Democracy foster Mediocrity

It is a paradoxical axiom that “Democracy Foster Mediocrity”. Because Democracy is the form of government, in which people's representatives perform according to the wishes of the people. The form of government which is for the people, of the people, and by the people; democracy, how it could go against the welfare of the people? But there are few prerequisites for the democracy if these aren't fulfilled than democracy could produce harm full result for the society. The education and public awareness at large for their obligations to wards the society and civic rights is the must for the democracy to flourish in the society if not than mediocrity could foster.
The western countries, especially Europe, is on the acme of prosperity and development, because absolute democracy prevails their. In these countries the representatives of the people are educated and well trained to serve their people and per mote their welfare in a broad way. On the other hand people in these countries are also well educated and aware of their civic rights and obligations; they are hardly cheated by the politicians. So the two ways process helps to promote political stability and socioeconomic progress in the society.
Conversely, in third world countries where poverty and education backwardness is on the verge could hardly take any sunny outcomes from the blessings of democracy. Democracy in such countries mostly turns into aristocracy. Ironically the elite and the feudal lords become the savior of the poor and dejected people, and take extreme benefit from their illiteracy and unconsciousness. In such society the so called representative of the people become greedy and corrupt. And dream of prosperity and development couldn’t be realized.
In nut shell, the democracy could flourish where the people are educated and mindful of their rights otherwise the democracy could foster mediocrity and, greedy and corrupt politicians could put the country in the vortex of darkness.

Very aptly written, but I would love to see one or two quotations added to your expansion then it will be called a piece of work.

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Sir (Sakk)
Thanks for your honorable and exciting remarks.Yes surely i would act on your precious advice.

Problems of education system in Pakistan

Education plays important role in development of the nation or country. Political stability and socioeconomic progress is brought by it. Education helps to aware the people about there national and civic rights and duties. Educated person knows his obligation to wards the country and try to build up the healthy society.
The biggest problem of Pakistan is its weak education system. According to experts poor education system is the major cause of political instability and economic backwardness in the country. Terrorism, which has shaken the very foundation of the country, is the product of poor education system and poverty.
Education system of Pakistan is confronting with many problems; lack of funds, corruption in education departments and inefficient utilization of the funds. Moreover the education disparity in the country has further aggravated the situation. The private or elite institutions are very expensive and impart education on western style. However the government’s education institutions have obsolete syllabus. The students of government institutes unable to cape up the standard of elite institutes in this way a huge bay creates and produces harming effects for the society.
Moreover the higher education institutions aren’t equipped to cope up with required standard. The stress is put on the subjective type of education and research is rarely done. The scrambling situation of the education is further aggravated by the government ill advice step to curtail 60% funds of Higher education Commission, which has been performed well for last 5 years to per mote education in country. Many developing countries; India and Fareast Asian nations put great stress on research and got the sunny outcomes. The education development scheme of these nations should be followed in order to make progress in this regarded.
The tumbling education system should be improved on war footing; the government as well as civil society should take active part to up hold the education in the country. Pakistan has plenty of natural and human resource. The need of the hour is to utilize the natural and human resources efficiently and effectively to develop the country. and in this regard standardized education could play act role other wise the country would hardly flourish.

Dear let me tell you these sort of topics are of not a great expectation to come in papers..... You can guess from previous papers...

2ndly in these trendy topics which have a little problmatic concerns or issue sot of crisis, they are very easy to write...

I would advise you to kindly take a topic like proverbial expression or a literature statement or quotation and then expand it
it would be a CSS worth expansion....Though your work luks nice as far as expression is concerned....

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Democracy foster Mediocrity

It is a paradoxical axiom that “Democracy Foster Mediocrity”. Because Democracy is the form of government, in which people's representatives perform according to the wishes of the people. The form of government which is for the people, of the people, and by the people; democracy(Omit), how it could (can it) go against the welfare of the people? But there are few prerequisites for the democracy if these aren't fulfilled than democracy could produce harm full(Spelling) result for the society. The education and public awareness at large for their obligations to wards the society and civic rights is the are a must for the democracy to flourish in the society if not than mediocrity could foster.
The western countries,especially Europe ( unnecessary), is are on the acme of prosperity and development, because absolute democracy prevails their there. In these countries the representatives of the people are educated and well trained to serve their people and per mote (Spelling) their welfare in a broad way. On the other hand people in these countries are also well educated and are aware of their civic rights and obligations; they are hardly cheated by the politicians. So the two ways process helps to promote political stability and socioeconomic progress in the society.
Conversely, in third world countries where poverty and education backwardness is on the verge could hardly take any sunny outcomes from the blessings of democracy. Democracy in such countries mostly turns into aristocracy. Ironically the elite and the feudal lords become the savior of the poor and dejected people, and take extreme benefit from their illiteracy and unconsciousness. In such society the so called representative of the people become greedy and corrupt. And dream of prosperity and development couldn’t (can never) be realized.
In a nut shell, the democracy could (can) flourish where the people are educated and mindful of their rights otherwise thedemocracy could (will )foster mediocrity and, greedy and corrupt politicians could put the country in the vortex of darkness.

• ·I have tried to highlight few grammatical errors, I suggest you buy a good grammar book, and keep practicing in order to make your writing better.

• ·As far as the passage is concerned, you have expanded well. Try using the Phrase “Democracy foster trust” when you are talking about the western democracies, it would make the passage seem more meaningful, and better structured.
  

·Your work is good, but you need more practice, keep working hard.

All the best

@Vicky Well good suggestions from your side.

@KhanZada Well keep trying,IN SHA ALLAH you'll do it

I have highlighted the line which is acutally a quotation but not arranged properly

You can use any of these:

“Democracy is the government of the people, by the people, for the people”
Abraham Lincoln
Democracy means simply the bludgeoning of the people by the people for the people.
Oscar Wilde

Democracy is finding proximate solutions to insoluble problems.
Reinhold Niebuhr

All the best

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Thanks: sabur and vick for your's such a productive suggestion.

I have been occasionally visiting the forum for last 2 years, but it was my first ever attempt to write a short essay in this forum. I am hopeful to enhance my writing skill through the auspicious guideline of the experienced member of this forum.

To rishzzzz
Sir, i know such topics are rare in CSS, but i want senior to underline the expressional and grammatical mistakes.

Please give below expansion's a try so your approach get solid on literary expansion as well.

1. Eternal vigilance is the price of liberty.

2. If winter comes, can spring be far behind.

3. Give all thy ears but few thy tongue.

Looking forward to it and have a great day.

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