Dear Forum Members,

I am pretty clueless regarding essay exam, since most aspirants fail Essay. I have drafted an outline for the essay "Women in Islam." Kindly let me know if it looks fine. Seniors are especially requested to comment on the order and coherence.


Women in Islam
I. Introduction
II. Some general statements regarding the impact of Islam
III. Western propaganda points declaring Islam permitting women oppression
IV. Women in other cultures
V. Social status of women in Islam
A. As a mother
B. As a wife
C. As a daughter
D. The rationale for Hijab
VI. Economic Securities for Women
A. Inheritance
B. Right of being provided for
I wonder what else can I add in economic securities
VII. Political status: not sure what to include here
VIII. Women in Pakistan
IX. Some examples of prominent Muslim women
X. Is the Muslim world treating women as per Islam?
XI. Recommendations
XII. Conclusion

Kindly comment whether it seems focused and coherent. What should be added or deleted?

Well, it is well portrayed but after introduction give a comprehensive history of how women were treated before the invent of Islam. Secondly, in economic securities try to expand it in terms of daughter, wife, mother and the right of doing job under the umbrella of Islam. However, in political status you can add up that she has the right to join the politics for the sake of women rights so that other women rights shouldn't be ignored. Additionally, you can quote some examples of women at the time of Hazrat Mohammad PBUH that how they lived as Prophet PBUH wives themselves were indulged in doing business.

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