AOA…

Here goes my first outline of first essay .please check it and give me recommendation, comments to organize it.
As I know my outline is not organize, there is no connectivity (rabt) between main headings and same with points. I need a lot of practice, there is always need room of improvement.

Also comment does it cover all main points, that demands the topic, what should remove or add more?

Note: All members are free to criticize, especially DON
Sir please add ur comments on my outline.

Thanks…

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Terrorism

Introduction
1. what is Terrorism
2. Definition from the Arab Convention for the Suppression Terrorism
3. Types/forms of Terrorism
• State Terrorism
• Bio Terrorism
• Cyber Terrorism
• Eco Terrorism
• Nuclear Terrorism
• Narco Terrorism
• Suicide terrorism(psychological warfare)

Islam and prohibition of Terrorism
1. Meaning of word ISLAM: derived from word “Salam” meaning: peace
2.Quranic Verses
3.Ahadith
4.Examples from Islamic History
5. Misunderstaing of Islam
• False media projection
6.How to remove false misperception
• Mass awareness
• Reconstructing OIC

Terrorism past & Present Scenario
1. Terrorism as a Religious Imperative
2. Trends in Terrorism
3. The Future Terrorist Threat

Pakistan’s role in the war on Terror
1. Wazirastan
2. Actions
3. Effect of Pakistan role in war
• On international level
• Within Pakistan
• Western involvement in terrorism in Pakistan
4. Future concern

Causes of Terrorism
1. Social and political injustice
2. Psychological Causes of Terrorism, Violence and Extremism
3. Educational Causes of Terrorism and Extremism
4. Rapid modernization and urbanization
5. Discrimination on the basis of ethnic or religious
6. Repression by foreign occupation or colonial powers
7. Historical antecedents of political violence
8. Poverty & Economic deprivation
9. Undemocratic Governments
10. Free flow of weapons
11. Indoctrination
12. Hopelessness
13. Charities that Aren't Charities/ Business Terrorism
14. Training of non-military personnel

Effects of Terrorism
1. Political Instability
2. Psychological problems
3. Social problem
4. Poverty
5. Unemployment
6. Backwardness & Illiteracy
7. Lack of Social Safety Network
8. Inflation
9. Economical Drop down
• Direct economic impact of terrorist attack
• Economic Impact on Financial Markets
• Economic Impact of Defense and Homeland Security Spending
• Economic Impact on Supply Chains
• Economic Impact on Foreign Investment
• Economic Impact on Export/ Import products

Solutions to rid the world of Terrorism
1. keep a check on extremist Clerics
2. Stop to flow of terrorist funds
3. Need to be focused on the solutions to social problems
4. Strive to facilitate and provide the opportunity for youths
5. Develop new programmes to harness the energy of youth
6. Securing Defenses
7. Remove misunderstanding of Islam
8. Media should pay a positive role
9. Establishment of High caliber Intelligence network
10. Empowerment of federal agency
11. Intelligence wing should have strong leadership

Conclusion

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@sibgakhan
its too long. make it short n exclude irrelevant matter. keep in mind u have limited time in paper. u will not be able to write a good one if will not precise. and time and energy both are limited there. and i think u believe in quantity rather than quality. i am not expert but this is so according to me, just for discussion.

Best regards

thanks...

yes i agreed, its too long can u plz tell whts irrelevent material?

@mussaa

wht are the mistakes?

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Aalam-e-soz o saz main, wasl se barh ker hai firaaq
Hijr me lazt-e-talb, wasl main marg-e-arzoo...!!!

Short form: I excluded some irreverent points, though I m confused
Can some one answer in detail all of my queries asked in first thread):

Terrorism
Introduction:
1 what is Terrorism
2. Definition from the Arab Convention for the Suppression Terrorism
4. Types/forms of Terrorism
• State Terrorism
• Bio Terrorism
• Cyber Terrorism
• Nuclear Terrorism
• Suicide terrorism(psychological warfare)
Islam and prohibition of Terrorism:
1. Meaning of word ISLAM: derived from word “Salam” meaning: peace
2.Quranic Verses
3.Ahadith
4.Examples from Islamic History
Terrorism past & Present Scenario:
4. Terrorism as a Religious Imperative
5. Trends in Terrorism
6. The Future Terrorist Threat
Causes of Terrorism:
1. Social and political injustice
2. Psychological Causes of Terrorism
3. Educational Causes of Terrorism and Extremism
4. Rapid modernization and urbanization
5. Discrimination on the basis of ethnic or religious
6. Historical antecedents of political violence
7. Poverty & Economic deprivation
8. Undemocratic Governments
9. Free flow of weapons
Effects of Terrorism:
1. Political Instability
2. Psychological problems
3. Social problem
4. Poverty
5. Unemployment
6. Backwardness & Illiteracy
7. Lack of Social Safety Network
8. Inflation
9. Economical Drop down
Solution:
1. keep a check on extremist Clerics
2. Need to be focused on the solutions to social problems
3. Strive to facilitate and provide the opportunity for youths
4. Develop new programmes to harness the energy of youth
5. Securing Defenses
6. Remove misunderstanding of Islam
7. Media should pay a positive role
8. Establishment of High caliber Intelligence network
9. Empowerment of federal agency
10. Intelligence wing should have strong leadership
Conclusion:

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Aalam-e-soz o saz main, wasl se barh ker hai firaaq
Hijr me lazt-e-talb, wasl main marg-e-arzoo...!!!

