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Hi Aniya,
Thank you for the precious hints. Could this be an appropriate Thesis statement for this essay ? Crisis of Good Governance in Pakistan: need for reforms and institution building. Thesis Statement: Owning to multifarious reasons, good governance in Pakistan is in total crisis; serious as well as effective reforms and institution building are the core hopes to this issue. |
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Thanks a lot for pointing out the mistakes and most importantly, taking out time to do so Well some were due to typing errors on the mobile I am afraid, like in the first paragraph there was to be a semi colon instead of a full stop for the last sentence: "All is well that ends well, they say, and we still have time to improve the system of governance that truly facilitates the people; a system which delivers the bare necessities of life and promises a good future for Pakistan." Overall you pointed out very valid errors and I will try to avoid using long sentences. Could you, or any other member, please point out some of the grammatical mistakes in the sentences? And yes, overuse of "need" in one sentence I guess I will have to change this essay ALTOGETHER! |
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