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Another poem by me
Me azal se khali mitti hoon.
kia tum meri zaat bano gy? man dharti k is sehra me. junoo ki tm barsat bano gy? Jal thal krna hai ankho ko.. kaho kia inki aas bano gy? hasti Apni har Chuka hun? mil k meri maat saho gy? baten sari bhool gya hun, kia meri awaz bano gy? Me azal se khali mitti hu.. kia tum meri zaat bano gy? |
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Loved it,
Specially the main lines/verses. I'm not a poetry fan but I like this Me azal se khali mitti hoon. kia tum meri zaat bano gy?
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Jal thal kerne kleay aas banna zaroori nai hota balken ye 2 opposite khayalat lagtay hain, jahan tk main samjha.
Any way, nice poetry, pyara takhayul hy, keep it up. Also pay some attention to the evils of this society, ye bhi 1 section hy poetry ka. I am dead sure, you can do it. |
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" Wa tu izzu man tasha,,, Wa tu zillo man tasha " |
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very nice try.
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