First of all your topic of the essay is so vague, it can be the topic at bachelors level asking for you general idea about terrorism. I am sure, you are preparing for CSS and if such is the case you have to be specific for the topic. Next time while selecting topic, it must be from past papers of CSS.

Now comes to the topic as you have discussed. In my view one should prepare relevant material for almost 10 to 12 topics thoroughly. So I am taking terrorism in those terms.

Here I have refined your outline head by head to make it relevant, cohesive and comprehensive. No brevity is required while topic is prepared in detail.

Below is the revised version of your essay outline.

These are the main heads you discussed so all these should be elaborated seperately.

1. Introduction
2. What is terrorism?
3. Islamic Perspective
4. Terrorism: Present and Past
5. Root causes of terrorism
6. Effects of terrorism
7. Ways to combat terrorism
8. Conclusion

Detailed description

1. Introduction
   
2. What is terrorism? (Definitions + Quotations from different journals)
   
3. Islamic Perspective
   • Quranic Verses
   • Ahadith
   • Islamic History
4. Terrorism: Present and Past (Describe it in one or 2 paragraphs but if you have good material then you can go for sub-headings as well)
   
5. Root causes of terrorism
   
   • Social and political injustice
   • Extremism
   • Lack of Education (low literacy rate)
   • Extremism and ethnicity
   • Historical antecedents of political violence
   • Poverty, Inflation and Economic downturn
   • Non-democratic government
   • Militancy and Anti inter-religion harmony sentiments
   • Lack of tolerance
6. Effects of terrorism
   
   • Political instability
   • Psychological Stress
   • Poverty and unemployment
   • Minimal FDI (Foreign Direct Investment)
   • Maximum International borrowings (Loans)
7. Ways to combat terrorism
   
   • Dialogue: A course to combat terrorism
   • Vigilant check on religious and social cleriks
   • Empowered Anti-money laundering Procedures
   • Media Support to propogate anti-terrorism sentiments
   • Secure defense mechanism
8. Conclusion

Other than dialogue all are your ideas but in refined form. So you can go for it this way.

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"When Allah leads you to the edge of the cliff, Trust Him Fully, only 1 of 2 things will happen either He will catch you when you fall or He will teach you how to fly"

AOA mam, First of all i am thankful to you, for correcting my mistakes.

Yes i agree with you that my TOPIC is vague,actually what i was preparing "Terrorism in Pakistan" Still it is a vague so,next time Inshallha i ll choose topic from past CSS papers.

Acyually i read all these different types from Internet.Now after reading their Definitions it seems to me quite irrelevant here.So I remove them from my outline without thinking anymore.

No doubt, you gave a fresh & refined look to my outline.Now it looks in a complete balanced shape.Thanks again

I dint get this point please elaborate that how it is relevant to the topic?
Does this solution not pertinent to Corruption?

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Aalam-e-soz o saz main, wasl se barh ker hai firaaq
Hijr me lazt-e-talb, wasl main marg-e-arzoo...!!!

You are welcome and no need to say thanks.

Currently FATF (Financial Action Task Force, an international and inter-governmental body working to combat terrorist financing) has blacklisted Pakistan for not having developed proper checks in financial systems to preent terrorist financing. Actually money laundering is one of the major cause of concern for international commity as it provides blood to monster of terrorism. You can search further material on FATF website. Organisation for Economic Co-operation and Development

I hope its clear to you now.

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"When Allah leads you to the edge of the cliff, Trust Him Fully, only 1 of 2 things will happen either He will catch you when you fall or He will teach you how to fly"

Miss naqvi if u dont mind the irrelevant material according to me is
1. bio terrorism
2. cyber terrorism

first of all i am going to elaborate the term bio , it directly goes about living things means human and animals can be this irrelevant so..


another one is cyber
this is only a crime but not terrorism.. cyber concerns only internet , it effects us on the world level....



so plz give me suggestions .. about this critics..

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If faith is lost, there is no security and there is no life for him who does not adhere to religion.
Muhammad Iqbal

Do you mean that othen then this all the subheadings of her outline is relevant? Actually your say is quite confusing so I need eleboration.

Sorry I really couldnt get what you want to say.

When we are discussing bio terrorism it actually has no meaning. One can take it as per one's own understanding. While something is written in the essay paper it should be so clear and vibrant that reader must take it as writer means it. I mean both should be at the same frequency.

Cyber crimes effecting morally and ethically it has nothing to do with terrorism. Terrorism is a wider term that encompasses variety of crimes.

Dont know what suggestions I should give. I need your direct questions to give you suggestions.

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"When Allah leads you to the edge of the cliff, Trust Him Fully, only 1 of 2 things will happen either He will catch you when you fall or He will teach you how to fly"

i want to say that these all should be expressed in sub headings

crimes should be distinguished as they effects us as ethically or moraly..

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If faith is lost, there is no security and there is no life for him who does not adhere to religion.
Muhammad Iqbal