The moment the Islamic world demanded economic independence and non-interference in internal policies, the issue of Islam’s incompatibility with the west arises.

Use consistent tense.
Use:
Demanded/arose.
Demands/arises.

Not :
demanded/arises.

Title of this introduction should be "West demonizing Islam" not "Islam vs West".

A better introduction could point out areas where the two actors (Islam and west) are not in tandem. You could have said that Islam and West have different definitions of success in economy, social and political life. The fault line between the two civilizations are not only geographical and tangible (Israel vs palestine) but also cultural and ideological.

Everything you've said here is absolutely true, but introduction is not a place for such content.

Again, I would say that the core of the problem here is breath of the topic. It's too wide.

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it is very difficult to write on such a topic, there is no start and no end of this topic.

it is not possible to write a good essay on this type of topic.

and safeer! after you come come back home we may start writing in a manner that is suitable to all.

three or four days to write a topic, so that you can continue essay writing along with rest of subjects.

I wrote the introduction for this topic many a time then crossed that, finally I got fed up and uploaded this one . this is neither good nor encompassing all the issues involved.

suggest a new topic; join us soon we need your ideas. 4 days for one topic would make this practice easy.

thanks in anticipation

1) Introduction
2) Course of history set the stage for clash between Islam and west
a) Islam originated in the East and could not get roots in the West as it has in East
b) All great Muslim warriors fought against Christians belonging to West
c) Ottoman Empire verses Christian World
d) Colonization of Muslim countries by the Western Countries
e) End of 20th Century widen the gulf between the two
3) Ideological clash between Islam and West
a) Islam as complete code of life VS Western propaganda of negating religion
b) Islamic views based on afterlife VS western base is purely belongs to present life
c) Islamic Political views VS Western Political views
d) Clashes between the two relating to Woman’s status and role in society
4) Conservative Mullahs widening the gulf
a) Majority of Mullahs have shallow knowledge of Islam and they are stick to it
b) Mullahs negate the science and West has progressed in this by leaps and bounds
c) Mullahs are using hatred against West as a tool to keep masses in their control
5) Policies of America seen as Policies of Whole west in Muslim world
6) Palestine VS Israel has taken the shape of Islam VS West
7) West needs a psychological enemy
a) Jews Enemy
b) Soviet Enemy
c) Muslim Enemy
8) Media has created very negative image of Muslims in the West
9) Weapon industry is nourishing from the heat of fire between the two
10) This clash is more of a game of power, wealth and economy than of ideology
11) Conclusion


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You have crafted a very good outline but the question is how will you put everything on paper in three hours....

One more question is how lack of democracy is "wrongdoing" of Muslim world. Many Arab countries were far better before "Arab Spring", and now on the brink of civil war and Libya is destroyed completely after so called revolution for democracy.

A good start...

See above, I've mentioned a few suggestions.

Those two books of IR are:
1- Essentials of International relations by Karen A. Mingst
2- international relations, perspectives and controversies by Kieth L. Shimko

The first is not available in the market. You can easily find the second one.

I would recommended you to study from "globalization of world politics". I came across that book very late. Otherwise I would have chosen that one.

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Thanks... I have noted the points you highlighted in the essay.


Bundle of thanks for IR book recommendation. Currently I am reading INTRODUCTION TO INTERNATIONAL RELATIONS BY ROBERT JACKSON. Very easy and helpful in understanding basic theories of IR. IN SHAH ALLAH after it, will start the one recommended by you....

let's write two essays on this topic.

1) Can Islam and West coexist? -- Yes
2) Can Islam and West coexist? -- No

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yes it will be easy to write on these topics.
thank you

Write on both standpoints. It will be a good mental exercise to defend any stance.
I will also upload my outlines soon.

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Can Islam and west coexist?

Introduction

Ideology is no more the sole reason of split in west and Islam; they are separated apart by their cultures, values and practices. Affinities in faith no more bind them as people of book. This is the differing thinking which have made both of them a rival of the other. People in Islamic world consider west a cause of their destruction, and on the other side, the west feels danger from the unchanged characteristics of Islam. The centuries old tolerance practiced by Islam has been forgotten by the west; what it remembers is the intolerant nature of salafism. West considers the spread of Islamic values a threat to their dynamic and liberal life style. Mutual fears give birth to animosities, which often result in violence against each other. The unrest in Muslim world is an instance of west support for Muslim fragmentation. Irrespective of the fact that Muslim society lived peacefully in west and contributed to the development of the west, it is seen with suspicion. West is regarding Islam indigestible for it. they deem their toleration for Islam a mistake that will destroy their whole dynamic civilization


A. west regards this division a clash of values;

1. West emphasizes individuality whereas Islam stresses upon development of society.
2. Differences of opinion in punishing a criminal
3. Islamic laws are immutable and unchangeable and west considers its own laws as dynamic
4. Islam’s policy of apartheid; Islam does not give equality to nonbelievers.

B. west finds difficult to accommodate Islamic culture:

1. Western liberalism and Islamic conservatism
2. West struggle for gender equality and Islamic gender segregation
3. Islamic political system is devised by Quran and west separates the church and religion
4. Islam regards itself absolute religion; west also considers itself a supreme civilization

C. west fears Islam;

1. The rising awareness of Muslims of their resources and rights endangers the supremacy of west.
2. The rigid and biased version of Islam, the salafism, dreads west
3. They find Islam an attack on their liberal values
4. The immovable rules of Sharia are regarded as political doctrines of Nazism and fascism.

d. mutual fears and reactions to this rift

1. West supports divisions, monarchies and undemocratic culture and internal wars in Muslim world
2. Muslims retaliation results in incidents like Paris bomb blasts
3. Muslim immigrants suffer discrimination

e. tolerance may promote temporal coexistence, but clash of Islam and west is inevitable

conclusion