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I am sure that your essay must make a complete sense if someone start to read from the first line till the last.
Ha ha ha!
Do you know my mentor used to say me that your written descriprtives would be of such kind that it grabs the attention of his/her reader like a lady grasp the attention of her lover.At the start arise such a controversy that examiner starts vomitting ,if he is eating something, and his eyes bulge out as if he even puts his cursory look.He said to me
Do you how truth is establshed?
Firsit it is ridiculed,
Than it is criticised and lastly it is establshed as self evident fact.
Agar examiner ne mere essay ko even cursory look se bhy prha to tab bhy wo soche ga to zroor,otherwise blind checking ka to man kuch kr nhy sakty.
Third one ye ir nhy ,
Ye reality he,yes i know people will label me as desperatisit.
Like R2p, i studied it from governing mechanism of NATO.
(A sociopolitical perspective)
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My essay was kind of like that:

-We fall in trap of being our worst enemies because we often lack foresight and insight, hence can't anticipate consequences of our actions nor realize worth of our potential.
-We are to blame for our actions, neither anybody nor any fate.
-We have to learn 'ways' to develop our own abilities, only then we can befriend ourselves.
-Those ways include education, introspection and soul searching.
-Those who did it, became successful ie self dependent china and self conscious Buddha etc
-Those who didn't, harmed themselves as an enemy.

-"Friend and foe lies in you,
Whom you embrace, it depends on you"
- The only helping hand you'll find, will be at the end of your own arm etc
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Ha ha ha!
Do you know my mentor used to say me that your written descriprtives would be of such kind that it grabs the attention of his/her reader like a lady grasp the attention of her lover.At the start arise such a controversy that examiner starts vomitting ,if he is eating something, and his eyes bulge out as if he even puts his cursory look.He said to me
Do you how truth is establshed?
Firsit it is ridiculed,
Than it is criticised and lastly it is establshed as self evident fact.
Agar examiner ne mere essay ko even cursory look se bhy prha to tab bhy wo soche ga to zroor,otherwise blind checking ka to man kuch kr nhy sakty.
Third one ye ir nhy ,
Ye reality he,yes i know people will label me as desperatisit.
Like R2p, i studied it from governing mechanism of NATO.
(A sociopolitical perspective)
You've played your cards, now sit back and enjoy.

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You could have elaborated your points starting from 1 blame 2 learn 3 with caution and something like these.
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My essay was kind of like that:

-We fall in trap of being our worst enemies because we often lack foresight and insight, hence can't anticipate consequences of our actions nor realize worth of our potential.
-We are to blame for our actions, neither anybody nor any fate.
-We have to learn 'ways' to develop our own abilities, only then we can befriend ourselves.
-Those ways include education, introspection and soul searching.
-Those who did it, became successful ie self dependent china and self conscious Buddha etc
-Those who didn't, harmed themselves as an enemy.

-"Friend and foe lies in you,
Whom you embrace, it depends on you"
- The only helping hand you'll find, will be at the end of your own arm etc
As clear as crystal.

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You could have elaborated your points starting from 1 blame 2 learn 3 with caution and something like these.good attempt.education doesnt look fitting in outline
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Baaagge examples ko outline may describe nai kia jata.main body main as an arguement kia jata hai.agar ap examples qoute karnay lag jao tou wo ya tou coherrent nai rehte(history kay aytabar say aik k baad aik) ya outline kafi lambi bunte jo kay effective nai rehte
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Ab barre bhai mjhe alliance ka meaning bta do, may be meree english khrab he aur issy trahn ye topic ke sath beh link nhy ho ga,
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You could have elaborated your points starting from 1 blame 2 learn 3 with caution and something like these.good attempt.education doesnt look fitting in outline
This is not my outline..
my outline covered 3 pages and essay 21...
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Do you know what i have mentioned

Ab barre bhai mjhe alliance ka meaning bta do, may be meree english khrab he aur issy trahn ye topic ke sath beh link nhy ho ga,
Check my outline...it is simple .i wont comment on your essay further.you will witness in october.i can merely suggest.everyone has their own dos and donts
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