My first story was a guy from troubled areas of Pakistan- lost his father owing to militancy-supporting family-works during day-studies at night-looking out of window late night and thinking would he ever be able to succeed and make a difference for his family- and then the usual formula story- winning a scholarship-get a degree job..

Actually years back I wrote the same story in ISSB and was recommended. So I thought it's tried and tested. Why bother making a new one

Second was mother-daughter. Daughter has exam coming so she often ignores her health- has disturbed eating and sleeping habits- comes for dinner but faints (in picture)- mother brings her back to senses and advises her never to ignore her health and well-being in future, how tough her study might be.

third one-army wala- returned from war zone- sleeping peacefully- being back after so long- women outside is his wife-while he was away she found out that their son has a heart condition- although treatable but had her worried- she didn't tell the husband while he was away- didn't want him to worry- couldn't tell him right after his return- now she is crying outside thinking how to break this to him.

all three stories look OK. About the second one, i am wondering if the daughter was really having trouble or just making excuses for the upcoming exams..

And yes, you should have had some mercy on the poor army guy because his son could have availed the best treatment from AFIC ( as his father is in army). I think he is going to be very angry at his wife by breaking this so late to him.. ( may be apni begum ko ye bhi keh day, tum nay bhang to nahi pe hoti? ya sara din HUM TV dekhti rehti ho !)..:P

I appeared in Islamabad. Agreed that it was not possible to complete all the MCQ's in 30 min. But I have learned from this experience that will benefit in practical life even if I failed to get through in MOD. Any idea how much time it will take in results.

I think it should not be more than 2 weeks.

Well, what made you assume the son is not being treated. The Dr in AFIC told her it is treatable

Cut the poor mother some slack, she has the right to worry even if the treatment is underway. She is worried how to break this news to her husband. Don't you see the 'overwhelming positivity' here . She puts others before her so she is worried to make him worried

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If he would have been treated in AFIC, his father would have known it ( army kay hasaptaal me army walay banday ka beta zere ilaaj ha or abba jaan ko pata hi nahi ...:P )


Yeah i salute this fictional mother created by you ..

My father is in army and he is never notified when any of us gets treated.

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And that is odd in a weird way.

Anyways, it was great having a fun talk with you. By the way, how did you manage the "agreeing" questions. I went for option 4, "Agree". for almost 35+ questions. Just shown them how "agreeable" i am

Not everyone is Pervaiz Musharaf that if he is being treated in AFIC the whole country and media remains on stand by.
They ask for medical card and treat. Fathers know because they are there to know, they are involved. Its not responsibility of doctors to inform them separately.


I strongly agreed or strongly disagreed to tell them how clear headed I am.

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You only told them how fanatic u r......!

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