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Dear. I scored 41 and 43 respectively in my two attempts.
And you should strictly refrain from any kind of flowery language.
Be simple and precise.
Examiner intends to know your point of view. He isn't interested in your vocabulary at all.
In which subject you flung ? I am keen to know your`s DMC and hoping you will share it definitely. I do not like your`s post title but the very first post ; it is good one .
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In which subject you flung ? I am keen to know your`s DMC and hoping you will share it definitely. I do not like your`s post title but the very first post ; it is good one .
Here is my dmc.
Essay. 41
English Composition. 64
Islamiat. 50
G. K. 117
Arabic. 122
Islamic History. 122
Journalism. 54
Pushto. 46
I stumbled in General Knowledge by 3 marks.
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You Brother! are a lifesaver. These are my true feelings.

I used to think the same way about essay writing as you do, the day i entered an academy the teachers took the mick out of my thoughts and said exactly opposite to what you wrote up there and what i think too.

I was so scared today but fortunately came across your post. I'm just praying for you from the bottom of my heart. Live long mate!
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You Brother! are a lifesaver. These are my true feelings.

I used to think the same way about essay writing as you do, the day i entered an academy the teachers took the mick out of my thoughts and said exactly opposite to what you wrote up there and what i think too.

I was so scared today but fortunately came across your post. I'm just praying for you from the bottom of my heart. Live long mate!
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I just have no words to express my delight after having received such comments of yours and other fellows.
I'm not a life-saver but a simple human being.
I read a text message which stated, " An expert is a person who tells you a simple thing in a complicated manner just to make you think that the confusion was your own fault. "
I'm not an expert but a human being, a simple human being.
Just remember in your prayers. :-)
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Ainuddin bhai first of all I would like to thank you for your selfless effort aiming at providing some sort of relief to the aspirants suffering from essay-phobia. I found your post very helpful. I have two questions in my mind. First: Is it a must to write an outline in neat before the essay? and if yes then: Is it a must to make out a paragraph of each bullet/ point of that outline. Secondly I would like to ask that what should be the length of a paragraph in terms of number of words and sentences. I mean how far can we strerch or contact a paragraph.An input from others seniors will be appretiated as well.

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Here is my dmc.
Essay. 41
English Composition. 64
Islamiat. 50
G. K. 117
Arabic. 122
Islamic History. 122
Journalism. 54
Pushto. 46
I stumbled in General Knowledge by 3 marks.
real real bad luck
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i think material in shape of sum statistical data is necessary if u want o gain more marks than others ... writing essay on education, corruption, poverty.. one shld add their current ratio in pakistan and i think adding day to day examples will also work when ur discussing causes or effects .....
dats my opnion
and one shld write essay on topic on which he has good command to b on secure side.. experimenting in exam is not good ploicy
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I couldn't agree more brother. I will like to share my personal experience here. 2012 was my 1st attempt & I opted 'A Critical Analysis of Education Systems in Pakistan.' just on my instinct. I kept it as simple as it can be. I didn't use much quotes or excerpts. I even couldn't compile the outline properly due to lack of time but still I managed 48 marks. Why ?? Because I think it was all my own content in plain & simple language.

So I will say that instead of opting an anticipated essay, go for the one that addresses generic issues so you rely more on your own thoughts than some uniform statistics which 9 out of 10 candidates will pen down.

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Here is my dmc.
Essay. 41
English Composition. 64
Islamiat. 50
G. K. 117
Arabic. 122
Islamic History. 122
Journalism. 54
Pushto. 46
I stumbled in General Knowledge by 3 marks.
Sir can you share individual marks of the 3 subjects of GK?

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