yes I know dear, but economic progress is what west also have. I thought to discuss only those things which west is seemingly failing in.. you are right and I regret not being so responsive while writing..

attempted the 2nd one.. took an hour to compile and make an outline.. total 1075 words written.. wud i be able to clear this paper?? 2ndly i wanna know that how do the examiner counts the words??means that does he counts words from 1st line or 2nd line to multiple with the page number and total lines???

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[QUOTE=alisaeed01;695321][FONT="Book Antiqua"]This was my last attempt and found it the worst. I never failed in essay yet this paper has buzzed me to my spine.

I attempted essay of number 6, 'Look to the east for a holistic progress' which proved to be very tricky. I did not attempt it in a typical way rather took it bit philosophical and in sociological perspective. I ignored very important aspects of the essays as most of the people here are talking about ASEAN, Japan, India and China.

Keeping Holistic progress I started off with the essay which runs as follows:

Outline:

1. Abstract
2. Literal and Philosophical meanings of Progress
3. Juxtaposing Human progress with the timeline
4. West Versus East: a comparative analysis

a. Philosophical progress during recent history
b. Political Aspect of the progress
c. Social Life in the East
d. Factor of Religion and Culture in the East

5. Progress that east has made (slower yet holistic)

a. Preserving and perpetuation of Social Institutions
b. Development of Multiethnic societies (Malaysia, India etc)
c. Political upheavals, systematic developments
d. Religion, Morality and Spiritual Growth in the East
f. Philosophical Base of West and East

6. Signature growth of the East
7. We are growers and reason for life- Gandhi about the East
9. Fukuyama's Future of our History
8. Conclusion

a. An overview of eastern nations
b. Concluding remarks


I am silent on what providence demands of us. CSS is a game of luck for those who keep on struggling and a science for those who get through it. I have found CSS very unpredictable which cannot be defined objectively.[/FONT][/QUOTE]


anyone!! please comment

Great Nations win without fighting is simply Dialogue is the best way to combat terrorism. Old wine in a new bottle. I thought most of the people (at least the sane ones) would attempt this essay in this perspective so I dropped the idea

I was tempted to attempt Post-modern ethos- a challenge to the West, its solution given exactly in the next line->Look to the east for a holistic progress! But I dropped this idea too because too much philosophy spoil the broth.

At last I attempted Great Nations taking a position against the topic. My thesis was Nations become great only by fighting and then winning. No winning without fighting. Examples: Rise of Islam, colonial powers bla bla.. Fight is not just traditional warfare but also economic, diplomatic and technological warfare. Realpolitik stuff..

Its quite tough for me to hndl dis mch info in a singal lenthy and tricky essay.. can anyone guide me to have a strong grip in writing essay becoz dis iz my only fear due to which i skippd my 2014 atmpt.. need asistnc n advice

brother you adopted a wrong appraoch
 

it was not about benefits or drawbacks of privatization.... they asked as where privatization impoved quality or its a source to earn money..... we had to justify any 1 of there two opinions.... mentioning fruits and drawbacks was not required at all

[QUOTE=Tayyab siyal;695230]Attempted the fifth one.

Post-modern ethos - a challenge to the west

Did anyone else here attempt the same?[/QUOTE]

I attempted the same essay. Can you please share your outline?

this was corrected in multan center but too after 1hr of paper start. i personally called the invigilator and scorned him on such a pathetic and poor management on part of FPSC. further i said him to convey our protest to FPSC. he said yes you can give us in written to be sent to secy FPSC. i said yes bring me a paper and i will get my protest recorded, later on he didnot bring the paper but said that we have co-ordinated your plea to FPSC staff and they have promised to give relaxations to candidates who have attempted this essay so huge hopes for those who went for this essay.

Record breaking paper.The aspirant who pass this paper surely they become commissioner in future,otherwise you enjoy in dreams.Only dreams made possible this.The person who already appointed they are lucky one.humary bari aye to Fpsc na nazar he badal.all paterns are changed.GOD bless u all.Manzil ke taraf nikalien hain to khaine pounch ga he.

Essay - 2014
 

Attempted;

''Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent" .:confused: