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Literature is thought provoking; it allows us to raise questions and gives us a deeper understanding of issues and situation

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Literature produces the men of feelings. It is the narration of emotions and nature of human beings. It initiates a thought process to explore the apathies, problems and issues of humanity. It is a study of humans that makes them able to raise questions on the ideas interpreted in novels, fiction and dramas. It exposes the nature of problems beyond their exterior display. It has a dynamic nature, dealing with every aspect of human nature; it gives a deeper understanding of the moments of joy, despair, heroism and cowardice. It explicitly explains the life and a plethora of ideas about diverse concepts of life. It looks beyond the apparent problems and shows the unreliable nature of appearances.
A.Literature provokes thoughts about the life

B.Dynamism of literature allows people to raise questions

1.Diverse opinions about life and resultant queries
2.Contentment, love and despair and their varied interpretations
3.It makes people enquire the truth and aim of their life
4.It raises question that which aspect of life is better; choice to decide right from the wrong

C.It invokes deeper understanding
1.The life beyond the exterior of a man

2.Exposed darkness of character and sins not known to public

3.The problems of civilizations unknown to the world

4.The realities about the moments of success and failures

D.Literature provokes thinking process to know the real face of nations
E.Literature is the tool to initiate thought processes
Conclusion


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Beautifully written for a non literature student.

But probably the paper checker would know a lot about this subject, Different genres, authors, poets and so forth. So I don't know would he or she be satisfied.

And I think this essay is incomplete without a reference to science fiction. Movies made in the early twentieth century and novels written at that time have been translated into a reality.

I would be highly cautious about attempting this topic.

One more thing, this introduction of yours lacks sentence variety. Most of the sentences are starting from "it". (unlike your previous introductions)

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I agree, adding a point related with the comparison of other developments will increase its efficacy.and what about your essay preparation?
Not so good.

I'm caught up in a dilemma of revision which I want to do for at least once. For that, I have to sacrifice essay and precis for a while.



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Not so good.

I'm caught up in a dilemma of revision which I want to do for at least once. For that, I have to sacrifice essay and precis for a while.



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do not sacrifice essay for other subjects. try to give it time once in two days if not daily, but ignoring it for weeks can be a problem.it's my opinion ,yours can be diffrernt but i am telling you my experience.

and for the essay, i am a passionate reader of novels, poetry, history, fiction, jo bhi mil jae; i tried to write all that learned things in it. i havenot written the essay, so not sure whether the points in outline would justify the topic or not.

i think, if one is able to discuss the approaches of different writers and their impacts on society, one can pass it.

i just noticed the repetition of it; it looks bad.
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do not sacrifice essay for other subjects. try to give it time once in two days if not daily, but ignoring it for weeks can be a problem.it's my opinion ,yours can be diffrernt but i am telling you my experience.

and for the essay, i am a passionate reader of novels, poetry, history, fiction, jo bhi mil jae; i tried to write all that learned things in it. i havenot written the essay, so not sure whether the points in outline would justify the topic or not.

i think, if one is able to discuss the approaches of different writers and their impacts on society, one can pass it.

i just noticed the repetition of it; it looks bad.
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you are right brother .css has been reduced to essay only. you pass essay you pass whole css . no body fails in optionals ,however exceptions are always there .so whole game is about essay. and anyone who can write essay well will face no difficulty in managing to flood rest of the papers with beautiful words and reasonable opinions . so i agree too , one should have a practice of essay for at least after two or three days.
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no body fails in optionals ,however exceptions are always there .so whole game is about essay.
I flunked optional
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oh this is so unfortunate . rarely i hear such cases. hope so ,this time you will pull it off . but still i believe you shouldn't take essay for granted
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Literature is thought provoking; it allows us to raise questions and gives us a deeper understanding of issues and situation

Introduction

Literature is the narration of emotions and nature of human beings. Not only it initiates a thought process to explore the issues of humanity, but also it gives a deeper understanding of the moments of joy, despair, heroism and cowardice. Moreover, It has a dynamic nature, dealing with every aspect of human nature and explains the plethora of ideas about diverse concepts of life.It looks beyond the apparent problems and shows the unreliable nature of appearances.


A. Literature provokes thoughts about the life

B. Dynamism of literature allows people to raise questions

1. Diverse opinions about life and resultant queries
2. Contentment, love and despair and their varied interpretations
3. It makes people enquire the truth and aim of their life
4. It raises question that which aspect of life is better; choice to decide right from the wrong

C. It invokes deeper understanding
1. The life beyond the exterior of a man

2. Exposed darkness of character and sins not known to public

3. The problems of civilizations unknown to the world

4. The realities about the moments of success and failures

D. Literature provokes thinking process to know the real face of nations
E. Literature is the tool to initiate thought processes
Conclusion
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Great nations win without fighting
introduction : fighting is the attribute of weak nations. Fall of nations set in when they begin to pursue their objectives through fighting. it is because fighting swallows all state resources, energies of people and devastate infrastructure while at the same time exposes faultlines for external enemies. However, great are the nations who keep education,human development,dialogue, diplomacy and peace above all other priorities which require force. History is also witnessed to the fact that nations such as Japan, Europe emerged when they realized they couldn't stand victorious unless they abandoned fighting and use of force. Therefore, it can be aptly said that nations acquire greatness when they prefer to pursue success without fighting.

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Great nations win without fighting
introduction : fighting is the attribute of weak nations. Fall of nations set in when they begin to pursue their objectives through fighting. it is because fighting swallows all state resources, energies of people and devastate infrastructure while at the same time exposes faultlines for external enemies. However, great are the nations who keep education,human development,dialogue, diplomacy and peace above all other priorities which require force. History is also witnessed to the fact that nations such as Japan, Europe emerged when they realized they couldn't stand victorious unless they abandoned fighting and use of force. Therefore, it can be aptly said that nations acquire greatness when they prefer to pursue success without fighting.

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Fighting is the attribute of weaker nations. Fall of nations set in when they begin to pursue their objectives through fighting. It is because fighting swallows all state resources, energies of people and devastate infrastructure while at the same time exposes fault lines for external enemies. Moreover, history also witnesses to the facts that great are the nations who keep education, human development, dialogue, diplomacy and peace above all other priorities which require force. Therefore, it can be aptly said that nations acquire greatness when they prefer to pursue success without fighting.
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Public office is a public trust
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An empowered public office has all the responsibility to use its powers for the development of the public. ‘Public’ is the power from which the public office derives its authority. The power entrusted to the office is to regulate and facilitate the life of the citizens. Public office has certainly a single basic aim, the welfare of the public. it is a tool to manipulate national resources to make the life of the public better and secured. No public office can justify its existence unless it plays the role of public care taker. Power of public office is not ultimate, but the power with responsibility. Distinguishing characteristic of a public office is its services for the people. The misuse of its power makes the office bearer a culprit, plundering public rights. Public office is a sacred trust whose power is justified only by it efficiency, transparency and accountability.

A. Public office exists for public welfare
1. Democratic culture established public office
2. It functions to facilitate and regulate the life of citizens

B. Only Public empowers public office

1. It derives decision making power from common people
2. People makes it authorize the manipulation of national resources for people’s welfare
3. It is authorized to establish foreign and defense policies

C. solely public is the owner of the powers

1. public office holds responsibility of accountability
2. no misuse of resources and powers is justified
3. public office is installed to serve public

D. people have exclusive power to reject policies and even the office bearer

E. Public office is respectable until it is trustee of public interest
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