I have been clean bold by Essay Paper and am finding no help whatsoever to rectify and rather identify what was my mistake in Essay Paper; as it went well for me.

I could score only 31 despite my best efforts.

After having been bamboozled by Essay Paper, i request to all of you to please suggest Tips and Guidance to improve Essay such that i can reach upto the level desired from a CSS-candidate by FPSC.

Well it is quite right that Essay is the major hurdle in passing CSS exam. and once you pass Essay you have almost cleared 50 percent of the written part,, what I have learnt over the years regarding ESSAY paper is as under:
1. Your written english should be free of grammatical and spelling mistakes, even if you use simple english with ordinary vocabulary that also does not matters if it is free of mistakes
2. Read the statement of the essay again and again and try to collect only those points which are relevant to that statement.
3. Concentrate more and more on the Introduction, in your intro show the examiner that what you have got, even I have heard that the paper checkers decide after reading your intro that he will pass you or not.
Rest, try to complete your essay within time do not leave it unfinished.
I guess these are the things that matter, this was the strategy that i had opted.. goodluck

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causes of your low score?
spelling errors, perhaps. isn't it clean "bowled"?

Essay paper flaunt enormity for almost 90% of aspirants, as per my guesswork ,the remaining ten% mark just 40 luckily, the next 2.5% of the aspirants don't know ,how much fecund their essay for themselves is, & the last resting 2.5% of aspirants are those acute/perceptive/astute/canny/discerning/adroit/clear-sighted/far-sighted/apprehending/adept/artfull & craftfull aspirants who know, the know-how of essay paper & the potentional/capacity/caliber of their written essay that what figures can my essay affix on the face of marks sheet. Essay paper is a very conducive/favourable/adaptable/commensurate/appropriate/compatible/decorous/befitting/convenient/facile & easy paper as I speculate. I have conceived the chicanery/chicane/deception/trickery/artifice/deviousness/bamboozlement/deceitfulness/craftness/duplicity/delusion & illusion of essay, because of this essay is not anymore elusive for me & to write an aesthetic/beautiful/enormous/gorgeous/magnificent/marvelous/eminent/glorious/august/brilliant/dignified/praise/admired & definitive essay INSHALLAH, as I aim to tackle ce-2013. if My trick works,do the job & I could clear essay + exam, I will do reveal this mystery & make this secret open for many of the abstruse/confuse/confound/bewilder/perplex/discomfit/circuitous/ambiguous/cryptic/delphic & esoteric minded aspirants but not yet, because css is a game & I aim to sweep it clean , & not to be be bamboozled like chintoo 2010 INSHALLAH.

Pray for me , to get the golden trick ahead

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