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I think your outline will be insufficient to reach at word count of 2000. did you write complete essay for this topic to see how many words you can write with this outline?
It is to the point. but you could add more arguments. under the point "D". Your exposition of the essay is also diverse but I would advise you write all points (A1234) in one paragraph. because if it was only about the examples then virtually everything can written in this essay. Focus on arguments would be a wise approach. I like your proposed 3rd heading for my essay. Many thanks. |
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You are write approximately 1800 words can be written from this outline
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But how many words for points A1234 in these 1800 words. Sent from my SM-N900 using Tapatalk
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You are right. Topics like these are really hard to write on. What I think is that topics like these are risky in a sense that if your idea would fall short of examiner's views about such topic then all of the efforts can go in vain with failure in essay paper. Select the safest topics among the given 10 topics. Attempt the one for which you have the highest number of relevant points. Quote:
Don't take any insult just from a post. All of us will evaluate your outline. Post your outline on the current topic. Quote:
Your points are fine. Your introduction has decreased of the level you used to write. Don't drop the level of your writing. I mean last time you wrote great outline with great expressions. This introduction is a little bit like writing English after a long time. Quote:
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thank you ambivalent for your time, i have learned from this thread that we are busy these days, but could you spare some moments to tell me does my outline fall in "safe category" . i know that cant be said with certainty but whats your take. would really appreciate a response
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thank you, ambivalent! the introduction seems not good because it is not introduction , I wrote it as a thesis statement. inshAllah I will upload my introduction paragraph .
and safeer you have rightly pointed out that all points in A can be written in one paragraph, cannot be managed in four. your points related peace as a luxury are satisfactory and convincing. |
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ambivalent!If you skip the introduction then what about the rest of the outline?
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Why predecessor, successor story is repeated?Don't you people think that its getting old?
Its my own humble opinion,readers discretion might be there. Last edited by Man Jaanbazam; Saturday, December 19, 2015 at 12:51 PM. Reason: merge chain posts |
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