I know how they are treated. I am also in favour of this argument that they should get what they deserve from their parents, from their siblings, and from their society. But what I said is that not involving them in the discussion of gender inequality is only due to their littler strength in population. In fact, women doesn't get their rights in our society the way they are supposed to get, how do you think the third gender would get their rights? I know we would talk about this, highlight this to the people, and spread awareness about it; the next day a child of third sex being born in a family would never get the rights he is supposed to get. This society needs time to bring change and for that we need education, fair and equal education, in each and every town of the country to take the nation out of this and many other major problems.

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free speech should have limitations
introduction : free speech is an idea of expressing opinion and speaking out freely ,which is solely the product of western philosophy of liberalism. it has been advocated by western media and societes vociferously. however, it becomes a lethal weapon if it is used without responsibility ,ill intent and outside its limitations. moreover, technological advancements have made free speech even more dangerous phenomenon. while recent blasphemous acts and subsequent riots are testimony to its devastating misuse, western countries are still defending its free speech idea under the pretext of protecting democratic norms and principles. quite surprisingly, this practice has also revealed double standards of western countries more lucidly. even though,many prominent figures have spoken against its irresponsible use ,and islamic teachings in this regard are no exception. yet it is necessary to put limitations on free speech which will require appropriate steps to ensure its proper use.

free speech should have limitations ( Try to write the topic as you are sitting in exam to make these things part of your natural writing process-- I mean write carefully by taking care of punctuations and capitalization.)
introduction : free speech is an idea of expressing opinion and speaking out freely ,which is solely the product of western philosophy of liberalism. it has been advocated by western media and societes vociferously. however, it becomes a lethal weapon if it is used without responsibility ,ill intent and outside its limitations. moreover, technological advancements have made free speech even more dangerous phenomenon. while recent blasphemous acts and subsequent riots are testimony to its devastating misuse, western countries are still defending its free speech idea under the pretext of protecting democratic norms and principles. quite surprisingly, this practice has also revealed double standards of western countries more lucidly. even though,many prominent figures have spoken against its irresponsible use ,and islamic teachings in this regard are no exception. yet it is necessary to put limitations on free speech which will require appropriate steps to ensure its proper use.

Overall the paragraph is good. In the introductory sentence there is a little bit of adjustment required. You have to make the topic sentence of your introduction clear. Don't make it confusing by expanding it a lot. Apart from it, I find the paragraph clear and to the point. Keep your sentences short, as it keeps you safe from providing vague idea to the reader. And most importantly, next time write with correct punctuations and capitalization.

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awlright thats great my friend, thank you so much for your review and pointing out my mistakes . i will try not to repeat the mistakes you have mentioned (y)