Originally Posted by SADIA SHAFIQ

1. The Bough that bears most bend most''

Life should be ordained on the principle of ,''moderation''.Excess of every thing is bad leading the way towards chaos. Often, it is said that humbleness fruits creating peace among societies and clans. (Meaning is not clear) But prolonged (Don't use commas unnecessarily after 'But') inhumane attitude and brutality originate sense of deprivation.This phenomenal act of tolerance first leads towards bending in order to rise against oppression. So the bough that bends most often breaks. (Take care of tenses. In present indefinite tense, third person takes s/es after verb)

We have witnessed changes through the course of history ;evolution and revolution.The most abrupt ,bloodiest changes were revolutions. People were massacred ,fired ,bombed in Iranian revolution like wise in the Age of Renaissance. We have also observed the most recent Islamic revolution in Muslim countries that underwent cold blooded murders and genocides .These violent attitudes have been sprung because every action has a reaction.

The Tyrants have their self -interests and lust that govern their attitudes and direct them to gain by whatever means, right or wrong. (Don't use different tenses for same idea. If 'direct' is in present, 'govern' should be used instead of 'governed') So their ambitions direct them to oppress people. Some of the people knee down to what ever they ask and demand. But a few people rise against these cruelties.These lead towards a conflict leading a society towards chaos.

In general , bending never gives fruit because its ultimate ending is violence. So societies ,families and clan are in conflict with each other . These conflicts result in violence .

Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

Originally Posted by SADIA SHAFIQ

Cut Your Coat according to your Cloth''


Contentment is an Islamic junction prescribed to Muslim Ummah for multi-purpose benifits .This implies that one should remain in between the limits of profligacy and hoarding. ('Should have to' is not a correct expression/tense) when a person keeps his expenditure according to his income ,he remains satisfied .The materialism provokes among masses lust to buy above than their purchasing power .This situation has caused lending on the basis of interest , that in turn has created in-debted society.That's why Islam has taught us moderation ,the key element spending a prosperous life.


The rule of moderation is applicable in all the institutions of government; family,politics,economy and religion. It forbids extremes in a particular system.And it also applies to the individual of society.one should have closer ties with neighbours but never give away secrets to them .


Hazrat Ali (R.A) taught to his subjects that one should be restrained between these two extremes . He ( R.A) remained contented throughout his life and never aimed to get more and more wealth or power . Infact greed and lust are themselves evils but lead towards other sins like murder , fornication and devastation of community .That's why ambition is considered a moral sin.

"The Tragical History of Dr.Faustus'', by Christopher Marlowe lights on this paricular theme. The hero of that play wanted unlimited power and wealth and stood against Might. He negated the power of Might and made fun of Holy scriptures .In the end ,he had to face disappointment which hindered him to ask for forgiveness.And the state of hopelessness destined hell for him .

"Till swollen with the cunning of self- conceit,
His waxen wings could not mount above his reach,
And melting heavens conspired his over throw.
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The theme of greed ,ambition and lust have lessons for us .These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes. Man becomes insane for his ambition.He tries to get all the things by wrong means .So contentment is blessing in guise which creates humane attitude in man.

Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

Make hay while sun shines.

Every work suits at(suit at.Is it a phrasal verb.I have not come across such a verb before) accurate time. One should hit the iron when it is hot. In Pakistan, Farmer sows seeds of wheat in the month of November and harvests in the Month of June or March. Every crop has its particular season. So, every work has its particular time. If one hastes or delays, he(use of indefinite pronoun with personal. Can we use them together?) loses the chance and time. Once, time is lost, it never comes back.

In winters; the birds come from North, to spend time in different wetlands and deserts of Pakistan. These birds start flying on this way in month of November. February is the high time and By march they start flying back home, towards their native habitats. It shows, their Particular timing. Indeed, Nature follows the time.

Farmer makes its hay while the sun shines. If he doesn't do so. His cattle shall starve and die of hunger. And, he shall regret his delay and idleness. On the contrary, if business man(a businessman) doesn't sell his stock in particular timing and season. He(,he) will be lost and face disadvantages. As Golda Meir says, "I must govern the clock, not be governed by it."

