to make it more persuasive next time. overall, good attempt.

International crisis in terrorism
Motivations, powers and ideas of the contemporary terrorists have become unified and globalised in their nature; the globalization of terrorism has made the acts of terror more ferocious than ever before and if they remained unchecked they would result in world anarchy.
Outline
introduction
A.Booming dogma of terrorism
1. Poor process of socialization leads to callous breeding of terrorism in society
2. A safe mean to revenge and inflicting pains of retaliation upon the adversary
3. Getting lime light to advertise the cause
B.Universalized nature of today’s terrorism
1. extended field of action from physical space to human body results in indirect and indiscriminate killing throughout the world
2. combination of religious fervor with intent militant political ideology makes terrorists a universal danger
3. Globalization of ideas and technology has made terrorists dark shadowy forces cannot be found and identified; terrorists living in Russian have been operating networks in Pakistan without any identity.
4. Universal terrorism aimed at inducing harassment, uproar, and sense of insecurity among people and this creates suspicions in international societies against one another

C.Terrorism crisis is hitting the world hard
1. Limiting the feelings of security and creating a situation where every heart is terror stricken
2. Causing real damage to the notion of freedom struggles against foreign oppression
3. Debilitating the already vulnerable nations of third world
4. Widening the, already deep divide, between Islam and west

D. factors reinforcing terrorism in world
1. State arming a group of people other than the regular military
2. Use of militias to attain political goals opens the feebleness of state to militias which is later exploited by them
3. Peer pressure on a terrorist to conform to the norms of his group and spirit of revenge
4. economic and social neglect of a group or minority

E. Who is at the helm of affairs?
1 Big powers and their cold war did alot in nurturing the terrorist networks
3. Rapport between states and terrorists and dual policies of state
4. Opposing interests of the world led to the failure of Un resolution 1373, a convention against funding to terrorists.
F. How terrorism can be dissipated?
1. its cycle ends when people accord sordid status to every terrorist
2. Strong government response in the incubation period curbs the roots of terrorism
3. Reformation movements and shedding off the legacy of revenge in hope of promising bright future drive the end of callous terrorism
Conclusion

Technology makes the transformation of ideas as swift and easy as it has never been before and its natural concomitant is the globalization of ideas. The globalization of ideas revolutionizes the nature of terrorism too and makes it global. The technologically facilitated close interactions of the terrorists make them shadowy forces which cannot be find or identified. They broke the limits of domestic government and domestic land and became dynamic enough to kill the Pakistani bankers in world trade centre USA and French and Spanish mountaineers in the mountains of Pakistan. The French revolutionist, who introduced the word ‘le terreur’ had an identity but today’s terrorist has no identity, he has merged himself with the global network of terrorists and emerges more devastating and dangerous. Not a single day passes without a terrorist action in different countries of the world, terrifying the people that they are the potential targets next time. The terrorism saga is multidimensional and multifaceted and the people have no salvation because states, to keep their status quo, have been pouring money in the coffers of terrorists throughout the world.
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