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I agree but a taste of Your own medicine is required in Composition and Current Affairs' paper. If you attempt your answer with advanced vocab in the both papers, you can have bundle of marks. The rest subjects are not needed to attempt your answers through advanced and abstraction. |
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I am giving you 13/16 marks Sara, you are doing well. You are a hard worker and if you carry on in the same way I assure you that you will achieve your destination, Insha'Allah. Your this attempt is well-done effort. It is apparent from your approach that you might have done diligent work in order to prepare for this topic. However, I would like to point out few things which I have witnessed while reading your topic. I find it every time during reading your attempts that you mention some such things which may arouse contradictions in the minds of reader. such as your this sentence, "Religion provides complete certain laws that how to spend life according to these laws which are made by particular Lord, god, goddess or Allah", not comprehensible for me. Likewise, there were few other which I could not get. All which I want to make you aware about is that be clear in your approach, don't mention controversial things, write to the point, don't try to go into trivial details of things, and be careful about grammatical mistakes. Your overall attempt is good. You have attained 11/16. You are really improving yourself, and your passion and ambition is functioning like a fuel to stimulate your zeal. Your this positive attitude is highly commendable. The thing which I like the most in you is your tolerance of criticism about yourself and to utilize it for rectifying your mistakes. This is the habit of real learners. I am of the belief that if you continue this endeavour with same zeal and enthusiasm, it will be a source of success for you and inspiration for others.. Regards Quote:
@Try to explain your topic with good examples. This is a question of 16 marks. You should have explained it using different dimensions. Certainly, the comparison of religion with science is not sufficient to provide description about the role of religion in human life. This provision could have been the one aspect of this topic, but it no way is entire topic. You should have mentioned that what is religion, what is its connection with human life, what is the purpose of man's life, what could be the practical form of submission for which man has been created, how the true knowledge of that submission/worship could be had, how religion influences man's social life and individual life, what are the negative effects of an irreligious way of living and likewise.. I AM GIVING YOU 8/16 MARKS. I hope that you will keep sending your attempts in the same way. And I request you to assess the work of all members who are sending their written work. It will be beneficial for us. Last edited by Shooting Star; Wednesday, August 29, 2012 at 06:42 PM. Reason: merged |
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Ammasiub (Wednesday, August 29, 2012) |
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I think this question should be answered by defining and explaining different major religions like Hinduism,Buddhism,Judaism, Christianity,and then a brief comparison of Islam with these religions. Am I right dear members?
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Yes, you are right. But keep in mind that 'critical analysis' does not mean that you have to mention about different concepts of worship in different religions, but it is also necessary to critically analyse them as has been demanded in question.
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Thanks a lot Shahreena, So nice of you. Thanks for checking my answer. Really you have made me grammar mistake less. InshALLAH I will try my best to answer concise in the 4th question. Your contributions are really amazing and outstanding. I have seen you are with us like an angle who guides us in right path. And your regular checking our whole attempts is really nice. InshALLAH you will see my next attempt with good and mature approach. Regards... |
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skybird (Friday, August 31, 2012) |
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Q:4- Critically evaluate the various concepts of Worship of the major religions of the world and compare them with the Islamic concept? (16 Marks)
Yes, Amasiub and Shakeel you are certainly right. First of all we have to discuss the world's major religions i.e, Christianity, Hinduism, Judaism, Zoroastrianism, Sikhism, Buddhism, Jainism and so on but concisely with their little history, background and their sources such as divine sources, holy books, evidences etc..then we will have to discuss them in connection with Islam for comparison. In comparison we will have to show the similarities and dissimilarities among them, and finally conclude it that Islam is the best religion, and yes support your arguments with evidence such as from Hadith, Quran, and also write down the contemporary circumstances regarding the religions. You can support your evidence and arguments with the quotations of lanpole or other western philosophers, ashar, verses, also ashar of Iqbal etc. it would be the excellent and to the point answer. I am just going to attempt it now InshALLAH. Thanks shakeel for pointing out my mistakes and assure me about them. InshALLAH I will try my best in the upcoming attempts to do good job. I wish you all the very best for active and new members. Thanks.... Regards..... |
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ALLAH BLESS YOU. |
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I was talking about Current Affairs. Read my words again I have got these marks in the result of 2011 attempt, its not an assumption like yours.
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It was not my assumption but telling you what is right path. One of my friend attained 73 Marks in Current Affairs last year. I also agree with you because every Cloud Has A Silver Lining.
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