[QUOTE=greenboy;695270]privatizing higher education , knowledge gathering or making money for opulent
purpose of privatization to bring innovation in institutions to raise standard of eduction advantages of privatization to raise quality highly qualified faculty disadvantage huge expenditure for faculty as well as maintenance reduce the competition among students promote quantity prefer to quality higher education in context of pakistan totl strength of institutions poor state of affairs lack of research and development for students visiting faculty instead of permanent high credit hour fees distribution of funds among board of goverance reforms rols of hec in judging criteria check and balance system conclusion[/QUOTE] [B]Brother i failed to see your counter argument in this outline , the essay was about whether you think this move is for the better or just another way for the rich to get even richer , and then u had to give logical reasons to back your argument. Regards.[/B] |
[quote=waqarhassan;695408]it was not about benefits or drawbacks of privatization.... They asked as where privatization impoved quality or its a source to earn money..... We had to justify any 1 of there two opinions.... Mentioning fruits and drawbacks was not required at all[/quote]
[b]agreed !![/b] |
i also choosed 1st topic
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i attempted sportswomen. my outline did not match with essay. it clearly shows that i have given more emphasis on developing sports facilities for women by enlisting causes and remedies for improvement of the same and given less space to rest of my essay contents in outline by just writing their main headings and not the subheadings. but i remember while writing essay i could hardly write 300-400 words on causes and remedies because of shortage of time and my total essay was not more than 1500 words excluding outline. further there was not any mention of prominent sport woman but cricket, hockey teams etc were generally discussed. seems bad attempt?????what others who have attempted the same essay say about it
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[QUOTE=Muhmmad Ali Raza;695428]i attempted sportswomen. my outline did not match with essay. it clearly shows that i have given more emphasis on developing sports facilities for women by enlisting causes and remedies for improvement of the same and given less space to rest of my essay contents in outline by just writing their main headings and not the subheadings. but i remember while writing essay i could hardly write 300-400 words on causes and remedies because of shortage of time and my total essay was not more than 1500 words excluding outline. further there was not any mention of prominent sport woman but cricket, hockey teams etc were generally discussed. seems bad attempt?????what others who have attempted the same essay say about it[/QUOTE]
I did the same thing brother. .:/ |
[QUOTE=Muhmmad Ali Raza;695428]i attempted sportswomen. my outline did not match with essay. it clearly shows that i have given more emphasis on developing sports facilities for women by enlisting causes and remedies for improvement of the same and given less space to rest of my essay contents in outline by just writing their main headings and not the subheadings. but i remember while writing essay i could hardly write 300-400 words on causes and remedies because of shortage of time and my total essay was not more than 1500 words excluding outline. further there was not any mention of prominent sport woman but cricket, hockey teams etc were generally discussed. seems bad attempt?????what others who have attempted the same essay say about it[/QUOTE]
Dear I attempted the same Essay! You can see my Outline at this link, Can you share your outline? Below is the link: [url]http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-past-papers/css-2014-papers/90062-essay-paper-2014-a-5.html[/url] |
I wrote on "Great nations win without fighting".
I opted to write against this topic. In introduction, I briefly discussed the broader meanings of "fighting" i.e indulging in military wars as well as struggling, competing, contending etc. From this view point, each & every nation must continuously fight with its rivals & competitors on different fronts (socio-economic fronts, cultural invasions, geographical, media wars etc...) for its survival as well as progress. After evaluating the topic from historic as well current perspective, I concluded by saying that nations can't even survive leave aside winning. Let's see what happens. I guess I wrote 1500-2000 words essay & could not get enough time to re-check the essay as I wasted more than an hour in topic selection & making outline etc. |
#7 nation win witout fighting is easy one with knowledge of history politics and economics , singapore, japan, uk , are examples of nations with achievment economically etc
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Ali, this is for sure theat the FPSC invigilators will never inform FPSC HQ about their blunder as they will face the music by doing so, I thing the right option is writing a letter to Secretary FPSC duly signed by the maximum possible affected aspirants of your centre, mentioning the scenario and requesting him to compensate the aspirants by marking/checking their essay as per mentioned tittle. we will do the same In sha Allah.
Seniors kindly guide us in this matter.. |
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