Religion is the greatest benefactor of human race

Religion is a set of beliefs, nature and causes of the the existence of this universe,all the creatures and also the belief on the supernatural power Who solely have the authority on this universe and humane.

There are many religions in this world and every one has his own characteristics. Every religions have his rites and rituals. If we study all religions then we will come to know that religions are the greatest benefactor of the human. we can better understand if we see his benefits. The greatest benefit of the religion is that it give the spiritual growth. One can reach to the spiritual growth by finding the answers of the purpose of the existence of this universe and the man himself. But if someone is really have the desire to reach the truth then one will surely get the answer of this difficult question in Islam.
religion is the greatest source of increasing fraternity, brotherhood, love, peace etc between the peoples.
It consoles the people in the time of distress and grief and one can also get mentally peace by following the direction to lead a good and peaceful life.
It creates harmony between people and enhance creative thinking in human.
It is also a biggest source of physical health. In Islam a Muslim offering five time prayers and by following the principal of eating, drinking can be healthy. An of course a healthy mind is in healthy body.
Religion tell to a man what is goodness and what is evil. When a person will be able to differentiate between goodness and evil then he will automatically be able to get other advantages.

There are some grammatical mistakes as usage of pronouns and sentence structures and verb number. Moreover, you must speak in general while making a general statement. While talking about ISlam, you could have stated that ISlam is a complete code of life and provides guidance in all spheres. Then you should have given examples as in economic sphere ISlam rejects Usury which will also be rewarded in life hereafter. Every religion has certain norms apart from religious rituals which help man live a contended life. Islam also prohibits a life of seclusion which means man must live in society and marry and reproduce. This will lead him to perform his duties as father, brother, son etc and fulfill rights of mother, wife, sister and daughter. This strengthens family bond which is ultimately a great benefit for humans.

So try to explore your mind and be creative while writing. Consider all dimensions of the topic and jot down what is more important. And concentrate in grammar in the first place.

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Thanks a lot dear Sir, I'll try to keep these point in my mind and next time will try to cover all dimensions under your guidance. Thanks again sir, for giving your precious time.