well, do not be confused from my comments, you may go even without outline. It is not a necessary part of an essay. May be the senior who guided you earliar was an expert one, which of course I am not. so please if you wana reduce your outline to a fewer headings, go ahead, but ....BUT it should depicts your mind picture clearly and coherently.

no im nt confused i jz tried to explain the point......keepn on interacting your posts r encouraging

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@ Csps and experienced members of Forum

I m quite desperate as i thot some seniors(who have taken css exam) will comment at my essay....but no one did it. I think my effort do not worth any comments by them

any way

Regards

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@ rishzzz.

I have read your essay. Well tried. Grammatically it is perfect but you have to make some changes as far as your style is concerned.

There has to be an introduction of 1 or 2 pages in which you must define extremism.

Then you should follow this formula in the body of the essay:
1. Cause
2. Effect
3. Solution.

First of all you have to tell the causes of extremism in Pakistan ( which you did well in your essay).

After that you have to analyse what are the effects of extremism in Pakistan. Causes and effects have to be seperate; dont mix them.

After that you have to present some solutions to extremism; how we can get rid of extremism in Pakistan. Remember that when you undo the causes, you will find solution for any problem.

In the end conclusion is v.important, which has to be a summary of what you have written on the previous pages.

This is the pattern that you must follow while writing any essay in the exam. Keep working, daily practice is necessary. Sorry for late reply, i am also going to reappear in 2010. If you have any other essay or precis, you can directly mail me; i will check that too. Ok. Best of Luck.

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Thanx dear...Thanx a lot

It encouraged me a lot that some experienced budy chekd my essay.....
Ok i ll mail you next essays and precis which i wrote...Thanx again

Regards

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hi

good attempt.
just want to add what i know.
1- dont use heading within your essay.
2-view the topic from every aspect: political, social, economic, religious, etc. and write in a way that they can be viewed by the examiner clearly.
3-substantiate your points through facts and figures.
4-keep the balance between your essay paragraphs, i just gave a look and saw that while some of your paragraphs are lengthy others are too short.


and yes one thing else:
try to avoid controversial topics............thats what i think,,,might not be genuine.

this is what i know, hope it would be of some help to you.
remember me in your prayers.


regards!!!

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@ Ruby
Thanx buddy
Yup ur rite Order was not that regular, i ll make it luk good in next effort and essay is short of facts and figures, iknw......Will overcome it in.a

Regards

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HI all members, i urge u all to put another effort to keep the ball rolling

As i m trying to write an essay on Corruption, being one of the hottest topic in Css 2010.
So i will post it in few time......U all try to make the same essay so that v cud share our points and style to make our effort in paper exceptional.....

Regards

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Hey Guys!!!

Speed up the efforts in every subject
and write as many essays before 15th feb cz after that pinching tension would aggravate ur mind n nerves, so its better to finish things early and leave rest of the time for revision....

Best of Luck for all
N May allah Succed us in our mission....Ameeen


Remember me in ur prayers, i need them badly

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Could anyone please tell me if the outline of an essay is graded in the exam? and secondly, can we give headings in an essay?