Pakistan is going through critical crises. It is because, people of Pakistan didn't make their hay when the Sun was shining.One knows worth of water when well is dry. Day follows day. New sun is arising. Pakistan should make its hay. Otherwise, lost time never comes and History loves to repeat itself.

By: Xuhaib Ahmed recently written by 5:15


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Dear, Check it and Give MARKS.

Originally Posted by usman khalid

Suggested corrections have been coloured.



Some Suggestions:

Use past indefinite tense to describe/mention past events.
Take care of spellings.
Don't use 'And' frequently in beginning of a new sentence. You may either combine the next sentence with previous one and thus converting two sentences into one sentence or make a separate second sentence by using 'Also' in place of 'And'.
For example, here are two lines from your expansion:

These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes.And man becomes insane for his ambition.

You can write it in one sentence as:
These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes and man becomes insane for his ambition.

Or you can write it in two sentences as:
These characters in man creates hopelessness and extremes. Also man becomes insane for his ambition.

Hope you get my point.

Overall very well written.
Try avoiding repeated mistakes of grammar/tenses/sentence structure.

Originally Posted by Anum Bashir

Man is architect of his own fortune

Many of us believe that everything is predetermined in life and nothing can ever change it.But it's not so, man is the masterpiece (Write, man is crown of creatures.) created by Allah. Allah SWT has bestowed man with various capabilities, he as given the power of reasoning, he is enabled to design and groom his own fate. (Re-arrange it.) it's he himself who chooses that what he wants in his life.
Those who wait for change to occur itself without putting any effort will never be exalted in life and will suffocate to death in dark pit of woe and disappointment Try to make simple sentences.) .But those who work steadfastly will surely be confronted with felicity. It is very obvious that when one adheres to the hard work, determination and devotion, these take him one) to the throne of success. The larger the effort one comes up with the higher are the chances of his success. As Thomas jefferson said "I am a great believer of luck and i find the harder i work the more i have of it".
So a man can surely turn himself into whatever he wants to be those who are brave and venturesome will definitely succeed while others will suffer with the glumness and compunction of their own choice!! (Make short and simple sentences.)
So it is very true to say that a man's fate is solely in his own hand and it totally depends on him that what and how he wants in his life.



i am not satisfied with this at all eventhen m posting it here, members plx check and point out my mistakes!
and can any one plx translate it in english 4 me??
TU MUSALMAAN HO TOU TAQDEER HY TADBEER TERI!!

Originally Posted by SADIA SHAFIQ

thanx a lot dear usman brother for explainig it in detail.

Why we have to use past indefinite instead of past perfect ? Any rule? Because it indicates long time ago past where past perfect is used.


You have explain how we can join these two clauses . I got it . You can point out types of these clauses ? Or we can put them in to the box of independant and sub-ordinate clause.

Othet mistakes are acknowledged !

Thanx being here....

Originally Posted by zuhaib ahmed

Make hay while sun shines.

Every work suits at accurate time. One should hit the iron when it is hot. In Pakistan, Farmer sows seeds of wheat in the month of November and harvests in the Month of June or March. Every crop has its particular season. So, every work has its particular time. If one hastes or delays, he loses the chance and time. Once, time is lost, it never comes back.

In winters, the birds come from North to spend time in different wetlands and deserts of Pakistan. These birds start flying on this way in month of November. February is the high time and by march they start flying back home, towards their native habitats. It shows their Particular timing. Indeed, Nature follows the time.

Farmer makes its hay while the sun shines. If he doesn't do so, his cattle shall starve and die of hunger. And, he shall regret his delay and idleness. On the contrary, if business man doesn't sell his stock in particular timing and season, he will be lost and face disadvantages. As Golda Meir says, "I must govern the clock, not be governed by it."

Pakistan is going through critical crises. It is because people of Pakistan didn't make their hay when the Sun was shining.One knows worth of water when well is dry. Day follows day. New sun is arising. Pakistan should make its hay. Otherwise, lost time never comes and History loves to repeat itself.

By: Xuhaib Ahmed recently written by 5:15 [/COLOR]

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Everyone is requested to check it, Specially Usman Khalid.
Dear, Check it and Give MARKS.