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Brother, looks like we followed the same path interpreting the crux of the topic. Like you, I (also over-analysed it, may be and) went on to prove the contributions WOT has made to ALREADY proliferating abuses of Human Rights. I still believe that this approach is, in no-way, detracted from the topic. |
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I also think rigid replication of the outline matters. Why? If i am the examiner and im least inclined to check all your paper, but assuming im conscientious at the same time, i'd go over every topic sentence in your essay to see if you have kept to your structure (and introduced no new ideas). But hey i wouldn't do that now would i? Especially when i know i can give EVERYONE a zero and get away with it lol.. Your contribution has been invaluable Doc. I wish to see more of you here. And i would've wished you good luck had i been uncertain about the future because i know for sure you will do exceedingly well no matter where you are or what you do. Do stick around for the much-needed-help and Sober company to balance the likes of our dear Mr Justice. Its only been 2 days and he's already become a pain in everyone's behind. Haha |
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FPSC must have marked, "Raw Agent - Disqualified. Investigate for any links. Refer to counter-intelligence department." For me, this was what got you off the race. Thanks for candidly sharing it Quote:
Handwriting Length of Essays Overuse of difficult words Complex outlines and arguments Quotations from personalities considered anti-Pakistan Believe me this effort will pay insha Allaah Quote:
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what do they look for in an essay?
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I'm feeling sleepy right now but let me tell you that there was nothing wrong in your Essay it was of international standard neither you digress from topic nor you broken any rule of Essay. Nono it's not a praise it's my assessment (which obviously can be wrong).Why you failed? There are two major reasons behind it. 1: Poor writing 2: Your Essay was too dense for CSS Since first point is self explanatory so allow me to elaborate second one. A month back in a result anticipation thread you posted your Essay. After having glance at it I felt that you're going to fail because I thought you wrote irrelevant material and digressed from topic. ( my feelings were not different from Toru at that time) Then you asked me "what's wrong with my Essay". To answer your query i read your Essay again with full attention to bring out critique of your Essay. Guess what happened then? I realised your essay is well connected and you proved your point. At the same time I also realised that your essay is too dense to get you pass marks since I have to read your essay twice to get your meaning.( Examiner reads only once). That's why i sided with @darkmoon whose essay was self explanatory and I wrote: Quote:
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does writing matter to such an extent? as i heard its only the matter of legiblity, not the beauty of writing. i also have a very poor writing, but that is easy to read than what is your advice in case of poor writing.
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I think it does, they seem to hate joining handwriting because it is difficult for them. |
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What they see in Essay ?
That is my second attempt and I will share the things which every person while writing the essay lack. First and foremost thing is Hand writing. When I was taking the exam I used to see people around me and they had such a bad hand writing that I asked myself *Are they the students of 5th class*? Second that students don't understand what is the topic of their essay ? They had rote reading about few topics and they just keep on writing. Third is that always use the simple language and let your thoughts to free flow from mind. As 2015 was my second attempt and I passed all my compulsory subjects in 2014 attempt with great marks and was not able to take the optional subjects. I attempted the first essay about Human rights things and I started with quotation of a terrorist and put many interview clippings of terrorists and drone victims plus people who had been mishandled by terrorist organizations. I had not put a single quotation of any renowned author. Yeah except few Quotations by Aymen Al Zahriwi. My essay was complete in research and had tables of for every thing which I wanted to tell to the examiner. My outline was around two and half pages plus it had everything in it. And essay had words around 4500. So it was basically a research paper. Caution ⚠ Never use high vocabulary. Essay should be simple . Fact . My brother has got 79 marks in composition but was only able to secure 30 in essay. So how that is possible ? Because he used words which are even hard to even find in dictionary. Trust me. |
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It is mentioned in the revised syllabus of CSS "Candidates are expected to reflect comprehensive and research based knowledge on a selected topic. Candidate’s articulation, expression and technical treatment of the style of English Essay writing will be examined."
Is it right in essay they check your research based knowledge along with writing styles? Is each and every topic in essay paper required research based knowledge to attempt it?
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They demand mostly research based knowledge. And you should be accurate in English grammar which is a pet thing. Every topic in English or in Urdu language has research in it. So just make yourself a pro in research first .
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