safeer ,waqar ,mustansar, faiza ..please point out my mistakes

Human development must be the objective of all other developments

Introduction

The human development delivers a society intellectually refined and technically self-reliant. Humans are the brains of a nation; their progress decides the rise or fall of the nations. Humans are, irrespective of their geography and resources, the most valuable asset of a state. The advancement in any field is possible only if the humans are cultivated enough to adapt to the changes brought about by progress. Healthy, intelligent and educated humans work to make their nations great and powerful; no rise in status is possible unless the humans are advanced. Therefore, for bringing true success, individual’s development should be the central aim of all the programs. Any social, economic or political program that harms the humans is certainly disastrous for the national development. The holistic success of countries is characterized by their developed humans. No plan can be called innovative and progressive unless it aims at progress of mankind. Human progress is the main tool for unlocking the doors of the political and social success.

Great nations win without fighting


A. introduction

B. Nations who meet their objectives through fighting witness devastation( your first point should be directly addressing the topic, not the details of fighting nations)
1.fighting exhaust resources which result in disharmony and rebellion among populace
2.invasions and territorial gains increase enemies
3.fighting leads to overstretching of empire which eventually end up in disintegration of empires
4.civilizations vanished when fighting becomes their instrument of power

C. How great Nations win without fighting(it's relevant)
1.education remains their top priority
2.women are liberated and empowered
3.democracy and participatory governance are preferred instead of oppressive regimes
4.poverty stricken regions are brought under developmental projects
5.grievances of neglected ones are addressed through dialogue and persuasion instead of military solutions

D. Nations who resort to fighting have to face multifarious consequences( write characteristics of great nations)
1.division of society on ethnic and religious lines
2.resentment among people
3.deep psychological wounds on subsequent generations
4.they become prone to superpower interferences
5.poverty and backwardness become the fate of affected people

E. fruits of victory without fighting are many( give direct reference to great nations)
1.economy is sustained
2.long lasting peace
3.infrastructure remains safe from destruction
4.populations do not pass through rape, torture and deaths

F. Great nations who won without fighting(it's ok)
1.Prophet (PBUH) victory over whole Arabia possible after winning hearts through Makkah bloodless conquest
2.Europe rise began after renaissance
3.Japan became great economic power when she abandoned fighting and wars
4.Canada and England solved its secessionist movements in their countries through referendum
5.china peaceful rise in 21st century

G. dialogue , not fighting is the only way forward for present fightings( why suggesting solutions for fighting ; the main issue is here great nations , not fighting)
1.era of prosperity can be ushered in ,if pakistan India and afghanistan resolved their mutual issues through dialugue
2.Gulf crisis can be resolved if iran and saudia stopped their ideological fighting

H. conclusion


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Human development must be the objective of all other developments

introduction
as given above

A.Only human development brings real progress

1.only educated people create an enlightened society.
2.advancement of human values, culture and economies generate a cooperative nation.
3.developed humans and their ideas bring technological progress.

B. Human development is the indicator of national progress.

1. Humans are tools, working and planning.
2.not material resources but human development decides the positive changes
3.humans form or deform a society.
4.humans decide the effective use of resources.

C.Human development produced great nations

1.cultivation of humans brought stability and peace

2.alleviation of poverty and illiteracy made the nations independent

3.human advancement the sole reason of nation's high status

D.policy of development without aiming at humans generates dependent and feeble society.

Conclusion


Conclusion

@safeer, Mustansir please give your valuable comments!

guys what about the next topic. do you want to write the 'Literature is thought provoking; it allows us to raise questions and gives us a deeper understanding of issues and situations.'

I think other types of developments should also be discussed, and their relationship with human development established.

For example, if a road is to be constructed then it's better to construct it between a college and a village rather than between two villages, both having no college.

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well written.

Literature is thought provoking; it allows us to raise questions and gives us a deeper understanding of issues and situation

Introduction
Literature produces the men of feelings. It is the narration of emotions and nature of human beings. It initiates a thought process to explore the apathies, problems and issues of humanity. It is a study of humans that makes them able to raise questions on the ideas interpreted in novels, fiction and dramas. It exposes the nature of problems beyond their exterior display. It has a dynamic nature, dealing with every aspect of human nature; it gives a deeper understanding of the moments of joy, despair, heroism and cowardice. It explicitly explains the life and a plethora of ideas about diverse concepts of life. It looks beyond the apparent problems and shows the unreliable nature of appearances.
A. Literature provokes thoughts about the life

B. Dynamism of literature allows people to raise questions

1. Diverse opinions about life and resultant queries
2. Contentment, love and despair and their varied interpretations
3. It makes people enquire the truth and aim of their life
4. It raises question that which aspect of life is better; choice to decide right from the wrong

C. It invokes deeper understanding
1. The life beyond the exterior of a man

2. Exposed darkness of character and sins not known to public

3. The problems of civilizations unknown to the world

4. The realities about the moments of success and failures

D. Literature provokes thinking process to know the real face of nations
E. Literature is the tool to initiate thought processes
Conclusion


what about this attempt?? where it stands

I agree, adding a point related with the comparison of other developments will increase its efficacy.and what about your essay preparation?