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Country life is better than city life.(2013)


1) Introduction

Life is complex. No matter whether it is the busy life of a city or life in a country that lacks basic necessities. It may be preferable to adjust in a hectic city rather than surviving without fundamentals that are essentially needed. This proves that country life may not consist of much benefits in comparison to city life. Both of these ways of living may have large number of advantages and disadvantages that affect the people who live there. These effects can be positive for some people while negative for others. Both of these ways of living are completely different from each other and innumerable examples are existing to prove that. Fundamentally, country life refers to the life in rural areas while city life describes the living in urban areas. The development of cities has certainly differentiated the lifestyle of city citizens and country's population.


2) What are the factors due to which city life is referred to as busy?

2.1) Laborious jobs

2.2) Changes in technology

2.3) Cultural differences between people

2.4) Large number of substitutes in markets

2.5) High competition




3) How these factors contribute in converting the busy city life into a benefit?


3.1) Increased efficiency of people through laborious jobs

3.2) Skillful employees due to changes in technology

3.3) New ideas because of cultural differences

3.4) Provision of high quality in products

3.5) Increase in competitiveness amongst professionals due to high competition





4) What are the qualities and needs that are not present in countries making country life less preferable in comparison to city life ?

4.1) Proper education

4.2) Luxuries related to entertainment

4.3) Technological advancement

4.4) Appropriate accomodation

4.5) Best hospitals




5) Facts and figures proving country life as less reliable

5.1) Increased deaths in countries
5.2) More people suffering from
diseases in a country
5.3) Homelessness in countries
5.4) Less number of literate people in countries
5.5) More immature acts take place in countries





6) What are the reasons due to which country life has been highly suppressed?

6.1) Ignorance of government
6.2) Lack of sensibility in people
6.3)Lack of resources
6.4) No trainings held
6.5) People unaware of their rights





7) Conclusion
7.1) Disagreed to the statement

Accurately nailed it However, thesis statement is too long; try to make it as one-liner or two-liner statement. Secondly, try to make extensive heading rather than one or two-word heading. It gives a positive impression to the checker as he doesn't have ample time to read your whole essay. The outlines and intro are the two main things that make a difference. You have all the abilities to crack the essay paper.

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Thank youuu soooo very much sirr, your feedback really means alot. I'll keep in mind all the points that you've highlighted and will improve InshAllah. JazakAllah.