[QUOTE=Codename Hijazi;803927]1: The War on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights

2: Anticipation is often greater than realization

3: Punctuality is virtue of bored

4: The introduction of new digital technologies has radically altered identities

5: In a hierarchy every employee tends to rise to is level of incompetence

6: I disapprove what you say, but I defend to death your right to say

7: Luxury predecessors becomes the necessity of successors

8: When life throws you lemons , make lemonade

9: Govt Should eliminate subsidies and incentives for manufacturers and consumers of electric cars as they are costly and do not do enough to protect environment

10: Labor saving devices are more troublesome than they worth[/QUOTE]

Ye essay se ziada Expansion topics lagtay hain ! To me not a single topic is interesting enough to be attempted.
" I disapprove what you say ..." Taking them as essays I wonder how can one deal with it and other such topics ?
Essay no.4 is little better.

Well,Good luck fellows !

[QUOTE=Codename Hijazi;803927]1: The War on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights

2: Anticipation is often greater than realization

3: Punctuality is virtue of bored

4: The introduction of new digital technologies has radically altered identities

5: In a hierarchy every employee tends to rise to is level of incompetence

6: I disapprove what you say, but I defend to death your right to say

7: Luxury predecessors becomes the necessity of successors

8: When life throws you lemons , make lemonade

9: Govt Should eliminate subsidies and incentives for manufacturers and consumers of electric cars as they are costly and do not do enough to protect environment

10: Labor saving devices are more troublesome than they worth[/QUOTE]

Would serve as a filter.


Crammers :tata:tata:tata.

Creative :king:king:king

Management Students :):)

[QUOTE=kingfalcon;804320]I don't remember the exact detailed outline, but it was something like this:

Intro
War on Terror
Human Rights
Present situation of human right abuses
Causes of these human right abuses
Effects of human right abuses
Solutions to curb the abuse of human rights
Conclusion

I touched upon many things, e.g abuse of human rights due to laws, deaths, refugees, iraq/syria/afghanistan/pakistan/yemen, prejudice and hatred in west and muslims, notorious prisons, social/economic destruction, children's future, education, livelihood, etc etc

I wrote 1.5 pages outline and 6 pages on essay.. Spent too much time on outline so had to shorten the essay but I touched all the points related to abuse of human rights due to war on terror.

Do you guys think about 1500-1600 words is enough to pass it? Gave two nice quotations in the end as well.. I think they changed the max word requirement from 3500 to 3000, while keeping the minimum at 2500.[/QUOTE]

dont think too much about teh word count. word count should not be the focus; substance should.

isn't violation of human rights different to abuse.. abuse is misuse not violation in my opinion
for fourth topic one had to make a thesis statement what identity would be in his essay then discuss the globalization and impact of essay..

[QUOTE=shamiawan;804449]isn't violation of human rights different to abuse.. abuse is misuse not violation in my opinion
for fourth topic one had to make a thesis statement what identity would be in his essay then discuss the globalization and impact of essay..[/QUOTE]
In my opinoom Violation of Human Rights meant violations as per agreed protocols, Geneva Convention and other international treaties.

As I did not have the statements of these treaties in my memory therefore I did not attempt the question.

Or start from analyzing technological developments and their impact of morphing traditional identities to Digital identities and then move on with arguments, evidence, case studies and finally conclusion

In my humble opinion, defining every terminology is not necessary unless you are writing a thesis, formal report or legal language.

[QUOTE=sincer khan;803930]Whats this, a very difficult paper, only serial NO. 1 is easy[/QUOTE]

Completely agreed...
All new topics are included:thinking

seniors check outline .... :thinking
I may disapprove what you say may , but I will defend your right to say till my death
my stance was that i disagree with statement. because freedom ends where my nose start... freedom to say may create chaos which we r witnessing now a days
• Introduction
 Term explained
 Un declaration
 Pakistan constitution
• Consequences of free speech
 Charlie hebdo
 Yellow journalism
 Abusive language by political parties
 Satanic verse by terry john
 Allegation on ISI
 AIB Indian comedy program
• Recent statement of Pope of France about freedom to speech
• Reason for putting ban on speech
 To protect national security
 To save ones character
 To avoid shia sunni clash
 To protect national organization like isi
 To protect one belief and conviction
 To protect ones religion and respectable personality
• Steps needed to make limits on freedom
 Education on tolerating other’s belief and conviction
 Leaders must come on front as role model
 Role of u.n

[QUOTE=Sulehrix;804454]Or start from analyzing technological developments and their impact of morphing traditional identities to Digital identities and then move on with arguments, evidence, case studies and finally conclusion

In my humble opinion, defining every terminology is not necessary unless you are writing a thesis, formal report or legal language.[/QUOTE]
you may be right.. but how can one argue without posing a thesis.. There are more dimentions to the topic.. first is what sort of identities have changed if any, second in past whether they remained unchanged or changed with time, what were agents and compare those with those of modern digitised technologies only then could one satisfy the topic. its specifically mentioned in instruction to use exposition, argumentation, narration and explanation and other modes. How could one even narrate or given arguments with a thesis..

[QUOTE=bushra shakil;804637]seniors check outline .... :thinking
I may disapprove what you say may , but I will defend your right to say till my death
my stance was that i disagree with statement. because freedom ends where my nose start... freedom to say may create chaos which we r witnessing now a days
• Introduction
 Term explained
 Un declaration
 Pakistan constitution
• Consequences of free speech
 Charlie hebdo
 Yellow journalism
 Abusive language by political parties
 Satanic verse by terry john
 Allegation on ISI
 AIB Indian comedy program
• Recent statement of Pope of France about freedom to speech
• Reason for putting ban on speech
 To protect national security
 To save ones character
 To avoid shia sunni clash
 To protect national organization like isi
 To protect one belief and conviction
 To protect ones religion and respectable personality
• Steps needed to make limits on freedom
 Education on tolerating other’s belief and conviction
 Leaders must come on front as role model
 Role of u.n[/QUOTE]
Hmm I attempted the same. Essay requires proper exposition. Good luck with that!

[QUOTE=AzizHamza;804348]I attempted this essay topic and i believe this essay is incomplete without reference to Charlie Hebdo. It is because the essay topic in itself is the saying of Voltaire who was from France. My outline was "somewhat" like this:

Introduction
Voltaire and Freedom of Speech
Freedom of speech is a basic human right
Modern/western standards on freedom of speech
Hypocrisy in Europe when it comes to antisemitism
Charlie Hebdo incident in Paris
Stance of Pope Francis
Islam and freedom of speech
Incidents with Prophets and their responses
Are there ethical limitations?
Pakistan and freedom of speech
Attack on journalists in Pakistan (examples of hamid mir and raza rumi)
Views of Naom Chomsky on freedom of speech
(Support for freedom of speech)
What to do in certain situations?
Concluding remarks

Now i dont know if the examiner will like it or not but i supported freedom of speech through all means. Including Islam and response of Prophets.
I also supported it through charlie hebdo incident on how an almost bankrupt magazine which was working on debts became an instant hit and sold millions of copies in January 2015.
"Ignore" was my conclusion without getting violent as freedom of speech is a basic human right.[/QUOTE]
Well thought out outline.

I would say we can't ignore injustice.