Good one. You have done well. But, learn to use tenses correctly.

Dear, Braveheart.
One more thing to be noted. Your very sentence;
It keeps on changing with one’s strives.

Strive is a verb only. You can't use it as a noun. Do tell me if I am wrong.

And,

Quaid-e-Azam ,who strived (Past simple is STROVE) for his nation and was with them through every thick and thin,which resulted in the freedom of a separate nation as Pakistan.

You better rearrange it too.

Thanks

1. The Bough that bears most bend most''

Life should be ordained on the principle of ,''moderation''.Excessive of every thing is bad leading the way towards choas.Often ,it is said humbleness fruits creating peace among societies and clans.But ,prolonged inhumane attitude and brutality originate sense of deprivation.This phenomenal act of tolerance first lead towards bending in order to rise against oppressant .so the bough that bends most often break .


We have witnessed changes through the course of history ;evolution and revolution.The most abrupt ,bloodiest changes were revolutions.people were massacred ,fired ,bombed in Iranian revolution like wise in the Age of Renaissance.we have also observed the most recent Islamic revolution in Muslim countries that underwent cold blooded murders and genocides .These violent attitudes have been sprung because every action has a reaction.

The Tyrants have their self -interests and lust ;that governed their attitudes and direct them to gain by whatever means ,right or wrong .so their ambitions direct them to oppress people .some of the people knee down to what ever they ask and demand .but a few people rise against these cruelities.These lead towards a conflict leading a society towards chaos.

In general , bending never give fruit because its ultimate ending is violence.so societies ,families and clan are in conflict with each other . These conflicts result in violence .

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"Wa tu izzu man-ta shaa, wa tu zillu man-ta shaa"

Do write on it.

Action Speaks Louder Than Words.

Quite well, done. Some grammatical mistakes are coloured and written in bold.

The Tyrants have their self -interests and lust ;that governed their attitudes and direct them to gain by whatever means ,right or wrong .so their ambitions direct them to oppress people .some of the people knee down to what ever they ask and demand .but a few people rise against these cruelities.These lead towards a conflict leading a society towards chaos.

Write this Para Either in Past or Present. It creates confusion.

You could have done better.

Overall Well Done.

Cut Your Coat according to your Cloth''


Contentment is an Islamic junction prescribed to Muslim Ummah for multi-purpose benifits .This implies that one should have to remain in between the limits of profligacy and hoarding.when a person keeps his expenditure according to his income ,he remains satisfied .The materialism provokes among masses lust to buy above then their purchasing power .This situation has caused lending on the basis of interest , that in turn has created in-debted society.That's why Islam has taught us moderation ,the key element spending a prosperous life.


The rule of moderation is applicable in all the institutions of government; family,politics,economy and religion. It forbids extremes in a particular system.And it also applies to the individual of society.one should have closer ties with neighbours but never give away secrets to them .


Hazrat Ali (R.A) had taught to his subjects that one should restrained between these two extremes . He ( R.A) remained contented through out his life and never aimed to get more and more wealth or power . Infact ,greed ,lust are theirselves evils but lead towards other sins like murder ,forcination and devastation of community .That's why ambition is considered a moral sin.

"The Tragical History of Dr.Faustus'', by Christopher Marlowe lights on this paricular theme. The hero of that play had wanted unlimited power and wealth and stood against Might .And negated the power of Might and made fun of Holy scriptures .In the end ,he had to face disappointment which hindered him to ask for forgiveness.And the state of hopelessness destined hell for him .

"Till swollen with the cunning of self- conceit,
His waxen wings could not mount above his reach,
And melting heavens conspired his over throw.
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The theme of greed ,ambition and lust have lessons for us .These characters in man creates hoplessness and extremes.And man becomes insane for his ambition.He tries to get all the things by wrong means .so contentment is blessing in guise which creates humane attitude in man.

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"Wa tu izzu man-ta shaa, wa tu zillu man-ta shaa"

Suggested corrections have been coloured.

Well done

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Suggested corrections have been coloured.

Qutoe sayings of Holy Quran and Hadis before any other reference.

Overall very well done

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Best end of life is not knowledge but action.
Don't limit yourself to what you think people are expecting!

Thanks, Dear. Yes, NO MORE is an adjective. And, Is HOPE DWELLS wrong?

Are you sure? Isn't it an adverb? In my opinion, 'no more' should be followed by some other word. 'No more' means 'no longer'. Now 'life becomes no more' doesn't making much sense. It may be like: 'Life becomes no more attractive'

'There hope dwells' is right but 'There dwells hope' is a better expression. Follow the link below to observe the use of this expression .

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Best end of life is not knowledge but action.
Don't limit yourself to what you think people are expecting!