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can u share your outline and introduction + conclusion of your essay CE-2012 energy crisis |
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thanks for Appreciation.
@Samreen Khan:
Thanks for your encouraging remarks. Be blessed.
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"obesity is root cause of all diseases"
Outline: 1. Defining obesity 2. Obesity being root cause 3. Diseases caused by obesity Cardiac diseases Blood diseases Lungs diseases Lymphatic system disease Muscle diseases Psychological diseases Hormonal imbalance Kidney diseases Reproductive system disease .(and so on ..) .. 4. International medical researches .. .. .. .. My outline was like above. I cannot remember it now. Infact, I read an article about obesity 6 days before the exams. Let see what happens with me. I am not a doctor. Just fsc (pre-medical) knowledge. My sentence were simple, correct . Rate my approach .. |
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Obesity is the root cause of all diseases.
Obesity is the root cause of all diseases.
Outline. Introduction What is Obesity? Prevalence of obesity in society Diseases caused by Obesity Diabetus Melitus Heart Disease Hypertension (high blood pressure) Diseases of Kidney Diseases of Liver Diseases of blood vessels(veins and arteries) Psychic Disorders. Causes of Obesity Eating too much food Eating unhealthy fatty food Lack of exercise Lack of awareness Hereditary factors. Impacts of obesity Impact on individual Impacts on Society and nation Why worry about Obesity Need to get Rid of Obesity ( Suggestions ) Need to devise comprehensive health policy Need to devise a nutrition policy Early Intervention Reduce consumption of fast food Establishing Obesity care centers and clinics Obesity Sensitizing Campaigns Conclusion. I attempted this topic in ce 2012....Seniors are requested kindly comment.
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Senior, comments please.
A critical analysis of the Education systems in Pakistan. Next in importance to freedom and justice is the idea of popular education without which neither freedom nor justice can be maintained. (A. Garfield) Introduction Importance Critical analysis: 1. Infrastructure 2. Poverty 3. Corruption 4. Lack of check and balance 5. Obsolete curricula 6. Privatization 7. No merit in appointment 8. Political intervention 9. Law and order problem 10. Tribalism 11. Lack of funds 12. Low budget allocated 13. Apathy to female education 14. Poor adult education 15. Attitude of indifference 16. Politicization 17. Lack of research 18. Poor state of higher education 19. Impact of disasters 20. Neglected technical education 21. Unfair exam system 22. Inequality 23. High dropout 24. Feudalism Impacts: 1. Unemployment 2. Extremism 3. Terrorism 4. Poor economic condition 5. Political instability 6. Social chaos Suggestions: 1. Check and balance 2. Implementation 3. Good governance 4. Effective planning and management 5. Role of media 6. Standardized primary education 7. Revision of curricula 8. Funding by NGOs, Universities and Govt 9. Technical education 10. Increased access to education 11. Merit based appointments 12. Education without politics 13. Female education should be paid attention along with adult education Conclusion
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It was about the Education SystemSSSSS of Pakistan, not the Education SYsteMMMMMM.
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TheUniter (Tuesday, May 22, 2012) |
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sumreen your starting of essay is not bad. but in introduction we have to take eye bird view on every aspect. you just focused on situation of masses, you ,missed role of govt. importance of energy, resources available in pak etc......
but that i know your ideas are heart touching and impressive . best of luck.......
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@Ainuddin kibzai.
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further, i had written about the word systems in introduction. then i collectively criticized all the systems. is it right? last question. if some one has not presented separate crititcal analysis of each system but has provided collective critical analysis of all systems, then is this right approach?
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Mortal Sin (Thursday, October 18, 2012) |
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hey all !
ma ny essay ma thori si gar bar kar di hai .. i have mentioned women's political and legal rights too along with social and financial though it was not asked . now i am very much worried some people are saying my marks would be deducted some saying otherwise . you people please pray for me .
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