Have you written all these paragraphs ?

I had read many of articles and take these line with some modification,,

I see. Those articles reminded me of a piece of writing I read of Mr Ahmad Shah, so I asked you. Well, you need to write a paragraph solely from your own mind. Then, we can diagnose any errors.

Im going to share with you a paragraph that I have written on the same topic.

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Desperate situations require desperate remedies "Lord Nelson" - British Flag Officer in the Royal Navy.

seriously speaking ,, in my mind Pakistan is a totally failure to manage its democracy,, there is corruption , immense political instability, panama etc, and much more,, there is no any future of democracy so far,, though I am not a deliberate follower of any party,, but what if the checker is of pmln or pti or ppp ,, or even mqm

The very thought that the examiner might have subscribed his views to a particular political party haunts every candidate. But, in theory, the examiner is expected to be apolitical. Imagine, if, contrary to our expectation, the examiner is not apolitical, atleast our essay must not credit or discredit any particular political party. I suggest you to write an essay without any bias towards any side, discussing facts and keeping style analytical, so that it is acceptable to almost any reader irrespective of his/her political orientation.

For example, you can discuss that corruption is endemic is state departments and must be rooted out if democracy is to function smoothly. The future seems bright as successive Governments have taken pragmatic steps, to halt the practice of corruption, consistent with their manifestos and Public Initiatives.

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Desperate situations require desperate remedies "Lord Nelson" - British Flag Officer in the Royal Navy.

Is it good to give references of world democracies such as:

American Democracy in light of Balance of Power
Power is divided into three categories: 1. Judicial, 2. Executive, 3. Legislative

Also the first 10 amendments on bill of rights in American Constitution.

As well as for any bill to become a law it requires to go through the parliament of states. Not all powers are distributed to Federal/Central Governments.

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I Think you mean separation of powers, Balance of Power is a term In International Relations wherein there is a situation in which states of the world have roughly equal power.

thanks for clearing me. but my question is still unanswered :p

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It always seems impossible until it's done.
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