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Default please rate my essay

i wrote on '' Pkistan's war on terror and its affects on psyche and socio-politico-economic fronts''
my outl ine was

1.Introduction
2. Definition of terrorism by EU, League of nations, FBI and diff scholars
3. types of terrorism(in the world and why, who, where )
4.types of terrorism in pakistan
a) National terrorrism
b) State
c) religious

(i mentioned areas, parties, provinces etc and everything and why,where,who. briefly)
5. pak-afghan population, their relation(pushtoons,tajiks, hazaras,uzbeks etc)
insecure boder etc (i wrote in detail but at this moment it is difficult to recollect the memory)

6. Evolution of terrorrism
a) soviet Russia invaded Afghanistan
b) Americas role and birth of mujahideens (in detail)
c) Civil war in Afganistan and rise of Taliban etc
7. 9/11 and pakistan's decision of joining AmericaŠ war on terror
8.Pkistan's contribution(2001 to 2009)
9. Effect of war on psyche(2 pages)
10. Challenges for pakistan on
a) social front (in detail 3 to 5 pg)
b) political(2 pg)
c) economic(3 to 5)

11) Suggestions to improve ....... may be condition (i forget) 2 or 3 pg
12) conclusion(1 page)
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i wrote on '' Pkistan's war on terror and its affects on psyche and socio-politico-economic fronts''
my outl ine was

1.Introduction
2. Definition of terrorism by EU, League of nations, FBI and diff scholars
3. types of terrorism(in the world and why, who, where )
4.types of terrorism in pakistan
a) National terrorrism
b) State
c) religious

(i mentioned areas, parties, provinces etc and everything and why,where,who. briefly)
5. pak-afghan population, their relation(pushtoons,tajiks, hazaras,uzbeks etc)
insecure boder etc (i wrote in detail but at this moment it is difficult to recollect the memory)

6. Evolution of terrorrism
a) soviet Russia invaded Afghanistan
b) Americas role and birth of mujahideens (in detail)
c) Civil war in Afganistan and rise of Taliban etc
7. 9/11 and pakistan's decision of joining AmericaŠ war on terror
8.Pkistan's contribution(2001 to 2009)
9. Effect of war on psyche(2 pages)
10. Challenges for pakistan on
a) social front (in detail 3 to 5 pg)
b) political(2 pg)
c) economic(3 to 5)

11) Suggestions to improve ....... may be condition (i forget) 2 or 3 pg
12) conclusion(1 page)
Overall your essay was good. You have addressed both the parts of the essay "Pakistan's war on terror" and "its effects on psycho/socio/politico/economic fronts''. I am hopeful you will score well InshAllah.
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i wrote on '' Pkistan's war on terror and its affects on psyche and socio-politico-economic fronts''
my outl ine was

1.Introduction
2. Definition of terrorism by EU, League of nations, FBI and diff scholars
3. types of terrorism(in the world and why, who, where )
4.types of terrorism in pakistan
a) National terrorrism
b) State
c) religious

(i mentioned areas, parties, provinces etc and everything and why,where,who. briefly)
5. pak-afghan population, their relation(pushtoons,tajiks, hazaras,uzbeks etc)
insecure boder etc (i wrote in detail but at this moment it is difficult to recollect the memory)

6. Evolution of terrorrism
a) soviet Russia invaded Afghanistan
b) Americas role and birth of mujahideens (in detail)
c) Civil war in Afganistan and rise of Taliban etc
7. 9/11 and pakistan's decision of joining AmericaŠ war on terror
8.Pkistan's contribution(2001 to 2009)
9. Effect of war on psyche(2 pages)
10. Challenges for pakistan on
a) social front (in detail 3 to 5 pg)
b) political(2 pg)
c) economic(3 to 5)

11) Suggestions to improve ....... may be condition (i forget) 2 or 3 pg
12) conclusion(1 page)
Wel dear,
your essay's outline is quite relevance. Dont you worry about conclusion. I am of opinion that conclusion should be on 10 lines. I am confident you will pass essay with flying colors.
Wish you best of luck.
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Faisal brother: I think there is no hard and fast rule for the number of lines or words for the conclusion. All depends upon the expression power of the writer and his skills to ďSamandar ko Konzy main band karnaĒ. So we canít judge whether the writer was able to conclude it in best way within 5 lines, 10 lines, or one page. Further, it depends upon the coverage of maximum points in the overall essay by the writer which may decide about the length of conclusion.


