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Examine this outline
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Just the other day I came across outline for essay entitled "Future of democracy in Pakistan". As I am also working on my writing skills these days so I also tried. Here it is, Seniors assess this outline and highlight the deficiencies and give suggestions for improvement Future of Democracy in Pakistan Outlinne Introduction Basis and foundation of Democracy Roots of democracy embedded deep in South Asia Democracy – an imperative element of Pakistan ideology System of Government in Pakistan Geostrategic location of Pakistan Pakistan – an ideological democratic state Constitutional system of government Military Coups and Marshal law Non-military interventions Dwindling and infirm democracy Contemporary scenario Future outlook Intimidation to Democracy 1. Illiteracy and backwardness of masses 2. Feudalism 3. Unawareness of communities 4. Vulnerable government institutions 5. Grievances among provinces 6. External threats and terrorism 7. Precarious law and order situation 8. Passiveness of folks 9. Incompetent and indifferent government 10. Economic restraints 11. Racism and sectarianism 12. Ethnic disputes 13. Relations with neighboring countries 14. Menace of unemployment 15. Corruption and in transparency prevails 16. Energy crises and water disputes 17. Incapable judiciary 18. Injustice and broken law and order condition 19. Supremacy of bureaucracy 20. Military intrusion in state affairs 21. Thwarted progress Outcome of unstable democratic apparatus Proposals and recommendations for furtherance 1. Strong and genuine leadership 2. Parity among provinces 3. Consciousness and mindfulness of communities 4. Plausible foreign policy 5. Social and economic uplift 6. Say no to marshal law 7. Role and responsibility of media 8. Eradication of terrorism 9. Confiscation and amputation of corruption 10. Revoke medieval social system 11. Proliferation of education 12. Dismiss insecurities on part of countrymen 13. Predomination of Peace and harmony 14. Positive attitude Road of democracy Radiant and sparkling future of democracy Conclusion |
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Point it out where I got off rails
and what is thesis statement ? I mean I have heard about it but not sure that what is it exactly |
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And Thesis statement is the main argument you develop around which your whole essay circulates !
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For example the topic is:
Decline of Education Standards in Pakistan Here is the suggested outline: 1. Introduction (Write 2,3 Lines under introduction in Outline) 2. Thesis Statement Develop argument according to given topic. For Example in this case Thesis Statement will be: Unfortunately in third world countries like Pakistan, education standards are declining perpetually instead of government efforts and It is deteriorating the society at large by curtailing basic educational facilities because education in Pakistan is exam oriented not education oriented. There is a dire need to reform educational policies in Pakistan in terms of providing better education to future generation. (Now the whole essay will rotate about this argument) 3.Causes for decline of education in Pakistan (Give brief details in outline of all the causes in your mind that are responsible for declining standards of education and describe each cause in one paragraph in essay) 4. Effects of declining education on Pakistan Society (Now give brief detail of effects in outline and describe each effect in one paragraph in essay) 5. Critical Analysis of Government Educational Policies (In essay write one or two paragraphs about different government policies. Describe distinguished steps taken by government and the reason for their failures ) 6. Remedial Measures to Improve Education Standards in Pakistan (Write brief measures in outline and Describe each remedy in one paragraph in essay) 7. Conclusion Write one or two lines in outline of conclusion and a paragraph in an essay I hope you will get a better idea about outline.
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this outline is in a doldrums
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Outline must be concentric...Bit of generalization but more specification.Write as an essay not a theoretical analysis.
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