Outlines

1)Current Conditions
a)Agricultural country
b) other financial sectors situations
c)GDP

2) Causes
a) Corruption
b) Political disorder
c)Lack of Technology
d) Increase-decrease in import export
e) Educational concerns
f)Shift of talent
g) lawlessness



3)Effects
a) Country Entire growth towards decline
b) High inflation
c)poverty
d)selfishness and materialism
e) Higher rate of Crime

4)Suggestions:
a)To eradicate corruption
b)Ensure to give employment opportunities for everyone
c)Promoting professional and technical education
d)Imposing law and orders
e)Decrease on import and encourage to export

5)Conclusion




As per estimate, about 70% of Pakistan is an agricultural country but no doubt ; with regard to economy, other major financial sectors can not be ignored. It is harrowing that, very few companies are successful to be placed in “blue chip” category, while majority of others are exposed to downfall significantly. It is justifiably true that, among all major causes of collapse, Corruption on macro level; is on top, which impedes country to progress by leap and bound. Correspondingly, remarkable increase of shift of talent to other countries, rise and shrink in import,export respectively, lack of technological advancement are some other factors, causing a reason for deterioration. As a consequence, the whole country diverts to road to ruin and eventually involved in a situation, where selfishness and materialism are on peak, crimes rate increased,prices hike, poor becomes poorer while rich continues to amass wealth much than ever.
It is rightly said by Napoleon that, Growth and strength come only through continuous efforts and struggle” and now each one of us, must have to come forward. Firstly, corruption must be eradicated immediately, discourage import, and a wise policy should be adapted to promoting professional and skilled education on priority basis. Why talented qualified workers are going abroad ?, Facilitating them with excellent opportunities to have them back. Off course; in order to, meet these goals, maintenance of law and order is also essential.

Thanks a lot dear for your useful contribution.

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Your attempt is good. However, there are few grammatical mistakes in your introduction. You are doing a nice job. Just keep it up.

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Thanks dear. would you please elaborate and correct those grammatical mistakes in my introduction. Last day i read a thread here by administrator mentioning that headlines are no longer used in essay. so it means that these are just here to trigger ideas. therefore i didn't choose suitable wording for that. and i don't think we should focus on that either.

Because power crisis is concerned with energy crisis. Power boosts energy that's why every body has highlighted it. Thanks.

Every body is highly welcomed to check out my essay, can discuss, criticize and point out my mistakes. I will be very thankful to you. Please check it out in detailed manner. Thanks.

@ Shakeel ghori such topics 'Economy of Pakistan' will not be asked in our exam, because these sorts of topics are very simple, and can be asked on lower level of exams, please post some standard topics like according to the CSS level. I hope you will consider my point, actually you need to post like this 'Causes of decline in Economic Growth of Pakistan, Its consequences, Pakistan's economy and third words in present day like this. So that we can discuss in dynamic dimensions. Though you select a very good topic but dimension was very simple.

While attempting I was thinking that what should be mentioned in this simple topic what is just our economy? just present state of economy or its causes or what? Anyway, I attempted what I understood, and shakeel sir you did not check out my previous essay of energy crisis, please check out my essay in detailed manner, as I always check out every body's attempts in detailed manner as much as I can with my limited knowledge.


Economy of Pakistan

1.Introduction

2.Present state of Economy of Pakistan

3.Historical Background
1947-1955 (New state, (without constitution, only depend on Indian council act 1935) no economic policy)
1955-1971 (Golden period, revolution in agriculture & industry)
1971-1988 (Economy began to decline in rapid speed)
1988-1999 (Till Nawaz govt. highly dominancy of Western countries due to loan, IMF, WB, (Karz utaro mulk sawaro)
1999-2008 (Pak was amongst the top 11 countries, which were on apex in economic growth (Musharf's regime)
2008-2013 (According to International Transparency report, all records of corruption have been broken by PPP govt)

3. Economic Problems
a. Power crises and war on terrorism, root of basic economic problems
b. Loss of MNCs business
c. Tumbling stock market
d. Unprecedented Inflation
e. Declining exports
f. Loss of Foreign Exchange through Tourism Industry
g. Influx of local people from war-ridden areas and their rehabilitation
h.Poor performance of Agricultural and industrial sector owing to energy crisis and bad management
Decline in GDP

4.Impacts of Pakistan's economy
a.Inflation & burden on state bank
b.Decline in GDP
c.Brain Drain
d.Decline in Foreign Direct Investment
e.Increasing in crime owing to poverty
f.Devaluation of Pak Rupee
g.State of Anarchism

4. Remedies to strengthen our Economy
a. Improved law and order situation
b. Poverty alleviation
c. Stern accountability
d. Building new dams to curb energy crises
e. Corruption and malpractice
f. Outstanding monetary and fiscal policy
g.Crystal Clear foreing policy
i.Diplomatic dialogue with India to boost trade
ii.Free trade should be done with central and western countries
iii.Pak Iran gas pipe line
h.Strengthen technical education
i. Trust Deficit

5.Conclusion


...................Pakistan is an agricultural country. Nearly 70 percent land of Pakistan is dependent on Agriculture. Due to energy crisis, agricultural sector is going down day by day. Apart from this, Industrial sector is also becoming weak due to bad management and malpractice. As a matter of fact, due to fluctuation in foreign exchange, the devaluation of Pakistani rupees and American dollar's dominancy are becoming the destiny of our country. Poor people are becoming poorer and rich becoming richer day by day due to poor economic phenomenon. In these circumstances, mostly politicians have become vampires and they are keep sucking on the blood from the very poor people and they don't dare to work for what they have been elected. Poor people are unable to get their basic rights, people are leaving Pakistan in order to search other heavens at abroad. Foreigners do not invest here owing to uncertainty, no one knows what is going to be happened in the upcoming twenty minutes. This is the Pakistan that was created by our legend leaders i.e. Quaid-e-Azam, Allama Iqbal etc. Our founder of Pakistan what is known as Quaid e Azam who must be watching todays' Pakistan that humans and animals are drinking water from a same pond, a jobless graduate putting himself on fire, kids are being saled by their mothers due to poor circumstances and many awful seances are the state of sorry, which become cause of tears in the eyes, our founder of Paksitna must be weeping like a wolf in a big elephantic sound that this is the Pakistan I had made for what!. However, it is the need of our to control these circumstances by an outstanding economic system, to make our economy good enough, it must be noticed that not economy but politics is a key to success, so democracy must be strengthen and politicians must be elected after their credibility and economic polices and their agenda must be seen. On the other hand, coming government has to be good enough in order to strengthen economic growth with the collaboration of developing and developed countries. it is the time to take considerable steps so that we can make our Pakistan 'Quaid e Azam ka Pakistan'.

Very good attempt. Your outlines are placed well, as far as introduction is concered, you have nearly touched each point. There were some typo spelling mistakes I have pointed out. Nice attempt sir shakeel. Keep it up.

And please please check out my attempts in detailed manner on daily basis I will highly be thankful to you. As we are on learneing process, you are talented and seniors, apne ilm se kuch humen b faiz den Thanks...Really nice work Sir Shakeel. Keep it up.

CAN ANYBODY write a Sample "Introduction" of any Essay of Your CHoice.

Most of the People only share OUTLINES.

We not only make outlines, but also write introductions of the given topics. Tell us if you need any kind of help regarding essay. The respected members will possibly answer your query with the best of their intentions.

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I am of the opinion that the democracy is not stable yet. As far as the connection of politics with economic prosperity is concerened, I think later can never flourish if the former is unstable.

I am really thankful to you for pointing out few of my explicit mistakes.

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