Q.3
Ans: Application to the chief secretary of the provice for granting age relaxation on the basis of suitable reasons.


To,
-----------The Chief Secretary
-----------X,Y,Z

Subj: REQUESTING FOR AGE RELAXATION

R/Sir,

----------------It is submitted that I, named (X, Y, Z), S/o (X, Y, Z), belong to (X,Y,Z), am jobless and now my age has been over. Hence, I have been applying for different jobs in both; federal and provisional commissions, but on account of competition and private job I could manage to get job. Moreover, I qualified CSS exam twice but due to high merit I could not be allocated. Presently, I need a job but sadly, my age has been over now. Hence, It's been ages I am running from pillar to post for getting a job but yet I am unemployed. Moreover, I also cleared the writting tests of provisional exams for different posts but on account of malpractice, nepotism and corruption system of our province I was declared failed in the interviews.

-----------------It is, therefore, requested to grant me age relaxation, as government employed are also given two years age relaxation, nevertheless, I need only one year age relaxation to apply for the current jobs and I will work hard and will burn my mid night oils to qualify the exams. Hence, grant me one year so that I may be able to apply for the jobs. Thus, I am confident that your hounour will look into my genuine request in realistic perspective in light of the above facts, ensuring that my request is acceded to at your hounour's earliest convenience.


Dated: 7-4-2015---------------------------------------------Yours Obediently
----------------------------------------------------------------------X, Y, Z


@Raja Bahar and other memebers, please comment on my application, I attempted it like that, what do you think how many marks checker can give me and please rate my attempt, constructive criticism and suggestions will be appreciated.

Thanks in anticipation

Q.5 (5)

i) Accompanied with: Our Prime Minister was accompanied with the Prime Minister of UK for going Karachi.

ii)Look to: Pakistan is looking to China for financial support.

iii)Leave for: On account of my appointment I am leaving for Karachi.

iv) Please at: Please pic me at my home because I am feeling not well and am unable to walk now.

v) Comply with........I did it, but do't remmeber the sentence I think ye ghalat hogiya tha mera shayed. Sara time precis me lagadiya warna live by or confide in b ata tha


Please point out if any sentence is wrong...

Q: 4 (a) Meaning/Sentences

i) In Camera: Means secerete meating, it may be meeting between judge and criminals in court.

-Murderer brought in camera before judge.


ii) Bring some thing into effect: Means to apply a plan or any thing into proceed

-Our new boss brought a new plan into effect.


iii) Collect One's idea: To get ideas or to get information collectively

-I collected your idea, I will soon thing to act upon it. I hope it will help us in curbing the problems.


iv) Bat your eyes: Means to be careful; sharpen the eyesight

-Please bat your eyes in the dark, you can fall down anytime.

v) Take a Bath: Means take shower I think ye ghalat hogiya, I think ye woh shower he sadhu wala jo ganga me dubki lagate

You are tired, so please take a shower and get fresh ..

Please check my answers and let me know how many are corrects ...

I have doubt in the following quesitons. Please check them out and correct them. I deem them all innorrect, may be koi sahi hojae, part from these, all are correct

Spelling:

1-Deteriorate: Means bad to worse
-In current era, due to terrorism the condition of our country is going bad to worst, hence, we need to control the deteriorated situation.

2-Besiege
-Zahir din Babur besieged the Sher Shah Suri on the way of Vijaynagar.

3-She said to me "NO"
-She forbade me (not to do it)

4-Did you write the letter with ink?

5-She preferes winter Tosummer.........

6-He asked me will I be ready to help him
-He asked me would I be ready to help him?

7-I would rather come you tomorrow
-I will rather come to you tomorrow

8-Inspite he smokes twenty cigarettes a day, he seems quite healthy.
-Inspite of smoking twenty cigarettes a day, he seems quite healthy.

9-Why you are still in bed? It's time you get up.
-Why are you still in bed? it's time to get up.

10-We were all horrifying when we heared about the disaster.
-We were all horrifying while we heard about the disaster.

My four pair of words are correct. I could not spend a lot time in the above portion, thus at the eleventh hour I did it faster and made some mistakes.

Raja Bahar and other members please correct the above portion. Thanks in anticipation

Raja Bahar, can we use Pronoun "I" "We" in precis? If no/yes, then why? and please share your precis too.

Secondly, I did the question on "The ultimate message of Quran". I started with Quranic Ayat and concluded it with Quraninc Ayat. I gave solid references from Quran. The length was about three pages. I did not give any outline or sub heading, I treated it like we do in CSS expansion. What do you think how many marks will they award me? I attempted it to the point and gave four Quranic Ayats with pure translations in English.

1) write a letter in ink

2) He asked me if I would be ready to help him.

3) Why you are still in bed? It's time you got up.

4) I would rather come to you tomorrow.

5) We were all horrified when we heard about the disaster.

Rest are correct. I'm still confused about the narration of "She said to me, "NO" ".

Regards,
Stay Blessed

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Please comment on the rest of portions on application and idioms..

I can predict my minimum score now:

Q.1. Essay: 12+.....It was just perfect but I am making it minimum now

Q.2. Precis. 5 to 10 because I used Pronoun in precis may be it is wrong but overall my precis was okay and title is also correct one. I spent 40 minutes in this question!

Q.3. Application 10-12+(I have posted it, further your kind assessment will be appreciated to rate my write up.

Q4.a) Idioms...................... 4
b. Do as direct.................... 3
c. Spelling with sentences...3
d. Correction......................2

Q.5.a) POW.....................8......Four pairs were correct but in the fifth I made mistake in voracity, as veracity was correct but I know if one is incorrect means zero marks
b)Prepositions.................8....

My score would likely be 62+ or between 55 to 60 minimum.....Passing 33 par hay, at least I am in safe side now

3. She refused me.
9. Why are you still in bed? It's time to get up.

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i believe in Allah and he is the mere one who can help me...

It means why are wala b sahi he mera Are you sure?