Forum: Essay
Thursday, March 13, 2014
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Replies: 75
Views: 20,145
@irfan ali
Good effort dear i also attempted the same essay.Your statistical and comparative analysis is commendable but you have used the word Education most often.I think it would have been better if you had...
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Forum: CSS 2014 Papers
Tuesday, March 11, 2014
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Replies: 294
Views: 256,219
[QUOTE=irfan_ali;702852]My attempt:
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[QUOTE=irfan_ali;702852]My attempt:
Privatizing higher education generating knowledge:
Outline:
1. Introduction
2. A Statistical Analysis: State of higher Education in Pakistan
3. Views of...
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Forum: CSS 2012 Exam
Tuesday, February 07, 2012
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Replies: 14
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Forum: Essay
Tuesday, October 18, 2011
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,743
it needs a lot of time to pin point each and...
it needs a lot of time to pin point each and every mistake, your essay is not well-organized and systematic. I wonder if you could make outline first. It would be helpful for you to follow the topic...
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Forum: Essay
Tuesday, October 18, 2011
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,743
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Forum: Essay
Tuesday, October 18, 2011
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,743
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Forum: Essay
Monday, October 17, 2011
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,743
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Forum: Essay
Monday, October 17, 2011
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Replies: 15
Views: 2,743
weak opening line. it's not a sentence that...
weak opening line. it's not a sentence that should be opening your essay at all. what do you mean by 'not so good'? and how not 'so good'?
ok, conditions of justice got to do with everyone, not...
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Forum: Other Examinations
Saturday, September 03, 2011
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Replies: 741
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Forum: Essays
Monday, December 27, 2010
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Replies: 4
Views: 1,709
Nice effort. Coverage is satisfactory but...
Nice effort. Coverage is satisfactory but presentation is not upto the mark.
One major issue: You have presented lot of points in a mixed shape without presenting them one by one with proper...
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Thursday, November 25, 2010
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Replies: 9
Views: 13,502
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Forum: Essay
Tuesday, February 09, 2010
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Replies: 29
Views: 5,373
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Forum: Precis
Monday, February 08, 2010
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Replies: 70
Views: 18,721
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Forum: Precis
Wednesday, February 03, 2010
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Replies: 70
Views: 18,721
Need to resolve the problems----Good topic
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Need to resolve the problems----Good topic
The performance of the government in social sector of Pakistan is poor. The institutions responsible for providing services for well-being of the people,...
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Forum: Precis
Thursday, November 26, 2009
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Replies: 30
Views: 7,297
Thanks again brother Irfan Ali for your 2nd...
Thanks again brother Irfan Ali for your 2nd comment. I agree with you.
Try again and again by writting more precis and you will improve a lot. Overall I appreciate your precis. Keep it up.
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Forum: Precis
Friday, November 20, 2009
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Replies: 30
Views: 7,297
@theelegant444
Some comments:
Precis...
@theelegant444
Some comments:
Precis is not just the shortening of the passage. It is about incorporating all the ideas in short.
Education an agent of social change in the society
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
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Replies: 28
Views: 5,608
There is no shortcut to success
@ Irfan Ali
Brother, Well done! you have attempted nicely but, I am much confused to the extent that, how much length a paragraph should have? I think, when we are writing on paper it will be...
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Monday, November 16, 2009
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Replies: 28
Views: 5,608
@Irfan Ali
Sometimes it is really hard to...
@Irfan Ali
Sometimes it is really hard to criticize some writting. This is one of them. You have written to the point and accurate. A very good try.
However some suggestions:
1. Try to be a...
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Saturday, November 14, 2009
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Replies: 20
Views: 6,096
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Thursday, November 12, 2009
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Replies: 3
Views: 4,741
Variety is the Spice of life
Life is...
Variety is the Spice of life
Life is full of colors of different variety. Variety plays a vital role in our life and provide opportunity to choose hot or cold, spicy or sweet, salt or paper,...
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Forum: Essay
Friday, October 09, 2009
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Replies: 10
Views: 5,624
AOA
Although I am not a senior but I would...
AOA
Although I am not a senior but I would try to valuate your Intro on the basis of whatever experience I have accumulated throughout my career,
Bro for a start I have been observing your...
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Forum: Essay
Friday, October 09, 2009
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Replies: 10
Views: 5,624
I have mentioned the same in my post in these...
I have mentioned the same in my post in these words in line 2 :
The purpose for writing the above was to cover both contingencies mentioned in my original line quoted above.
Details are not...
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Forum: Essay
Thursday, October 08, 2009
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Replies: 10
Views: 5,624
Nice effort.
The only way to improve essay...
Nice effort.
The only way to improve essay is bt practice. The more you write, the better you can be. Following are some of the faults observed in your writing. It may be that you wrote...
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Forum: Essay
Wednesday, October 07, 2009
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Replies: 10
Views: 5,624
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Always try to initiate with the words...
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Always try to initiate with the words that appears sound and catches attention. You have a nice attempt, but you can also start with these sentences,
Democracy is the art of possible( the...
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Forum: Current Affairs Notes
Friday, September 11, 2009
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Replies: 7
Views: 4,227
Talibanisation!!!
Published by Jehangir World Times
@ Respected Moderators
Plz organize its display
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