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.There can be a few mistakes but what I can say; I LOVED IT. .There are too many quotations. Aren't there? . An example could flourish and beautify this extremely. . Overall, fantastique it was. . Keep it up. |
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Da Skeptic (Monday, October 22, 2012) |
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. You have good expressions but you had to talk a bit more about Self. . Two more quotations and an example could beautify the essence of expansion. . You have good way of expressing ideas. Keep it up. |
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Engr Shahid (Saturday, November 03, 2012) |
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Welcome back dear.. N by the way, m not Dr Skeptic, m Da Skeptic..
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zuhaib ahmed (Monday, October 22, 2012) |
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. Your word count is 218. There must be 250-300. . Overall good efforts. . Keep it up. |
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Engr Shahid (Saturday, November 03, 2012) |
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There are a few mistakes.. And I am happy that I made mistakes here, not in the exam.. Thus I have time and opportunity to uproot them.. And many bundles of thanks Zuhaib bhai.. I have got the analysis and comments of the worthy members of this forum, and I am going to make a final copy of the expansion now.. Thanks again.. Your appreciation gives me the courage to do more and better..
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zuhaib ahmed (Monday, October 22, 2012) |
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I have been reading it Dr. haha! Well, I got it. |
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It happens. You possess good grammar, knowledge and expressions. I hope, you will rock on. InshaAllah! |
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Da Skeptic (Monday, October 22, 2012) |
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Inshallah..
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zuhaib ahmed (Monday, October 22, 2012) |
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Another quotation could make it more presentable.. The mistakes are highlighted.. Those in green are mistakes, and those in blue are additions.. Keep practicing..
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