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Bro! Would you kindly share how to score high as you mentioned that you had learnt how to score high....your response will be highly appreciated.
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Sorry I tried to recall my essay outline but couldn't succeed to recollect it thoroughly. Anyhow, Its structural glimpse is here.
(Outline 3 pages, Essay 14-15 pages)

We have to learn to be our best friends because we fall too easily in the trap of being our worst enemies.

Introduction

“Wherever you stand be the Soul of that place” (Rumi)

"Find the sweetness in your own heart, then you may find the sweetness in every heart" )( Rumi)

Thesis Statement: Self reliance ,Self confidence, Be true & sincere to ourself.
1-Who are Best Friends? & Being our own best friend
2-Who are Worst Enemies? & being our own worst enemy
3-Individual level
4-Society Level
5-National Level

a-Let's be united
b-
c-Positive critic
d-Accepting our own Mistakes
e- No to Blame game
f-
6-How can we be our own best friends?
a-Education
b- Self confidence
c-Sincerity to self
d- Will Power ( Positivity through every thick & thin)
e-Self consciousness
f-Inner peace
g-
7-Why we become our own worst enemy?
A-Lack of self trust
b-Negativity
c-(we become prey to our painful part of life)
d-
8-Consequences of being our own best friends
a- Harmony
b-
c-
d-
9-Consequences of being our own worst enemy
a- Destruction of Soul leading to destruction of a Nation
b-
c-violence
d-
10-Examples of Nations: own best friends
a- Japan
b- China
c- USA
d-Canada
Conclusion:
The second quote is excellent and it alone can be enough to get through.

You've rightly grasped the idea. Well done.

The only issue is that making main headings such as at state level, at international level, etc doesn't sound smart.

Carry the hope and have faith.

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Bro! Would you kindly share how to score high as you mentioned that you had learnt how to score high....your response will be highly appreciated.
Dear, no extra ordinary knowledge is required. There are hardly 25 topics for each subject. You just have to make excellent notes on all those topics and spare at least two months before the exam to revise your personal Master work.

But having an understanding of the subject as a whole is also critical. So for every subject read as many books during the initial phase of your preparation. And finally, every subject has its own l language and art to attempt the paper. For example, same question which might appear on current affairs, pakistan affairs and IR must be written with a different approach.

It is easy to say but the only way to understand what I am saying is to go through the process.

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Bro! Would you kindly share how to score high as you mentioned that you had learnt how to score high....your response will be highly appreciated.
One more thing, find commonalities among the successful and the failures. For example, if I fail then you can learn that over confidence is a bad thing. If I pass then you can learn to stay on your stance when you are sure about it.

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Yes first attempt, seven months.

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Dear, no extra ordinary knowledge is required. There are hardly 25 topics for each subject. You just have to make excellent notes on all those topics and spare at least two months before the exam to revise your personal Master work.

But having an understanding of the subject as a whole is also critical. So for every subject read as many books during the initial phase of your preparation. And finally, every subject has its own l language and art to attempt the paper. For example, same question which might appear on current affairs, pakistan affairs and IR must be written with a different approach.

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Agreed... but you mentioned that you learnt now how to score high, that's what I want to know.
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Bro! Would you kindly share how to score high as you mentioned that you had learnt how to score high....your response will be highly appreciated.
One more thing, find commonalities among the successful and the failures. For example, if I fail then you can learn that over confidence is a bad thing. If I pass then you can learn to stay on your stance when you are sure about it.
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Agreed... but you mentioned that you learnt now how to score high, that's what I want to know.
I just told you. Have a firm grasp on the subject and prepare excellent notes. Sounds simple but actually is quite tricky!

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We have to learn to be our own best friends because we have fallen too easily into trap to be our enemies.
Thesis statement
Success of humanity is determined by the level of its self friendship. Disasters have been invited by none but by humanity’s enmity against its own self.
A. Self- friendship determines success
B. Humanity suffers because it becomes its own enemy
1. Security and armaments
2. Green revolution and health hazards
3. Industrialization and challenged existence of life on earth
4. Nuclear power and endangered peace
C. Friendly approach towards itself can save humanity
1. End of insecurity and perpetual peace
2. Universal efforts to save the life on earth
There were two more headings which I can’t recall
3……………………………………..
4………………………………………..
D. Humanity is a victim of its own enmity
E. Salvation lies in being our own friend
Conclusion
Details; my outline consumed two pages and the essay took 16 pages.
It was connected and coherent but I have done one blunder I wrote the word ‘enemity’ instead of enmity.
Please give your opinion about essay, marks , pass, fail ,whatever you feel; introduction and conclusion both were solid .one thing more which I did wrong as writing own self as ‘ownself’
Good!relevant and well connected.Hopefully you pass the essay.
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  • we have to learn to be our own best friends,because we fall too easily into the trap being our own worst enemy
  • into
  • "of man first disobidience and fruit of that forbidden tree whose mortal taste brought death and destruction into the world and all our woes with loss of heaven "(milton) a weak building falls when catastrophe comes .humanity too suffers being caught up in traps wether individual at ethnic religious racial national or international level.anyone who is going for kill can challenge lion in his den because he or she is armed to teeth so how humanity falls into trap.there are reasons
  • due to carelessness rather committment
  • due to evasiveness rather being explicit
  • due to coveteousness rather contentedness
  • due to haughtyness rather humbleness
  • due to submissiveness rather smartness
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Sorry I tried to recall my essay outline but couldn't succeed to recollect it thoroughly. Anyhow, Its structural glimpse is here.
(Outline 3 pages, Essay 14-15 pages)

We have to learn to be our best friends because we fall too easily in the trap of being our worst enemies.

Introduction

“Wherever you stand be the Soul of that place” (Rumi)

"Find the sweetness in your own heart, then you may find the sweetness in every heart" )( Rumi)

Thesis Statement: Self reliance ,Self confidence, Be true & sincere to ourself.
1-Who are Best Friends? & Being our own best friend
2-Who are Worst Enemies? & being our own worst enemy
3-Individual level
4-Society Level
5-National Level

a-Let's be united
b-
c-Positive critic
d-Accepting our own Mistakes
e- No to Blame game
f-
6-How can we be our own best friends?
a-Education
b- Self confidence
c-Sincerity to self
d- Will Power ( Positivity through every thick & thin)
e-Self consciousness
f-Inner peace
g-
7-Why we become our own worst enemy?
A-Lack of self trust
b-Negativity
c-(we become prey to our painful part of life)
d-
8-Consequences of being our own best friends
a- Harmony
b-
c-
d-
9-Consequences of being our own worst enemy
a- Destruction of Soul leading to destruction of a Nation
b-
c-violence
d-
10-Examples of Nations: own best friends
a- Japan
b- China
c- USA
d-Canada
Conclusion:
Can't believe i had almost the same outline..
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