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Originally Posted by Dolokhov
1.Introduction
2. Definition of terrorism by EU, League of nations, FBI and diff scholars
3. types of terrorism(in the world and why, who, where )
4.types of terrorism in pakistan
a) National terrorrism
b) State
c) religious

(i mentioned areas, parties, provinces etc and everything and why,where,who. briefly)
5. pak-afghan population, their relation(pushtoons,tajiks, hazaras,uzbeks etc)
insecure boder etc (i wrote in detail but at this moment it is difficult to recollect the memory)

6. Evolution of terrorrism
a) soviet Russia invaded Afghanistan
b) Americas role and birth of mujahideens (in detail)
c) Civil war in Afganistan and rise of Taliban etc
7. 9/11 and pakistan's decision of joining AmericaŠ war on terror
8.Pkistan's contribution(2001 to 2009)
9. Effect of war on psyche(2 pages)
10. Challenges for pakistan on
a) social front (in detail 3 to 5 pg)
b) political(2 pg)
c) economic(3 to 5)

11) Suggestions to improve ....... may be condition (i forget) 2 or 3 pg
12) conclusion(1 page)
Have you copied my outline ??
The same was my outline, (19-20 ka faraq ho)
i also wrote on '' Pakistan's war on terror and its affects on psyche and socio-politico-economic fronts''
But i am afraid of one thing that i wrote only 12.5 pages including one page of outline. Approx 24-25 line per page and 6 to 7 words per line. almost 1700 words in essay. And there may be 20% grammatical mistakes.
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Default Thank u everybody for ur evaluation

i know one thing,my starting(intro) and conclusion were excellent but i was concerned abt the length
i prep terrorism n all issues related to it(domestic and international) but did prepared it properly(just read books and newspaper).

Actually i prep global financial crisis extrmly well and was very hopeful that it should be in paper
as far as material is concerned
it was given in the essay that what to write and how
even 40% of outline was given in the essay
so i think whoever attempted that topic one thing was clear that the material had to be almost same
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Faisal brother: I think there is no hard and fast rule for the number of lines or words for the conclusion. All depends upon the expression power of the writer and his skills to ďSamandar ko Konzy main band karnaĒ. So we canít judge whether the writer was able to conclude it in best way within 5 lines, 10 lines, or one page. Further, it depends upon the coverage of maximum points in the overall essay by the writer which may decide about the length of conclusion.


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Brother you are 100 percent right that there is no hard and fast rule either lines or words for the conclusion. But dear I imitates the DAWN NEWS paper style of conclusion. The conclusion can be ink on one line. However, it depends upon size and nature of material.
It is really an art and skill to conclude material. I echo your words ď Samandar ko konzy main band karmaĒ.
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if some1 didnt write outline in essay paper 2009......???????

wt would be result of his paper?
plz reply.........
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if some1 didnt write outline in essay paper 2009......???????

wt would be result of his paper?
plz reply.........

Well these days the examiner is not demanding the outline explicitly although it is impliedly understood that one has to write down an outline before one's essay.Therefore i think if your essay is up to the mark and you have missed the outline you Will pass but the omission of the outline would definitely cost you some marks.

Lets hope for the best.
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Well these days the examiner is not demanding the outline explicitly although it is impliedly understood that one has to write down an outline before one's essay.Therefore i think if your essay is up to the mark and you have missed the outline you Will pass but the omission of the outline would definitely cost you some marks.

Lets hope for the best.
Brother: Examiner has explicitly demanded outline in 2009 paper.

But even then omission of outline won't cost to a considerable extent subject to the best performance in the write up of essay.



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