[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;916487]I was expecting some logical response but you are too rash at passing comments.Now it's quite obvious divine soul!




All i said was your approach is philosoplical and ursla's is practical . my view(purely subjective) is that pragmatism is better than philosophy.

In the paper but i m full sure of getting passing marks ... what ever essay they would give

Nice effort indeed, however what I think these following points strayed from the cardinal gist of essay topic and explicates as if it is kind of " Environmental science paper ".

1. Security and armaments
2. Green revolution and health hazards
3. Industrialization and challenged existence of life on earth
4. Nuclear power and endangered peace
C. Friendly approach towards itself can save humanity
1. End of insecurity and perpetual peace
2. Universal efforts to save the life on earth

In-case, you came back on track which you just said "There were two more headings which I can’t recall". It could be good for you.

Yes, relevancy is there in these following points "

D. Humanity is a victim of its own enmity
E. Salvation lies in being our own friend

Overall, I guess your write up is suffice to get through essay paper, but in-between you slightly drifted which seems that you probably got nervous, because I have been following all your essays which you practiced before and all those were on target.

Thank you

Finder keepers loosers weepers....

[QUOTE=neversaynever;916529]Pragmatism is surely better provided that it is not based on deviant connections

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i cant agree more ,the crux of the whole idea of hard work and direction required

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Mam, sorry to say you're wrong
Let's have a look what FPSC has mentioned in their revised syllabus
candidates are expected to reflect comprehensive and research based knowledge on a selected topic. Candidate's articulation, expression and technical treatment of the style of English essay will be examined.
Neither your nor mine statement. Its fpsc in hers revised syllabus
Keep your work and I really enjoy your comments.

Think in a broader perspective,All humans are equal and poverty is a stigma on the grimace of humanity. I had written in that perspective.
My thesis was that all secrete agreements and system of government through which peoples thoughts and ideas are galvanized are based on exploitative system ,thus I provided the concrete evidences.
My essay was based on inverted pyramid,I.e. my teacher has told me to write the most important information first and than proceed to general observation in terms of the order of arguments.Hope you got it.

Thanks for this comment, even my teacher said this provided examiner is rational.
These agreements have really introduced the instability and chaos in the region and you know what ?
By signing CETO,we were switched to imf.Thanks for their liberal efforts for making us begging bowl.(let me tell you we are living in a complex sulystem anx we are part of it,you cant live in isolation and that they are our friends as well,
How?
Do you believe in "a friend in need is a friend indeed",than it is Imf which has provided life line to our crippling economy.)
Rest, I have already explained the importance of CETO and SENTO on this forum as well.Just check them out.

lastly,I would love to quote the wordings of my deceased grandfather
Jb man books prhty thy our mjh se puchte the,Putra itna prh k krsen k.
Te man kehny San,Nana Abu man apne ap an talash krny an.
Ouh khne sunrh,Bus Allah koul toba krya kr us ghurbat kolun Jo tehnu apna eman bechne the majboor kr dewe.(repent from your almighty Allah for such endemic poverty ,which drag you among the hedonist)
Today,humanity is suffering and bleeding,have you ever seen such a desperate poverty?
Yes, I have seen that
That's why I thought our worst enemy is poverty,injustice and slavery. You will laugh when I say that we are suffering from worlds most endemic slavery, but any way its true.Its not ir, its hard and bitter fact.
I wish examiner could be able to understand my point view.

zealot bhai..how much marks can u get from good outlines alone.?....just curious

I posted my outline on page 8 .anyone can check and comment.only cheap commedians will create cheap humour after reading at first glance my mistake"we fall into enemy's trap".my spirit of essay which is full of ironies and satire there is no accounting for taste in this world really.anyway i will give this devil his due....never say never he really made my day..... laugh out louder please

Its not your business sorry